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jab kisi se koi gila rakhna===>>comments? opinions? anything?
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Exclamation jab kisi se koi gila rakhna===>>comments? opinions? anything? - 11th January 2002, 02:47 AM

jab kisi se koi gilaa rakhna
saamne apne aainaa rakhna

yuun ujaalon se vaasta rakhna
shammaa ke paas hi hava rakhna

ghar ki taamir chaahe jaisi ho
is mein rone ki jagah rakhna

masjidein hain namaaziyon ke liye
apne ghar mein kahin Khudaa rakhna

milna jhulnaa jahaan zaruuri ho
milne-jhulne ka hausla rakhna


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Bahot Khub fari jee - 11th January 2002, 03:59 PM

jab kisi se koi gilaa rakhna
saamne apne aainaa rakhna

yuun ujaalon se vaasta rakhna
shammaa ke paas hi hava rakhna

ghar ki taamir chaahe jaisi ho
is mein rone ki jagah rakhna

masjidein hain namaaziyon ke liye
apne ghar mein kahin Khudaa rakhna

milna jhulnaa jahaan zaruuri ho
milne-jhulne ka hausla rakhna



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Hi... - 11th January 2002, 05:04 PM

Humne Jagjit singh ki gayi huyi ye ghazal suni hai aur bahut pasand hai...especially this line...

ghar ki taamir chaahe jaisi ho
is mein rone ki jagah rakhna

Wah Wah...likhne wale ne khoob likha hai!!!

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Lightbulb ... - 11th January 2002, 09:02 PM

rite....mujhey bhi yeh nazam bohat pasand hai...so socha include kar doon in this collection of poetry n all...i'm still workin on something i can call ma own...so its goin to take time...aight....till later...khuda hafiz
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