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Samajh na saka woh mera haal-e-dil kabhi
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Samajh na saka woh mera haal-e-dil kabhi - 5th January 2004, 08:40 PM

Samajh na saka woh mera haal-e-dil kabhi
Raah na dena chaha us ne mere dil ko kabhi

Tanhaayeeaan jiski hoti hai har waqt humsafar
Ban sa saka woh mere ek pal ka humraah kabhi

Ab to sirf sahaara-e-sabr hai baaqi
Kya karoon bin tere sabr bhi mumkin nahin kabhi

Hum mein bhi thi pur umeed-u-tamana kabhi
Kya khabar thi pigalta nahin folad sham se kabhi

[FOLAD : Steel] [SHAM : Candle]

Socha tha lada denge kunjish ko shaahen se
Kya khabar thi asar hota nahin shaahen ko kunjishk ka kabhi

[KUNJISHK : Chidya (bird)] [SHAHEEN : Eagle]

Khaak hai maujizaan is jahaan ki
Na mil saka yahan aab humein kabhi

[MAUJIZAAN : Waves]

Dhoond rahein the hum bhi ujala mohabbat ki raahon mein
Kya khabar thi in wairaanion ka khatma aata nahin kabhi

Socha tha nikaal denge tujhe dil se kabhi
Lekin kya kare jab bin tere qaraar na paayein kabhi

I have worked very hard in it & I hope u will like it


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Ufff... Yaar this shear really deserves to be appreciated... I loved it!
   
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7th January 2004, 09:51 PM

ohh Coolyaar ... Thanks 4 appreciating...
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2nd February 2004, 04:00 PM

Bohot khub likhha hein. Yaakin rakhiyega, kabhi na kabhi zaroor sunenge. Dilki aawaaz zaroor sunaidegi aur deti bhi hein. Hosla rakhiyega. Tahe dilse shukriya kabool kijiyega. Likhte rahiyega.
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4th February 2004, 03:58 PM

Shimul jeee...
first of all thanks aloootttt for reading my post... & after that thanks alot for appreciating....
Aur hosila afzaayee ke liye aur bhi thankss...
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4th February 2004, 04:51 PM

Itne sari thanks? Chale jee koi baat nehi hein. My pleasure. My pleasure & pleasure were all mine. Likhte rahiyega. Take care. God bless you.


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hi - 4th February 2004, 06:57 PM

hi

vow bhut hi acha likha hai aapne. bhut dard hai aap ki shari mai. its a really nice and beautiful poem. dil se kisi ko nikalna asaan nahi hota i think its almost impossible but still bhut loog koshish karte hai aur kuch is dard ke saath jee lete hai. kabhi na kabhi vo aapki awaaz ko zaroor sune gi aur mehsoos kare gi.

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5th February 2004, 01:01 AM

Aap sab ka bahut shukriya...
Haa kissi ko dil se nikaal dena to bahut mushkil hai.... par agar koi khud hi apni jaga kisi ke dil se kho le tooooo...?


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5th February 2004, 01:32 AM

Ek gana hein sune honge aap sab, Dushman na kare dost ne woh kam kiya hein umer vhar ka gum hume inaam diya hein, toofa meh humko chhodke sahil pe aa gaayen na Khuda ka na Khuda ka humne jinhe naam diya hein umer vhar ka gum hume inaam diya hein.......Lata Jee ki aawaaz meh thi. Dhoka agar koi de bhi de phir bhi hum unhe dilse mita nehi nehi sakte hein, kyu ke yeh Pyaar hein koi khel nehi. Agar sachha Pyaar ho toh kabhi nehi aisi hogi. Once you are in Love you are in Love forever. par agar koi khud hi apni jaga kisi ke dil se kho le tooooo...? Na mumkin hein. Chahe woh kitni bhi kharab shakhs kyu na ho! Phir woh dil hi keya jo kisi ko dil meh jaga de aur ushe nikal bhi de. Humhe agar kisi se Pyaar hojaayen chahe woh kitni bhi kharab harkate kyu na kare, dilse nehi nikala jaate hein, mumkin hi nehi hoti hein. Aap ka sawalka jawab milgayi hogi aapko. Haan, yeh aur baat hein ke woh Pyaar tha yea nehi, you should know better yourself. Agar meri koi bhi baatein bura laga ho toh mein mafhi chahti hu, but what I said that's all about True Love. Thank you. Take care. God bless you.


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5th February 2004, 07:14 PM

hii...
Shimul jeee aap ki saari baatein saheeh thi aur padh kar khushi hoowi ki aap ne mujhe itna kuch samjha diya...
Is liyein aap ka ek baar phir se shukriya...
Aap ki koi bhi baat buri nahin lag sakti thi kyunki aap ne sab kuch sach aur saheeh kaha hai...


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5th February 2004, 07:18 PM

Aapka bohot bohot shukriya meri baaton ko samajhne ka. Chale bohot khushi huyi ke koi toh samajh sake. Yeaha toh samajh nehi paate koi kisi ko. Tahe dilse shukriya ada karti chalo aapka. Likhte rahiyega. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.


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Hum bhi Shimul ke vichaar se sehmat hein...pyaar koyi eissi tasveer nahin hai ki jab chahe deewar par laga lete aur jab chahe ousse outar kar kissi kone main rakh lete...Hai na?

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5th February 2004, 08:39 PM

Nice to know. Thank you. Still confuse....... Good to know. Take care. God bless you.


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5th February 2004, 11:11 PM

Dhoond rahein the hum bhi ujala mohabbat ki raahon mein
Kya khabar thi in wairaanion ka khatma aata nahin kabhi

Socha tha nikaal denge tujhe dil se kabhi
Lekin kya kare jab bin tere qaraar na paayein kabhi

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Aapki ye lines mujhe bhi apni zindagi ke kuch aise sad times ki yaad dilata hai. Aapke har har alfaaz ne mujhe bohot deeply move kiya hai. Keep up the good work.
Hamesha aisa achcha likha karein, aurhamare liye bhi dua karein.


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6th February 2004, 12:28 AM

Shimul jee ki baaton ka to mujh ko abhi tak asar ho raha hai...
aur 'ummehani' aapka bahut shukrya ki aap ne yeh sher pasand kiye......
Aur meri doowayein to aap sab ke saath humesha hai... aur humesha raheingi.


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6th February 2004, 12:31 AM

Barkarar rakhiyega, good for future. Right? Thanks. Take care. God bless you.


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6th March 2004, 01:02 AM

Yes... Shimul Jee...
100% Right...
Pehle to aap ke post ne jis mein aapne 'True Love' ke baare mein likha tha, ne mujhe khud par ghusa aur afsos dilaya tha ki mein ab tak true love se anjaan tha lekin yeh sochta tha ki mein true love ke baare mein jaanta hoon...
Aapke post ke baad mein 'true love' ko bhi samajh gaya , aur is ko samajhne ki waja se mujhe aur bahut si khushiyaan mil gayi hai jin ka mein kabhi soch bhi nahin sakta tha ki kabhi mujhe woh khushiyan mil sakti hai...
Mein jaanta nahin ki aap ka kaise shukriya karoon...
Par phir bhi mera yeh chota sa shukriya qabool kar le, mujhe bahut khushi hogi...
Thanksssssssssssssss aloot... U brought all the happiness in my life that I could ever wish only from ur a post!...
U may be amazed wat am I talking about & how could the post bring such happniess in my life...
but believe me...
Aapki kahi hoowi baaton par chalne ke baad mujhe bahut kuch mil gaya...
Thank U Very Much


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hi - 6th March 2004, 07:40 AM

hi aapne behad acha likha hai..kabile tarif..dil ka dard kya shabdon me dhaala hai aapne.......touched my hrt

Tanhaayeeaan jiski hoti hai har waqt humsafar
Ban sa saka woh mere ek pal ka humraah kabhi

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thse lines meant the most to me.................reasons might be millions but that dont matter.
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Me jisko soch kar har raah teh karti rahi
Aaj mallom huya vo kabhi hamara humsafar kaha tha,
yu to znda hai aaj bhi hum,
bewafayi unki jaan to le gayi par, mere naam bana vo kafan hi kaha tha??
Dil ki mehfil ke shaamil to wo tha hamesha,
Par jo samajh sakta is dil ki baataain, voh vo sajan hi kaha tha?
hum hi they dewaane uske har ik lamha lamha,
hamari yaad me vo magan hi kaha tha??

i can go one forever..but i luved this peice of urs

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6th March 2004, 10:20 PM

Hii... LuvPriya
Thanks 4 ur reply... Aapke reply ne mujhe bahut khush kar diya kyunki mujhe aapki shayri behad pasand hai esp. 'Shayir Ka Khayal' ...
& Please complete your lines "Me jisko soch kar har raah teh karti rahi .... hamari yaad me vo magan hi kaha tha??
Mujhe bahut pasand aayi....
Thanks & Bye.....


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7th March 2004, 12:30 AM

Mujhe behadh khushi huyi yeh jankar ke aapko dher sare khushiya mili hein. Khuda Kare yunhi aapko khushiya milti rahe. Aur haan, mujhe mehsoos horahi hein ke aapse bhi jiyada khushi mujhe milgaayi ho jeise. You made me a very happy person, thank you. Meine aapka shukriya kabool kee hein. I am so happy for you. Khush rahiye yehi Duwaon ke sath izazat chahungi. Take care. God bless you.

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hi - 7th March 2004, 11:22 AM

hello...
kisi ne kitna sach kaha hai na ki mehnat zaroor rang laati hai...vakai mein aap ne bahut bahut bahut achcha likha hai....and i hope u get ur love soon and ur love realizes ke woh kya kho rahe hain.......aur kisi ne ye bhi bahut thik likha hai ki intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai.... ...keep writing...hope ke aapki agli nazm bahut aayegi...bye 4 now...take care!


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7th March 2004, 03:39 PM

Hello
Shimul & Shivani... Hisola afzaai ka bahut bahut shukriya aur reply ka bhi bahut shukriya...
& Shivani :::

Ab to sirf sahaara-e-sabr hai baaqi
Kya karoon bin tere sabr bhi mumkin nahin kabhi

Baharhall thank you all very very much...
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7th March 2004, 03:52 PM

Hii... Shimul...
If u r happy due 2 me... than wat else can I wish of....
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7th March 2004, 08:06 PM

I am. But you can wish for your True Love, right? Khuda kare aapko agar abhi tak nehi mili ho toh bohot jald miljaaye, yehi Duwaon ke sath izazat chahungi. Take care. God bless you.

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8th March 2004, 01:37 AM

Hii... Shimul JeeE...
hmm... right... I not only can but I m also wishing....
Baharhall bahut bahut shukriya aapke aise dua ka...
Meri doowayein humesha aapke saath rahengi...
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8th March 2004, 01:56 AM

You are a sweet heart. Well are we agreed? Duwa hamesha rahegi. Take care. God bless you. Allah Hafiz.

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Hii... Thanks alooot 4 that... & 100% agreed , Dua humesha humesha saath rahegii...
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Hii... Thanks alooot 4 that... & 100% agreed , Dua humesha humesha saath rahengii...
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8th March 2004, 12:42 PM

Do you think we should still say thanks? I don't think so. I hope we are agreed regarding this matter too. Khush raho yehi Duwaon ke sath izazat chahungi. Take care. God bless you.
Allah Hafiz.

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Hi...
Shimul...
Jee haannn ... u r right...
now no thanks ... only doowaayein ...
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very nice - 8th March 2004, 06:57 PM

very good!bahut accha hain!


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Hi.. Mausam...
Thanks alot 4 appreciation....


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Salamzz ...
wow aapne to bahut hi zabardast likha hai, yaqeen kare I have no words 2 explain that.
Mujhe bahut hi pasand aaya... really loved it...

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Re: Samajh na saka woh mera haal-e-dil kabhi - 13th July 2004, 06:46 PM

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Samajh na saka woh mera haal-e-dil kabhi
Raah na dena chaha us ne mere dil ko kabhi

Tanhaayeeaan jiski hoti hai har waqt humsafar
Ban sa saka woh mere ek pal ka humraah kabhi

Ab to sirf sahaara-e-sabr hai baaqi
Kya karoon bin tere sabr bhi mumkin nahin kabhi

Hum mein bhi thi pur umeed-u-tamana kabhi
Kya khabar thi pigalta nahin folad sham se kabhi

[FOLAD : Steel] [SHAM : Candle]

Socha tha lada denge kunjish ko shaahen se
Kya khabar thi asar hota nahin shaahen ko kunjishk ka kabhi

[KUNJISHK : Chidya (bird)] [SHAHEEN : Eagle]

Khaak hai maujizaan is jahaan ki
Na mil saka yahan aab humein kabhi

[MAUJIZAAN : Waves]

Dhoond rahein the hum bhi ujala mohabbat ki raahon mein
Kya khabar thi in wairaanion ka khatma aata nahin kabhi

Socha tha nikaal denge tujhe dil se kabhi
Lekin kya kare jab bin tere qaraar na paayein kabhi

I have worked very hard in it & I hope u will like it
U've worked very hard on it, and u've made a real good poem out of it...

Gr8 Job frnd!

Keep up the excellent work!

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14th July 2004, 12:46 AM

hIiiii....
thankss 4 the appreciation... u really encouraged me...
Bahut hi khishi hoowi ki u liked it...
Thanks 4 ur reply... koshish karoonga ki agli dafa is se behtar ghazal pesh karoon...
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& Hiii meenki
... thanks 4 ur apprecition... hmm... age par to I dont think ki yeh depend karti hai .... Anyways bahut bahut shukriya hosila afzaayi ka....


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