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Question jaane kis cheez ki talab hai......... - 24th August 2003, 05:41 PM

Muddaton se ek khalish see hai dil mein
jaane ise kis cheez ki talab hai

harr taraf sannate,harr shay mein mayoosi
jaane kaun see ruth aane ko hai

harr khwab dhudhla,har raah mein gumraahi
jaane meri manzil ka pata kya hai

kehne ko tho harr taraf hai logon ka hujoom
jaane in mein apna kaun hai

dunyadari ki khatir muskura tho lete hain
jaane ek muskaan ke peeche kitne ashq(aansu) dafn hain


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25th August 2003, 10:38 AM

Aadaab Heena ji...
kaisi haiN aap...?

bohat achcha likha hai aapne...
kalaam meiN dard-o-kashish ka basera nazar aata hai...
aur aapne bohat khoobsurat andaaz meiN sawaalaat kiye haiN...
aapke zehen meiN kash-ma-kash saaf nazar aa rahi hai...

per ek baat kahooNga k in sawaaloN ka jawaab sirf aapke hi paas hai aur koi inke jawaab nahi de sakta...

daad qubool kijiye...

likhti rahiye aur muskuraati rahiye...


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Re: jaane kis cheez ki talab hai......... - 25th August 2003, 01:23 PM

harr taraf sannate,harr shay mein mayoosi
jaane kaun see ruth aane ko hai

kehne ko tho harr taraf hai logon ka hujoom
jaane in mein apna kaun hai

dunyadari ki khatir muskura tho lete hain
jaane ek muskaan ke peeche kitne ashq(aansu) dafn hain

aadab heena ji
dil ko choo lene wale zazbaat likhe hai aapne...waqai insaanon se bhari is dunia mein koi ek apna milna bhi kitna mushkil hai...
hamari daad qubul kijiye...aur aise hi likhte rahiye...
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25th August 2003, 04:38 PM

bedil ji,
is naam se aako pukarte hue acha tho nahin lag raha par kya karen hum aapke naam se nawaqif hain!is liye maafi chahtee hoon!aapne shayad theek kaha ho sakta hai jawab mere paas hee hain !neways aapke reply ka bohot bohot shukriya!aap yunhee reply dete rahen tho zaroor likhte & muskurate rahenge!once again thanx a lot


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25th August 2003, 05:33 PM

manoj ji,
jitnee bhi koshish karle par aap jaisa umda nahin likh sakte!neways mere jazbaton ko samajhne aur is kalam ko sarahne ka shukriya!


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25th August 2003, 11:03 PM

Heena ji...

itna bura naam bhi nahi hai...
khair jaise bhi hai mujhe bohat pasand hai...
to behichak isi naam se pukaariye...

aur muaafii maaNgker sharminda na kariye...

aur fiqr na kariye hum yuN hi reply karte rehne ki koshish kareNge...

aap bus likhti rahiye aur muskuraati rahiye...


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26th August 2003, 02:16 PM

Heena......khuB kaha apne bhi...insaan ke naseeb mai akhir mai kya milata hai woh, woh hi jane....kyo kis liye pata nahi...ap ki baat se hume janaB Nida fazli sahaB ki gazal yaad aa rahi hai...pesh hai

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har taraf bhaagate dauDate raaste
har taraf aadamii kaa shikaar aadamii


roz jiitaa huaa roz marataa huaa
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zindagii kaa muqaddar safar dar safar
aaKhirii saa.Ns tak beqaraar aadamii


rukhsat hota hu...ek rahaGiR....


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26th August 2003, 04:39 PM

bedil ji,
mera yeh blkl matlab nahin tha ki bura hai!bas aap ka reply dekh ke jaana ki aap tho bohot bada dil rakhte hain!is liye bedil pukaarna munasib nahin laga!aapko bura laga ho tho i'm terribly sorry!mujhe plz maaf karr dijiyega!ek gustaakh ki guzarish hai


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26th August 2003, 05:47 PM

arps_mai,
yeh hamaree khushkhismati hai ki aapko pasand aaya!aur han yeh ghazal mujhe bhi bohot pasand hai!if i'm not mistaken nida ji ki is ghazal ko jagjit singh ne badee khoobsurti se gaya hai!neways thanx a lot 4 replying!


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26th August 2003, 10:31 PM

arreee Heena ji…
mai to bus mazaak kar raha tha.. aap to seriously le gayiiN meri baat ko…
aap muaafii maaNgker sharminda na kariye…
gustakhi to mujhse ho gayii…

asal meiN chahta hooN k aap mujhe ‘bedil’ kehkar hi pukaareiN isliye aisa kaha…
aur bura maanne waali nafz to hai hi nahi mere ander…

muaafii ka talabgar hooN…

muskuraati rahiye…


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27th August 2003, 07:00 PM

bedil ji,
aage se aapki baton ko seriously nahin lengelolz!yeh bataiye ki aap kis baat ki mafi maang rahe ho?agar aap ko yeh naam itna hee pasand hai tho isi naam se pukarenge!is mein hamen aitraz kaise ho sakta hai!aapki khushi mein hamaree khushi!neways!aapse phir kisi post par mukhatib honge!tab tak tc


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28th August 2003, 12:30 AM

Heena ji...

are ye kya... mai to bhool hi gaya k maine kis baat ki muaafii maaNgi...

abhi jaata hooN...
apna khayaal rakhiye...
aur muskuraati rahiye...


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bedil jee,
agar yaad aa jaye tho bata dena!lolz aap bhi apna khayal rakhiyega


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