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Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai - 22nd September 2004, 02:52 PM

Sulagti Aahon ne mere Pyar ki Bali chadayi hai
Saanson ko Ashkon se bujhane Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai

Maazi ne kuch Nishaan chode thhey apne Kadmon ke
Unhi Raaston pe chalkar Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai

Jaagti Aankhon mein band hain kayi Tootey huey Khaab
Palkon ko Neend mein sulane Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai

Andheron mein Kaid hai Kitni hi Roshni
Waqt se usse choodane Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai

Tu Lakh Koshish kar le Sukoon paane ki ‘Roop’
Har Koshsih ko bigadne Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai


Main zakhm zakhm hoon phir bhi tujhe dikhayi na doon
tadap uthoon bhi toh zalim teri duhayi na doon
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22nd September 2004, 02:56 PM

Hi Roopali ji,

Dil mein ghar kar gayi aapki yeh nazm. Yeh lines toh bohot hi ziyaada pasand aayi

Sulagti Aahon ne mere Pyar ki Bali chadayi hai
Saanson ko Ashkon se bujhane Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai

Maazi ne kuch Nishaan chode thhey apne Kadmon ke
Unhi Raaston pe chalkar Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai

Bas dua kartey hai kay koi shaam aye aapki saari khushiya lekar aur chali jaaye aapkay saarey gham lekar


Luvs,

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Re: Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai - 22nd September 2004, 03:13 PM

roopali ji
kaisi hai aap?ek baar fir aapne laajawab kalaam pesh kiya hai...yun to poori gazal hi khubsurat hai,magar yeh aashar dil ko choo gaye...

Maazi ne kuch Nishaan chode thhey apne Kadmon ke
Unhi Raaston pe chalkar Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai

Tu Lakh Koshish kar le Sukoon paane ki ‘Roop’
Har Koshsih ko bigadne Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai

hamari daad kubool kijiye,,,isi khubsurati se likhte rahiye,,sada khush rahiye...take care
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Re: Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai - 22nd September 2004, 03:48 PM

meri pyari roop....fir se tumhe roop roop keh kar pukarne ka dil kar raha hai ki shayad sun k aa jao...aur

aur mere daman me sama jao...
kuchh aaraam paa jao..
kuchh pyar me bhi barsa du..
kuchh marham jakhmo ko
khud ke bhi laga jao..

oh..meri pyari roop
mere paas aa jao..

bhigti palko ko hawa de doo
dukhti rago ko apna saparsh de doo
tere jalte jazbaato ko
thori si thandak de doo..
aur kuchh na ho sake to..
apne anchal ki hawa de doo..

oh meri pyari roop
mere kandho pe so jaaoo..

ha.n roop yahi bas yahi khayaal aate hai...tumari ye rachna par kar...log tareef karte hai ...dard per...lekin mere aansu niklate hai...tumari halat dekhkar...shukr hai khuda ka ki tumhe ye niyemat bakhsheesh me de di..ki apne gamo ko kagzo per shabdo se kaala kar sako...tum maano ya na maano bahut fark parta hai is fitrat se bhi...bahut dard ko rahat milti hai...likh dene se... roop ant me fir yahi kahungi...kash me tumare paas hoti...

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hi - 22nd September 2004, 04:34 PM

Roopali ji,

Andheron mein Kaid hai Kitni hi Roshni
Waqt se usse choodane Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai


shaam ki baat jab yaad aati hai.. to lagata hai ki tufaan bas aane vala hai..aapki rachana bahut achchhi lagi..


likhati rahiye..


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23rd September 2004, 12:09 PM

Salim ji….

Bas yahi kahoongi…”Kaash”
Anyways….tx a lot for coming…bahut bahut shukriya mere kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye….tx

Take care


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Re: Re: Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai - 23rd September 2004, 02:57 PM

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roopali ji
kaisi hai aap?ek baar fir aapne laajawab kalaam pesh kiya hai...yun to poori gazal hi khubsurat hai,magar yeh aashar dil ko choo gaye...

Maazi ne kuch Nishaan chode thhey apne Kadmon ke
Unhi Raaston pe chalkar Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai

Tu Lakh Koshish kar le Sukoon paane ki ‘Roop’
Har Koshsih ko bigadne Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai

hamari daad kubool kijiye,,,isi khubsurati se likhte rahiye,,sada khush rahiye...take care
-MANOJ

Manoj ji….

Main theek hoon..n hope aap bhi theek hoge

Aapke reply ka hamesha intezaar rehta hai….jab takk aapka reply na mile lagta nahi ki kuch likha hai….

Bahut bahut shukriya aapka …..tx a lot

Take care


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Re: Re: Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai - 23rd September 2004, 03:03 PM

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meri pyari roop....fir se tumhe roop roop keh kar pukarne ka dil kar raha hai ki shayad sun k aa jao...aur

aur mere daman me sama jao...
kuchh aaraam paa jao..
kuchh pyar me bhi barsa du..
kuchh marham jakhmo ko
khud ke bhi laga jao..

oh..meri pyari roop
mere paas aa jao..

bhigti palko ko hawa de doo
dukhti rago ko apna saparsh de doo
tere jalte jazbaato ko
thori si thandak de doo..
aur kuchh na ho sake to..
apne anchal ki hawa de doo..

oh meri pyari roop
mere kandho pe so jaaoo..

ha.n roop yahi bas yahi khayaal aate hai...tumari ye rachna par kar...log tareef karte hai ...dard per...lekin mere aansu niklate hai...tumari halat dekhkar...shukr hai khuda ka ki tumhe ye niyemat bakhsheesh me de di..ki apne gamo ko kagzo per shabdo se kaala kar sako...tum maano ya na maano bahut fark parta hai is fitrat se bhi...bahut dard ko rahat milti hai...likh dene se... roop ant me fir yahi kahungi...kash me tumare paas hoti...

urs-udas

Di......
bas kya kahoon..aapka toh jawab nahin....sachi...u r grt.

well mere khayal bhi kuch aise hi hain..likhkar dil ko bahut sukoon milta hai mujhe...

ok di..chalti hoon....take care


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23rd September 2004, 03:05 PM

Akant ji....

bahut bahut shukriya yahan aane ke liye...mere kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye...tx a lot

take care


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Roopali jee bohot khub likha hai apne
Jaagti Aankhon mein band hain kayi Tootey huey Khaab
Palkon ko Neend mein sulane Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai

Andheron mein Kaid hai Kitni hi Roshni
Waqt se usse choodane Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai

Bakehi dil main ghar banagaya derd se bhara ye kalam
Kuch hum bhi likhna chahenge
Wo waqt abb gujra hua jamana ban gaya
Derd ka mere dil main pakka thikana ban gaya
Jahan kabhi basi thi murat mohabat ke khuda ki
Ajj wo mandir bhi ek maikhana ban gaya.

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24th September 2004, 05:38 PM

Wo waqt abb gujra hua jamana ban gaya
Derd ka mere dil main pakka thikana ban gaya
Jahan kabhi basi thi murat mohabat ke khuda ki
Ajj wo mandir bhi ek maikhana ban gaya.

Deewana ji..

bahut khoob...nice 1
anywaya tx a lot 4 coming here..bahut bahut shukriya aapka

take care


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Re: Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai - 22nd February 2005, 12:40 AM

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Sulagti Aahon ne mere Pyar ki Bali chadayi hai
Saanson ko Ashkon se bujhane Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai

Maazi ne kuch Nishaan chode thhey apne Kadmon ke
Unhi Raaston pe chalkar Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai

Jaagti Aankhon mein band hain kayi Tootey huey Khaab
Palkon ko Neend mein sulane Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai

Andheron mein Kaid hai Kitni hi Roshni
Waqt se usse choodane Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai

Tu Lakh Koshish kar le Sukoon paane ki ‘Roop’
Har Koshsih ko bigadne Phir Wahi Shaam Aayi Hai
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na jane kab maine aapke is kalaam se nazreN chook gaya ,,, bohat khoob likha hai aapne ye bhi ... meri daad teh dil se kabool karna ... waise khadim is kabil nahi ... par khud ko rok na paya ...

aapka sirf


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