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Love Tera saath - 13th May 2003, 03:43 PM

Ab tu hi bata main hu tanha
ya tu mere saath hai
tere haathon mein hai meri zindgi
meri maut bhi tere haath hai

Kuch bhi de jawaab tu
Kuch bhi kar tu faisla
mere bas mein ab mera dil bhi nahin
tere bas mein har ek baat hai

Tu dur hai to zindgi
kaali andheri hai sanam
tu paas hai to meri zindgi
chaandni ek raat hai

Mera dil hai ek sehra jise
pyaas hai har pal teri
tera pyaar mere vaaste
chaahat bhari barsaat hai


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13th May 2003, 03:57 PM

namaste mahimaji...

wah yar kya likha hai ... dil ko chu gaya.. specially these lines r gr8 -->


Ab tu hi bata main hu tanha
ya tu mere saath hai
tere haathon mein hai meri zindgi
meri maut bhi tere haath hai


Tu dur hai to zindgi
kaali andheri hai sanam
tu paas hai to meri zindgi
chaandni ek raat hai

aise hi likhte rahiyega.

bye and take care..


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13th May 2003, 04:12 PM

Shukriya.......for ur love......TANHAI



EK SAPNA EK EHSAAS BAAR BAAR KYA HAI?
MERA TOOTNA MERA BANANA BAS TUMHAARE HI SAATH!

Yeh sher mera to nahi magar bahut pasand hi mujhe,,,,so aapko bhej rahi hoon pyaar se


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nice written.. - 13th May 2003, 04:48 PM

Hello Mahima,

behad achchhi poem hai aapki. mujhe pasand aayi. ek line aapke liye..

bahoot khubsurati se apane shabdo ko piroyi hain.
jo baat chhupi hai dil mein use asko se bhigoyi hain




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