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Angry Aansu - 8th May 2003, 06:06 PM

AANSUO SE PALKE BHIGO LETI HOON
YAAD TERI AATI HAI TO RO LETI HOON
SOCHA KI BHOOLA DOO TUJHE MAGAR
HAR BAAR FAISLA BADAL DETI HOON...


Aapke shaher ka mausam suhana lage,
Aapki ek shaam chura lun agar bura naa lage,
Aap chahe to bhula de humko,
Par aapko bhulane mein shayad hame zamana lage....


Chadha hai aaj bhi uska Rang, jisne kabhi Ranga hi nahi :-)
   
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8th May 2003, 06:12 PM

pari aap ke alfaz suh ekdum pariyon jaise hi nazuk hain...

AANSUO SE PALKE BHIGO LETI HOON
YAAD TERI AATI HAI TO RO LETI HOON
SOCHA KI BHOOLA DOO TUJHE MAGAR
HAR BAAR FAISLA BADAL DETI HOON...

pari aap ke lafzon mein bahot dard hai...
welcome to shayri.com...

aise hi aati rahiye...aur humein taron ki sair karati rahiye...
khudahafiz....


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8th May 2003, 08:30 PM

bahut likha hai aapne pari ji
aapke kalam ko humara salam
likhti rahiye ..


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good one - 8th May 2003, 08:40 PM

pari,
yahi to pyaar hai....
woh kare jafa ....
aur hum karte rahe wafa

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8th May 2003, 09:05 PM

bahut likha hai aapne pari ji
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likhti rahiye ..


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8th May 2003, 09:55 PM

bahut likha hai aapne pari ji
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thanks - 9th May 2003, 06:08 PM

Shukriya aap sab ki is zarra nawazi ka....aap sabhi ko is nayi dost ka aadab....

"gum hi gum hai jeevan mein khushiyan humko raas nahin,
dosti hui aiso se jinse milne ki aas nahin"
Pari..


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9th May 2003, 06:31 PM

pari aap itni udas kyon hain...itta udas hona bahot buri baat hai...
pari aap ke ehsas bhi pariyon jaise hain...
plz aap itni udaas mut raha kariye...apne naye doston ki khatir...
we are waiting for u'r next post....
hope to get u soon.....


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hi - 12th May 2003, 06:28 PM

Thanx a lot fanah ji.........
likhte rahiye isi tarah...
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hi - 12th May 2003, 06:43 PM

hi parri ji
bohat khob likha aap ne,,
magar dosra band ,,
yeh to koi song hay
u must give credit appropriately
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