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Tera saath -
13th May 2003, 03:43 PM
Ab tu hi bata main hu tanha
ya tu mere saath hai tere haathon mein hai meri zindgi meri maut bhi tere haath hai Kuch bhi de jawaab tu Kuch bhi kar tu faisla mere bas mein ab mera dil bhi nahin tere bas mein har ek baat hai Tu dur hai to zindgi kaali andheri hai sanam tu paas hai to meri zindgi chaandni ek raat hai Mera dil hai ek sehra jise pyaas hai har pal teri tera pyaar mere vaaste chaahat bhari barsaat hai |
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13th May 2003, 03:57 PM
namaste mahimaji...
wah yar kya likha hai ... dil ko chu gaya.. specially these lines r gr8 --> Ab tu hi bata main hu tanha ya tu mere saath hai tere haathon mein hai meri zindgi meri maut bhi tere haath hai Tu dur hai to zindgi kaali andheri hai sanam tu paas hai to meri zindgi chaandni ek raat hai aise hi likhte rahiyega. bye and take care.. Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai... Us bewafa se na pucho meri maut ki wajah... Woh to bus zamane ko dikhane ke liye roo rai hai... |
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13th May 2003, 04:12 PM
Shukriya.......for ur love......TANHAI
EK SAPNA EK EHSAAS BAAR BAAR KYA HAI? MERA TOOTNA MERA BANANA BAS TUMHAARE HI SAATH! Yeh sher mera to nahi magar bahut pasand hi mujhe,,,,so aapko bhej rahi hoon pyaar se |
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nice written.. |
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nice written.. -
13th May 2003, 04:48 PM
Hello Mahima,
behad achchhi poem hai aapki. mujhe pasand aayi. ek line aapke liye.. bahoot khubsurati se apane shabdo ko piroyi hain. jo baat chhupi hai dil mein use asko se bhigoyi hain Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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