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humne sab kuch gava diya! - 29th September 2004, 11:42 AM

jingi me maine aapna sab kuch gava diya
jiske liye gavaya unhone rula diya
aapno ne ab hume parya samjker
is matlbi duniya me thanha bana diya
kuch na kar sake hum majbur the itne
majburiyo ka mere fayda utta liya
kish or legyi hume taqder humari
taqder ne jakhmo se rista bana liya
choti shi bhul thi saja badi mili
is bhul ne hume mujrim bana diya!
   
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Re: humne sab kuch gava diya! - 29th September 2004, 11:51 AM

jindagi me maine aapna sab kuch gava diya
jiske liye gavaya unhone rula diya

aapno ne ab hume parya samjker
is matlbi duniya me thanha bana diya

kuch na kar sake hum majbur the itne
majburiyo ka mere fayda utta liya

kish or legyi hume taqder humari
taqder ne jakhmo se rista bana liya

choti shi bhul thi saja badi mili
is bhul ne hume mujrim bana diya

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aapko 1st martaba padh raha hoon....behad acha laga aapko padh kar...bahooot khubi se apne jazbaaton ko bayan kia hai aapne..."dard" par "wah" kehne ka gunaah karwa dia aapne hamse. .....aapke kalaam se sachai chalak rahi hai,,,,jo bahoot pasand aayi...meri daad kubool kijiye...isi khubsurati se likhte rahiye....
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29th September 2004, 12:58 PM

Hi Chandni Ji,

Bohot hi pyare alfazo mein haal e dil baya kiya hai aapne. Aapka kalaam kafi acchha laga. Humari daad qabool karey.


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29th September 2004, 08:06 PM

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jingi me maine aapna sab kuch gava diya
jiske liye gavaya unhone rula diya
aapno ne ab hume parya samjker
is matlbi duniya me thanha bana diya
kuch na kar sake hum majbur the itne
majburiyo ka mere fayda utta liya
kish or legyi hume taqder humari
taqder ne jakhmo se rista bana liya
choti shi bhul thi saja badi mili
is bhul ne hume mujrim bana diya!
chandni ji.....

chandni ji bohat accha likha hai aapne apne shabdon main apne dil ka haal.... behad khoobsoorti se sajaya hai har alfaz ko aapne.. jo wakai kabile tareef hai... meri daad dil se kabool kare.. aur han maine aapke pm ka rply kar diya hai ... padh lijiyega.... aapse vida leta hun.. par as usal chal lines aapke kalam ki aawaz ko buland karti hui.... mulayeja farmaiyega..

gham uthate kaise itne ek sath...
ashk bahate kitne din raat ...
hath bhi sahara na de sake aankhon ko...
jinda rehne ki bhi khatam hui ab baat...

apna khayal rakhiyega acche se


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29th September 2004, 10:35 PM

Hi Chandni jee
Bohot hi umda shayri pesh kiya hai apne.aseylakta hai jaise apney apna dil nikal ker rekh diya ho.
jingi me maine aapna sab kuch gava diya
jiske liye gavaya unhone rula diya
aapno ne ab hume parya samjker
is matlbi duniya me thanha bana diya
kuch na kar sake hum majbur the itne
majburiyo ka mere fayda utta liya
kish or legyi hume taqder humari
taqder ne jakhmo se rista bana liya
choti shi bhul thi saja badi mili
is bhul ne hume mujrim bana diya!
Bohot derd bhara hai issme. Asey hi likhte rahiye. Take care
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Phool jo mohabat main tumne diye the mujhko,
Aaj wahi meri jindagi ke gunah ban gaye .
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hi - 30th September 2004, 08:52 AM

hi
tnx jo aapko mera kalam acha laga deewanaji lekin such to ye hai ki aap to humse bhi jada acha likhte hai plz ho saketo aapna naam jarur batyega or koi naya kalam bhi
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kunal ji - 30th September 2004, 09:17 AM

hi hr u
thx 4 u jo aapko humara kalam pasnd aaya aap bhi kam ache shayr nahi ho aage ase hi likhte rhana
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salim ji - 30th September 2004, 09:19 AM

ji sukariya jo aapko humara kalam pasnd aaya vase aapke kalam bhi lazawab hai padker acha laga
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