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tumse ruthh kar....... - 31st August 2003, 02:06 AM

Tumse ruthh kar dekh liya maine
Apne aap se bichad kar dekh liya maine.
Kiyae thhae jo wade, khaai thhi jo kasmae
Oonhe tod kar dekh liya maine
Waise to kasame tut ne se kuchh nahi huaa
Haan, dil maie dard ko baste dekh liya maine
Tumse ruthh kar dekh liya maine
Apne aap se bichad kar dekh liya maine.
Kali raat k saaye ne ghera hai muje
Nind ko koso door jaate dekh liya maine
N din badla ae dost, n raat badli jara bhi
Haan, apne shukun badalte dekh liya maine.
Tumse ruthh kar dekh liya maine.
Apne aap se bichad kar dekh liya maine.
   
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31st August 2003, 09:02 AM

hassaas, sachchay, purkhaloos aur dardmand dil logon ka yeh almiya hai ke voh chahen bhi to doston aur pyaaron ka naa bhula sakte hain naa un ki yaadon se chukara haasil ker sakte hain. bas ghut ghut ker merte hain na jeete hain.

dost aap ke kalam ki yeh khaasiyat hoti hai ke voh her shakhs yah kam se kam mein to aisa mehsoos kerta hoon jaisa ke yeh mere dil ka haal meena ne keh diyaa.

anyway thanks for this wonderful poetry and hope you will continue writing like this.

wishing you all the best

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31st August 2003, 09:39 AM

mushi dost,
dost..... aapne sach kaha hai k.... na hum apno ko bhul sakte hai na parayo ko......
mere ahesaas aap ko is kadar chhu gayae k yah aapko apne lagae... is se badi kya baat meri nazam k liyae?
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31st August 2003, 02:27 PM

menaaa ji

itana saara aur inta achchaa kaise likh dete hai aap?//

har roz nayaa andaz main likhna sabhi ki bus ki baat nahi...

really nice... tumse ruth kar......

gulieeeeeeeeeeeeeee


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31st August 2003, 03:24 PM

drgulieji,
jis tarah aap taarif naye andaaj maie kar lete hai... oosi tarah ham nazam likh lete hai......
shukria aapka...
   
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31st August 2003, 03:36 PM

Meena jee,

mei musharraf jee ki bat ittefak rakhta hun. Aap sach me ham sab ko zuban deti hein. Bahut acha makta hei jispe aapne behtareen likha hei.


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इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
   
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31st August 2003, 03:40 PM

dardji,
aap mushi dost se sahemat hai....... ab aur kya kahu? oonki to baat hi yah hoti hai k hamesha oonhone meri nazam ko saraha hai...
aap ki tahe dil se shukr gujaar hu jo meri nazam ko is tarah saraha.
   
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31st August 2003, 03:44 PM

Meenajee,

mene ye dekha hei agar aap us zuban me likhein ya bat karein jo logon ko awaj de to wo sach me bahut achi lagti hei sab ko. Aap dil se likhti hein. aapki bat zara aur hei meenajee. very natural and simple but very effective.

Shukriya nahin kijiyega mera. shukriya ham karte hein aapka aapne dil ko zuban di ham sabke.


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
   
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31st August 2003, 03:51 PM

dardji,
ab kya kahu? shukria to aap ne liya nahi.........
dard ji, salaah ki raah maie rahungi..... lol
   
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31st August 2003, 03:55 PM

mene aapka shukriya le liya meena jee bas itna kaha ke ab nai kahiyega shukriya.

magar iska matlab mujhe samajh nai aaya.

"salaah ki raah maie rahungi"
please please help me


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
   
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wah kya baat hai!!!!!!!!!
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wah kya baat hai!!!!!!!!! - 31st August 2003, 03:59 PM

Mina
bahot ache bahot ache.mat door bhago nind se waise bhi wo kahan paas thi. take care.


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31st August 2003, 04:01 PM

dardji,
ji salaah ki raah maie rahungi...... matlab........
ab aur kya kahti? shukriaa ka na kaha to maine kah diya k jab lage k kuchh salaah dene ki jaroor hai to de dijiyega.
   
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31st August 2003, 04:03 PM

mita,
nind ko n badnaam karo yunh sarae aam
woh to aa rahi thhi..... hamne hi ..
daro- diwaare n khole kabhi.......
waise nazam pasand karne ka shukriaa.
   
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1st September 2003, 02:25 PM

Meena..

sach hi likha hai tumne.. ye jaante hue bhi ki jise hum humdum, humsaaya samajhhte rahe, wo bewafa nikla.. hum phir bhi use is dil se nikaal nahi paate hain.. uske khayaalon ka basar zehen me hi reh jaata hai.. uake wajood ka aks.. uska saaya, uski saansein... humesha humari saanson me rehti hain.. apni nakaami.. apni barbaad mohabbat .. apni zaaya wafa.. apne bebas aansu..jab yaad aate hain... to dard beshumaar hota hai.. lekin phir bhi.. us bewafa ko apni shaksiyat se juda nahi kar paate hain.. shayad yahi pyaar ke maaron ki kismat hai...


Tumne bohat hi achha likha hai meena.


Tum chale jaaoge to sochenge... Humne kya khoya, humne kya paaya...
   
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1st September 2003, 05:38 PM

Waise to kasame tut ne se kuchh nahi huaa
Haan, dil maie dard ko baste dekh liya maine


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jab se mere gar main thoda sa ujaala hai

har shaksh yeh kahata hai din doobne wala hai.
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1st September 2003, 10:51 PM

MeeNa Ji ..

LikHNe me Too aap kaBHi BHi koTaaHi NaHi kaRTi HaiN ..

jaB JaB Aapki LikHi Hui koi Nuzm paDHTa HuN Too YaHiN SoCHta HUN ki .. Kya Hum aapki SocH taK kaBHi paHucH sakTe HaiN .. kHaiR ..

KaHNe Ki ZuRoRaT NaHi HaI

HaR BaaR ki TaRaH Iss BaaR BHi BaHUT KHooB LikHa Hai ..

DaaD QaBuL FaRMaiye . .

ApNa kHyaaL RaKHiye


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hiiiii nice one...
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hiiiii nice one... - 1st September 2003, 11:59 PM

that was a nice one too...

yu riston ko na aajmao tum
ye tho kacche dhage hai
kahi ulajh gaye ek bar ye
phir na sulajh pate hai

kasmo ki gaath ko ...
yu es kadar na tod dena tum
ke riston ka namo nishan mit jaye
aur tum ye khare haath malte reh jao



take care
bye


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2nd September 2003, 08:09 AM

banno,
tumne to mere ahessas ko khub jubaan de di...... kuchh kahne ko hi nahi raha siwaay tumhe shukriaa kahe... aur woh to tumne muje mana kar diya hai... khair .... fir bhi yaar..... yah ahessas bhi mahesoos kar lo... aapka yaha aana hamaare liyae kya maaina hai.
   
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papluji,
aapka shukriaa.......
   
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kshitiz dost,
tum bhi na... kuchh jyada hi taarif nahi kar di yaha?
sach kahu dost... bas jo jiti hu... jo mahesoos karti hu likh deti hu...... zindgi hai meri nazam maie basi is liyae hi shayed aap dost ko pasand aa jaati hai
   
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ehsasji,
aapka bahot shukriaa..... jawabi sher bahot pasand aaya ... taarif aap bhi kubul kijiyae.
   
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dost ji…

maine pehle bhi kaha tha aapki soch behad oonchi hai aur jin oonchaiyoN per aap haiN unke bare meiN soch paana bhi mumkin nahi…

sach kaha aapne unse roothna aur khud se bichadna ek hi baat to hai…
aur kasmeiN to shayad bani hi tootne ke liye hai.. akser toot jaate hai vaade aur kasmeiN…
kya kuch nahi hua kasmeiN toot jaane se.. phir bhi kaha apne ke kuch nahi hua…
aapke isi andaaz ka kayal hooN…
wakai apne her jazbaat ko lafzoN meiN tabdeel karna koi aap se seekhe…

jadoogar haiN aap lafzoN ki…

choti si prasansha mere taraf se…

apna khayaal rakhiye…

likhti rahiye aur muskuraati rahiye…


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bedil dost,
tumhara meri nazam k liyae prasansha karna meri nazam ko khush kaerne k barabar hai........
tumhari daad mere sar aankho par.
ji sach hi to hai..... kasam tut ne par kuchh nahi huaa ...... sirf dard ko dil maie baste dekha
aur kya kahu ab is dard k baare maie......
ek baar fir tumhari aabhari hu.
   
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