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wajah to batate.. - 22nd April 2003, 12:50 AM

Paas thhae aur door hogaye
N jaane kya thhi wajah...?
Achanak tum badal gayae.

Maanga thha ek bind pyaar ka
Chhalakta katora bataake pyaar ka
Pyaas ko meri badhaatae gayae
Achanak tum badal gayae.

Aashmaan maie bhi kohra chhaya
Aur andhera dil maie jaagae
Aise tum door gayae...
Zindgi se mano saans gayi
Yah kaise.....???kyun??
Bina koi wajah bataayae
Achanak tum badal gayae.
   
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hi - 22nd April 2003, 01:12 AM

bura mat maaniyega shayad aap ko
Surprise dena hoga isliye bina wajah.........


Abidhussain!!
Apni marzi se kaha apne safar ke hum hai,
Rukh hawaoo ka jidhar ka hai,udhar ke ham hai.
   
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achaa laga - 22nd April 2003, 01:18 AM

dost mehbuubji,
aapka nazaria pasand aaya. maie jaroor is par sochungi. ho sakta hai aap sahi ho.
   
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22nd April 2003, 03:06 AM

bahot khoob, bahot khoob
waise zaada cheezeN 'surprise' hi hesiiyat se hi to milti hai.. jaise ki pyaar, dard, maut, khushi (the list goes on)..

chaliye, is kavita ki baat kareN, to baDi khoobiyat se aapne jazbaat pesh kiye haiN..

aapke lafz behad pasand aaye!

likhte rahiye,
aman



"je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa,
te bibba saada dil moD de..!"


kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN..
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22nd April 2003, 04:22 AM

Salaam Meena,

App kasein hain? Aur ye poem tho bohut piyaari hai.Log hamesha achaanak hi badal jhatein hain...par khabi khbai ye change acha hota hai.


Aashmaan maie bhi kohra chhaya
Aur andhera dil maie jaagae
Aise tum door gayae...
Zindgi se mano saans gayi
Yah kaise.....???kyun??
Bina koi wajah bataayae
Achanak tum badal gayae


tc
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Rani


Log Kehtein hain mujhe aadat hai muskurane ki,
Par woh yeh nahi jaante ki yeh bhi ek adaa hai gam chupaane ki.
   
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great one...pain..
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great one...pain.. - 22nd April 2003, 12:43 PM

Didi aap ka jawab nahin kya likhti hain aap...
aap ne to jazbaton ka storm utha diya mere dil mein...
kya khoobi se apne dil ka haal bayn kartin hain...
bahot dard tha

Maanga thha ek bind pyaar ka
Chhalakta katora bataake pyaar ka
Pyaas ko meri badhaatae gayae
Achanak tum badal gayae.

Aashmaan maie bhi kohra chhaya
Aur andhera dil maie jaagae
Aise tum door gayae...
Zindgi se mano saans gayi
Yah kaise.....???kyun??
Bina koi wajah bataayae
Achanak tum badal gayae.

Didi aise hi likhti rahiye...


Fanah.......
For her....
By her...
   
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30th April 2003, 09:23 PM

Meena ji bohat hi khoob likha hai aapne...

ise padhker apne ek khas dost ki yaad aa gayi aaj... jise kabhi bhoolte hi nahi...

khair...
mubaarakbaad aur shukriya qubool kijiyega ise pesh kerne ke liye...

likhti rahiye aur muskuraati rahiye...


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1st May 2003, 09:47 AM

namaste.. meenaji...

aaree kaise hoo yar app ..
sach mein bahut accha likha hai apne.. tareef ke liye shabdon ki kami hai yar...

keep it up...

bye take care


Lamha Lamha...saSein Khatam hoo rai hai...
Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai...
Us bewafa se na pucho meri maut ki wajah...
Woh to bus zamane ko dikhane ke liye roo rai hai...
   
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bahot shukriya - 3rd May 2003, 02:30 PM

dost amanji aur rani,
maafi chahti hu, bahot dar se aapka shukria ada kar rahi hu. aapne mujae saraha aur mere ahesaas ko pasand kiya. aapka tahae dil se shukriaaaaa. hamesha aapki raay chaungi.
   
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maffi chahti hu - 3rd May 2003, 02:33 PM

fanah,
didi ko maaf karna, badi dar ho gayi shukria ada karne maie. tumne jo tarif ki hai mere dard ki oos ke liyae bahotttttt aabhari hu.
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thanx & sorry - 3rd May 2003, 02:36 PM

bedil ji,
aapka shukria aapne is nachij ki nazam ko saraha. aur mafee chahti hu dar se shukria adaa kar rahi hu. aagae bhi mujae mere ahesaaso ko sarahogae isi aasha ke sathh.....
   
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dost - 3rd May 2003, 02:37 PM

dost tanhai ji,
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx mere dard ko saraahne ke liyae.
   
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