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Pyar hum kar nahi sakte! -
7th March 2005, 09:20 PM
Itni Nafrat to hum tumse kar nahi sakte,
Kisi aur se bhi Wafa ab hum kar nahi sakte,
Isse jyada ab aur Intzaar hum kar nahi sakte,
Bhari Mehfil mein tanha ab hum rah nahi sakte,
Kya kare Pyar ko bhi Pyar ab hum kar nahi sakte,
Bhir bhi teri Yaadon ko Di se hum mita nahi sakte,
Teri Bewafai ka woh kissa ab hum bhula nahi sakte,
Bhir bhi kah dete hai bas tumhare bina ab hum Jee nahi sakte...
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8th March 2005, 11:40 AM
Itni Nafrat to hum tumse kar nahi sakte,
Kisi aur se bhi Wafa ab hum kar nahi sakte,
Isse jyada ab aur Intzaar hum kar nahi sakte,
Bhari Mehfil mein tanha ab hum rah nahi sakte,
Waah Parul..kya baat hai!!
Kya kare Pyar ko bhi Pyar ab hum kar nahi sakte,
Fir bhi teri Yaadon ko Dil se hum mita nahi sakte,
Teri Bewafai ka woh kissa ab hum bhula nahi sakte,
Bhir bhi kah dete hai bas tumhare bina ab hum Jee nahi sakte...
WAaaaahhh... Amazing....
Dear Parul!
Behad khoobsurat likha hai aapne... Bahut accha laga ise padhkar... Behad asardaar shabdon me bayaan kiye hain apane apne ehsaas.... Meri daad kubool kijiyega....Likti Rahiyega
Do TC
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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main aur meri tanhayee...
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8th March 2005, 11:43 AM
bahut khooooob parul ji
daad kabul kare
keeeeeeeep writing......
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
{nt mine}
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sabke dil mein pyar banke
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8th March 2005, 03:40 PM
amazing parul keep writing buddy
khaata tu jab hoti ki koi
hale dil kisi se kahein,
kisi ko chahatein rehna
koi khaata nahi...
unforgetable simran
~>~>~>~>~>~>~>~>~
pyarr karo,pyarr ki inteha dekho
pyarr karo,pyarr ka intezaar bhi karo.
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8th March 2005, 08:39 PM
I appreciate you Pulkit, Jubin and Simaran ji....
I will try to write as best as I can... Thanks for your help.
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HUM KAR NAHI SAKATE....... -
9th March 2005, 02:23 PM
AAP JAISE SHAYARO KI BARABARI
HUM KAR NAHI SAKATE..
AAP KI GAZALO KI TARIF ME
HUM TO KUCH KAR NAHI SAKATE
NET PE AAYAIN AUR AAPKI SHAYARI NA PADE
YE KHOOBSOORAT GUNAH
HUM KAR NAHI SAKATE
AAISE HI AAP LIKHATE RAHAIN
JALDI ME HAIN AUR KUCH KAH NAHI SAKATE
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10th March 2005, 08:44 AM
Wah aapka bhi jawab nahi.....
DIL ME TUMHARE APNI KAMI CHHOD JAYENGE,
ANKHON ME INTZAAR KI LAKIR CHHOD JAYENGE,
YAAD RAKHNA MUJE DHUNDHTE FIROGE EK DIN,
JINDAGI ME TUMHARI SIRF YAADEIN CHOOD JAYENGE........
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10th March 2005, 12:56 PM
wah kaya baat hai bahut khoob
Itni Nafrat to hum tumse kar nahi sakte,
Kisi aur se bhi Wafa ab hum kar nahi sakte,
Isse jyada ab aur Intzaar hum kar nahi sakte,
Bhari Mehfil mein tanha ab hum rah nahi sakte,
Kya kare Pyar ko bhi Pyar ab hum kar nahi sakte,
Bhir bhi teri Yaadon ko Di se hum mita nahi sakte,
Teri Bewafai ka woh kissa ab hum bhula nahi sakte,
Bhir bhi kah dete hai bas tumhare bina ab hum Jee nahi sakte...
Kyun kehte ho pyaar ko pyaar ab hum kar nahi sakte
ek baar wafa ka ikraar to de de .......
bye tanha
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hi -
10th March 2005, 01:57 PM
Hi Parul
Kaise hain aap?bahut khoobsurat alfaz hain
aapki 2 panktiyaan dil ko chuu gayi
Kya kare Pyar ko bhi Pyar ab hum kar nahi sakte,
Bhir bhi teri Yaadon ko Di se hum mita nahi sakte,
Apna ek qalam yaad aa gaya
Yaadon ka samundar Aaj hamey kahan le chala
Hume aaj phir tanha kar kahan hay chala
Sada kush rahiye
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10th March 2005, 03:14 PM
Parul ji.......
aapke khayal bahut gehre hain......
likhte rahiye.....
**(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)**
*·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·*
**(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)**
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......
AMAN RAHI
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10th March 2005, 04:29 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by Parul
Wah aapka bhi jawab nahi.....
DIL ME TUMHARE APNI KAMI CHHOD JAYENGE,
ANKHON ME INTZAAR KI LAKIR CHHOD JAYENGE,
YAAD RAKHNA MUJE DHUNDHTE FIROGE EK DIN,
JINDAGI ME TUMHARI SIRF YAADEIN CHOOD JAYENGE........
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PARUL JI ;
THANX 4 REPLY
AGAR AISA AAPKA KAHANA HAI TO HUM BHI APANE DOST KE SAATH KE LIYE TAIYAR HAIN.
JINDAGI KI DHOOP ME CHAW BAN KE
MAIN MILUNGA..........
AASMA ME DEKH LENA
MUSKURATA MAIN MILUNGA
JINDAGI KE SAATH BHI JINDAGI KE BAAD BHI
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11th March 2005, 01:24 AM
namastee.. parul...ji...
bahut khob likha hai yar.. aur bahut hi saccha likha hai yar ..apne...sach mein yar..bahut khoob likha hai ...apne.....
aise hi likhte rahiyega.. aur mehfil..sajate rahiyega..
bye..n..take care...
Lamha Lamha...saSein Khatam hoo rai hai...
Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai...
Us bewafa se na pucho meri maut ki wajah...
Woh to bus zamane ko dikhane ke liye roo rai hai...
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11th March 2005, 06:42 AM
Accha laga yeh jaankar ki,sabko humhari shayri pasand aane lagi,
Accha laga yeh jaankar ki, sanam ko aaj Mein bhi pasand aane lagi...
I will bring the best I can in my thought in different way....
Thanks again you all......
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12th March 2005, 11:09 PM
Parul Ji
Bahot hi badhiya tarike se aapne apne jazbaato ko shabdo me jaahir kiya he , bahot khub !!
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur kuchh salah aur tarike mujhe bhi dijiye taki me sudhar kar sako !!
Anyways , May God be graceful enough in empowering u with lots of ideas and showers His choicest blessings on u so that all ur wishes come true !!!
tum hi tum ho to kya tum ho
hum hi hum he to kya hum he !!
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Re: Pyar hum kar nahi sakte! -
13th March 2005, 12:34 AM
Quote:
Originally posted by Parul
Itni Nafrat to hum tumse kar nahi sakte,
Kisi aur se bhi Wafa ab hum kar nahi sakte,
Isse jyada ab aur Intzaar hum kar nahi sakte,
Bhari Mehfil mein tanha ab hum rah nahi sakte,
Kya kare Pyar ko bhi Pyar ab hum kar nahi sakte,
Bhir bhi teri Yaadon ko Di se hum mita nahi sakte,
Teri Bewafai ka woh kissa ab hum bhula nahi sakte,
Bhir bhi kah dete hai bas tumhare bina ab hum Jee nahi sakte...
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Hi Parul,
Asusual very nice..really too good
Thanks
Rohin
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13th March 2005, 08:39 AM
Thank you very much Rohin...
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kuch baatein kuch yaadein
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7th May 2005, 09:56 PM
parulji
itne dino baad aapka kuch likha padha
bahut acha laga padhke
sonal
~~ u never know where ur destiny takes u ~~
There would come a time when
we have to stop loving a person
not because that person started hating us .....
but because we found out that they'd be happier if we let me go.....
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