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chirag bujha to... - 3rd October 2004, 10:32 PM

Wafa ko sish-mahal me saja liya maine
Wo ek dil jese pather bana liya maine
Ye soch ker kin a ho tak mein kushi koi
Gumo ki aut me kuth ko chipaliya maine
Kabhi na khatma kiya maine roshni ka safer
Ager chirag bujha to dil ko jala liya maine.


Jeene ka raaz maine mohabat mai paliya,
Giska bhi gum hua ussey apna liya.
Tum gum ka ek raaz bhi halka na ker sake
Maine kushi ke aadd mai her gum chupaliya
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4th October 2004, 01:13 PM

Kabhi na khatma kiya maine roshni ka safer
Ager chirag bujha to dil ko jala liya maine.


Bahut khoob!..bAHUT khoob!


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tadap uthoon bhi toh zalim teri duhayi na doon
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6th October 2004, 06:06 PM

Roopali jee
Housla afjai ke liya dil Sukriya .sukriya app ka jo appne humain iss kabil samjha. App aye hummare page per humain bohot accha laga. Take care

Ek Deewana


Jeene ka raaz maine mohabat mai paliya,
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vaah - 6th October 2004, 11:10 PM

EK DEEWAN JI ,

Aapka naam to nahi jaanta is liye aapko deewana keh ke bula raha hun bhai bahot achhi lines likhi hai aapne

Kabhi na khatma kiya maine roshni ka safer
Ager chirag bujha to dil ko jala liya maine.

is par mein bhi 2 lines kehne ki ijaazat le leta hun

AYE SHAMA TU BHI SEEKH LE HUM AASHIQON SE JALNA
YEH KYAA RAAT BHAR JALNA AUR SUBAH BUJH JAANA

ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE

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8th October 2004, 10:15 PM

Hi pyaasa jee
Sukriya hummary shayri ko padhne aur pasand karne key liye. App ka joda hua line humme bohot accha laga.
AYE SHAMA TU BHI SEEKH LE HUM AASHIQON SE JALNA
YEH KYAA RAAT BHAR JALNA AUR SUBAH BUJH JAANA
Asey hi likhte rahiye. Take care
Ek Deewana.


Jeene ka raaz maine mohabat mai paliya,
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hi - 9th October 2004, 10:52 AM

hi dewane ji
realy me aapne badi achi poem likhi hai i like it plz aage bhi aap ase hi lkhte rhega
   
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9th October 2004, 06:39 PM

Chandni jee sukriya jo app hummare page per aaye aur reply kiya.app ka asey hi saath milta raha to hum zaroor asey hi likhte rahenge. Take care

Ek Deewana


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