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Ek Ladki Ki Zubaan......do Read Frnds Its A Request.....imp
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Ek Ladki Ki Zubaan......do Read Frnds Its A Request.....imp - 31st March 2005, 07:50 AM

HI FRNDS,


EK LADKI KI ZUBAAN HAI YE DOSTON TO PLZ READ


WO MILA BHI HUMSE AUR CHALA BHI GAYA,
ZINDAGI KA SILSILA MAGAR CHALTA HI GAYA,
CHAHA JITNA BHULA DU USE,
WO DIL ME UTNA BASTA HI GAYA,

BHULE TO NAHI MAGAR CHUPA DIYA HUMNE,
KAHE TO SHAYAD SAB KUCH LOOTA DIYA HUMNE,
SAMJHAYA BHI KHUD KO KI WO BEWAFA THA,
MAGAR WO BEWAFA HUMEIN WAFA SIKHA GAYA,

WAFA BHI AISI JO SIRF USKE LIYE THI,
MAGAR USSE DOOR REHNA HI HAMARI KISMAT THI,
CHAHA BAHUT BULA LU USE USI WAQT AWAAZ DEKAR,
MAGAR YE WAQT BHI RETH SA HATHON SE FISALTA GAYA,

GINE TO NAHI MAGAR KAI DAUR GUZAR GAYE,
DOST BADLE,PYAR BADLA AUR MANJAR BADAL GAYE,
SOCHTE THE HUM KAISE JEE SAKENGE TERE BINA,
MAGAR TERA INTEZAR HUME JINA BHI SIKHA GAYA.
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Bahot badiya - 31st March 2005, 09:11 AM

Kya likha hai mere Dost....
Bilkul lajawaab kar diya......
Mujhe bahot pasand aaya....
Aise hi likhte rehna......

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Re: Bahot badiya - 31st March 2005, 09:15 AM

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Kya likha hai mere Dost....
Bilkul lajawaab kar diya......
Mujhe bahot pasand aaya....
Aise hi likhte rehna......

Ajmal
ajmal ji aapko mera likha pasand aaya jaan kar khushi hui
thanks for the compliments
bas aapka saath raha to zaroor likhenge
thanks again
keeeeeep reading


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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
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Hiiiii Dard - 31st March 2005, 09:28 AM

I m here dard
Wah .. umda peshkash hai

GINE TO NAHI MAGAR KAI DAUR GUZAR GAYE,
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SOCHTE THE HUM KAISE JEE SAKENGE TERE BINA,
MAGAR TERA INTEZAR HUME JINA BHI SIKHA GAYA.

la-jawaab

jeene waalon se kaho,chaand sitaaron ke liye
jeena padta hai kuch zakhm uthane ke liye

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31st March 2005, 03:56 PM

Jubinn ji!

bahot dilkash aur behtarin....rachna hai!
sachh bahot bahott,,,umda!
GINE TO NAHI MAGAR KAI DAUR GUZAR GAYE,
DOST BADLE,PYAR BADLA AUR MANJAR BADAL GAYE,
SOCHTE THE HUM KAISE JEE SAKENGE TERE BINA,
MAGAR TERA INTEZAR HUME JINA BHI SIKHA GAYA.

i jst luved this one....though the whole gazal is js FAB!
tc..keep it up
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31st March 2005, 03:56 PM

WO MILA BHI HUMSE AUR CHALA BHI GAYA,
ZINDAGI KA SILSILA MAGAR CHALTA HI GAYA,
CHAHA JITNA BHULA DU USE,
WO DIL ME UTNA BASTA HI GAYA,

BHULE TO NAHI MAGAR CHUPA DIYA HUMNE,
KAHE TO SHAYAD SAB KUCH LOOTA DIYA HUMNE,
SAMJHAYA BHI KHUD KO KI WO BEWAFA THA,
MAGAR WO BEWAFA HUMEIN WAFA SIKHA GAYA,

WAFA BHI AISI JO SIRF USKE LIYE THI,
MAGAR USSE DOOR REHNA HI HAMARI KISMAT THI,
CHAHA BAHUT BULA LU USE USI WAQT AWAAZ DEKAR,
MAGAR YE WAQT BHI RETH SA HATHON SE FISALTA GAYA,

GINE TO NAHI MAGAR KAI DAUR GUZAR GAYE,
DOST BADLE,PYAR BADLA AUR MANJAR BADAL GAYE,
SOCHTE THE HUM KAISE JEE SAKENGE TERE BINA,
MAGAR TERA INTEZAR HUME JINA BHI SIKHA GAYA.


Behad khoobsurat Jubin!!

U r writing more n more beautiful every day... Meri daad kubool kar lena.... Doo keep writing.... TC


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Re: Hiiiii Dard - 31st March 2005, 05:35 PM

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I m here dard
Wah .. umda peshkash hai

GINE TO NAHI MAGAR KAI DAUR GUZAR GAYE,
DOST BADLE,PYAR BADLA AUR MANJAR BADAL GAYE,
SOCHTE THE HUM KAISE JEE SAKENGE TERE BINA,
MAGAR TERA INTEZAR HUME JINA BHI SIKHA GAYA.

la-jawaab

jeene waalon se kaho,chaand sitaaron ke liye
jeena padta hai kuch zakhm uthane ke liye

izzajat
karan.q

thanks karan thanks


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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
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31st March 2005, 05:36 PM

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Jubinn ji!

bahot dilkash aur behtarin....rachna hai!
sachh bahot bahott,,,umda!
GINE TO NAHI MAGAR KAI DAUR GUZAR GAYE,
DOST BADLE,PYAR BADLA AUR MANJAR BADAL GAYE,
SOCHTE THE HUM KAISE JEE SAKENGE TERE BINA,
MAGAR TERA INTEZAR HUME JINA BHI SIKHA GAYA.

i jst luved this one....though the whole gazal is js FAB!
tc..keep it up
komal!

thanks for the support and compliments komal
keeeeeeeeep reading


main aur meri tanhayee..............

I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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31st March 2005, 05:37 PM

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Behad khoobsurat Jubin!!

U r writing more n more beautiful every day... Meri daad kubool kar lena.... Doo keep writing.... TC

thanks pukit sahab
thanks a lot


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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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HEY JUBIN NICE AGAIN BUDDY
SACH MEIN KAISE LIKHTE HU ITNA ACHA KUCH RAAZ HUME BHI BATA DO REALLY JUBIN UR WORDS WAS REALLY HEART TOUCHING.

HAR GUM MEIN MUSKURANA SIKHA DIYA HUME TUNE
HAR MUSHKIL MEIN HASANA SIKHA DIYA TUNE
WAFA KI BAATEIN KARTE THE HUM
AB BEWAFAI KA AFSANA KEHNA SIKHA DIYA TUNE

UNFORGETABLE SIMRAN
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Ju PaL mIlE uSs PaL kO jEe lO
sHaYaD kAl Ho Na Ho......

love is seeing yourself in someone's
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(¨`·.·´¨) Always
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HEY JUBIN NICE AGAIN BUDDY
SACH MEIN KAISE LIKHTE HU ITNA ACHA KUCH RAAZ HUME BHI BATA DO REALLY JUBIN UR WORDS WAS REALLY HEART TOUCHING.
arre simran ji kyu sharminda kar rahe ho hame
thanks for the compliments
ham to aap logon ke saamne kuch nahi hai
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main aur meri tanhayee..............

I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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1st April 2005, 04:22 PM

hey jubin

awesome...!!
is ladki mein main khud ko paati hoon
tumne aisa kuch kaha hai jo mein mehsoos karti hoon

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its ur thinking jubin aap humse acha hi likhte hai
lakin ek baat hai dard duno ka barabar hai

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(¨`·.·´¨) Always
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hey jubin

awesome...!!
is ladki mein main khud ko paati hoon
tumne aisa kuch kaha hai jo mein mehsoos karti hoon

sonal
sonal ji thanks for the compliments
mujhe khushi hai ki main aisa kuch likh paya jo aapse relate karta hai


main aur meri tanhayee..............

I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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its ur thinking jubin aap humse acha hi likhte hai
lakin ek baat hai dard duno ka barabar hai

unforgetable simran
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ok simran ji ab is baat par behes yahi khatam kar dete hai
ha dard ke daur se to dono guzre hai
to dard ek tarah ka hi hoga na
thanks again


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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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hi - 1st April 2005, 07:09 PM

wah bahut hi khoob likha aapne..


BHULE TO NAHI MAGAR CHUPA DIYA HUMNE,
KAHE TO SHAYAD SAB KUCH LOOTA DIYA HUMNE,
SAMJHAYA BHI KHUD KO KI WO BEWAFA THA,
MAGAR WO BEWAFA HUMEIN WAFA SIKHA GAYA,

kuch kahunga ispar sirf post reply hi samjhiyega


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1st April 2005, 07:39 PM

zubin ...

koi shaq naHI accha likha hai ....

bohat accha lag raha hau tumhara yahan aise likhna

tumhare kalaam ko padh ke kuch yaad aa gaya .,... suna tha yahiN kahiN

khwab dekhe bhi nahi aur toot gaye
wo humse mile bhi nahi aur rooth gaye..
hum jaagte rahe aur duniya soti rahi..
ek barish thi jo satn humare roti rahi...

shayad aapko pasand aaye ... meri daad teh dil se kabool karna ... apna khayal rakhte hue likhte rehna

aapka apna

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Nice one Jubin, I think you sent this to me before right! I like reading it again... keep writing* TC
   
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Re: hi - 2nd April 2005, 09:19 AM

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wah bahut hi khoob likha aapne..


BHULE TO NAHI MAGAR CHUPA DIYA HUMNE,
KAHE TO SHAYAD SAB KUCH LOOTA DIYA HUMNE,
SAMJHAYA BHI KHUD KO KI WO BEWAFA THA,
MAGAR WO BEWAFA HUMEIN WAFA SIKHA GAYA,

kuch kahunga ispar sirf post reply hi samjhiyega


Agar Seekh li hoti tumne wafa to hum bewafa na kahlate,
Aaye the tere dar par wafa lekar, bewafai saath na liye jaate...



bye tanha
thanks tanha sahab
apna naam zaroor bataye
nice words by u too
keeeeeeeep reading and writing


main aur meri tanhayee..............

I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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2nd April 2005, 09:22 AM

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zubin ...

koi shaq naHI accha likha hai ....

bohat accha lag raha hau tumhara yahan aise likhna

tumhare kalaam ko padh ke kuch yaad aa gaya .,... suna tha yahiN kahiN

khwab dekhe bhi nahi aur toot gaye
wo humse mile bhi nahi aur rooth gaye..
hum jaagte rahe aur duniya soti rahi..
ek barish thi jo satn humare roti rahi...

shayad aapko pasand aaye ... meri daad teh dil se kabool karna ... apna khayal rakhte hue likhte rehna

aapka apna

kunal
kunal ji aap khush to main khush
aapko mera likha pasand aaya jaan kar bahut khushi hui
aapki daad kabul ki kunal ji
kalam ne saath diya to likhte rahenge

arz hai-
saath dete vo agar to hamari zindagi sawar gayi hoti
khushiyo se hamne apni khali jholi bhar li hoti
unki bewafai ke baad socha tha mar jaye
par saath kalam na deti to shayad hamne khudkhushi kar li hoti....


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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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Nice one Jubin, I think you sent this to me before right! I like reading it again... keep writing* TC
thanks parul ben for reading it again mara dhyaan ma thi nikdi gayu ke me tamne pella aa molki hati
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Re: Ek Ladki Ki Zubaan......do Read Frnds Its A Request.....imp - 3rd April 2005, 08:22 AM

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HI FRNDS,
GINE TO NAHI MAGAR KAI DAUR GUZAR GAYE,
DOST BADLE,PYAR BADLA AUR MANJAR BADAL GAYE,
SOCHTE THE HUM KAISE JEE SAKENGE TERE BINA,
MAGAR TERA INTEZAR HUME JINA BHI SIKHA GAYA.

wow jubin ji,
i wish i could write like you, bohot acha likha hai,
wht i have gotten from life is to try to forgetthe person jisne meray saath bewafaii ki, pehle tho aisa meri zindagi main nahin tha, laikin koi 2 weeks pehle ki baat hai jab kisi nain meray saath bhi bewafayee ki...i was completely depressed, but im trying to get my life back on track without that person


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Re: Re: Ek Ladki Ki Zubaan......do Read Frnds Its A Request.....imp - 3rd April 2005, 08:27 AM

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wow jubin ji,
i wish i could write like you, bohot acha likha hai,
wht i have gotten from life is to try to forgetthe person jisne meray saath bewafaii ki, pehle tho aisa meri zindagi main nahin tha, laikin koi 2 weeks pehle ki baat hai jab kisi nain meray saath bhi bewafayee ki...i was completely depressed, but im trying to get my life back on track without that person
mukhra ji kyu sharminda kar rahi hai hame aap
ham kaha itna accha likhte hai
acchi likhawat padhni hai to
rohin sahab,pulkit sahab,kunalji,meenaa didi in ki padhiye
ham to jazbaat bayaan karte hai vo to aisa likhte hai ki kalam rone par majboor ho jati hai
ha ab to zindagi chal rahi hai unki yaad me
par i will get back to normalcy again
thanks mukhra ji


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jubin ji,
your shayri is very good, yes rohin bhai, meena di, and all are good, but you are good too
you have written wht was in your heart, and you never know when it could turn into something completely spectacular
aur main tho abhi sirf shayri ki duniya main new hoon, so i have a long way to go
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Re: Ek Ladki Ki Zubaan......do Read Frnds Its A Request.....imp - 3rd April 2005, 11:15 AM

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HI FRNDS,


EK LADKI KI ZUBAAN HAI YE DOSTON TO PLZ READ


WO MILA BHI HUMSE AUR CHALA BHI GAYA,
ZINDAGI KA SILSILA MAGAR CHALTA HI GAYA,
CHAHA JITNA BHULA DU USE,
WO DIL ME UTNA BASTA HI GAYA,

BHULE TO NAHI MAGAR CHUPA DIYA HUMNE,
KAHE TO SHAYAD SAB KUCH LOOTA DIYA HUMNE,
SAMJHAYA BHI KHUD KO KI WO BEWAFA THA,
MAGAR WO BEWAFA HUMEIN WAFA SIKHA GAYA,

WAFA BHI AISI JO SIRF USKE LIYE THI,
MAGAR USSE DOOR REHNA HI HAMARI KISMAT THI,
CHAHA BAHUT BULA LU USE USI WAQT AWAAZ DEKAR,
MAGAR YE WAQT BHI RETH SA HATHON SE FISALTA GAYA,

GINE TO NAHI MAGAR KAI DAUR GUZAR GAYE,
DOST BADLE,PYAR BADLA AUR MANJAR BADAL GAYE,
SOCHTE THE HUM KAISE JEE SAKENGE TERE BINA,
MAGAR TERA INTEZAR HUME JINA BHI SIKHA GAYA.
dear jubin,
first of all very srry for replying u late. i was in hell of a condition so was unable to reply u before. aaj tumhara yeh kalam pada,acha laga.sach mein dil ko chu gaya.is kalam ne mujhe mere dost se bhichadne yaad dilaya, so felt like replying u ahead. really awesome n well written dear. i had read it before too. u posted it on the other site too. well wow wat a depth of thoughts in ur post. sach mein jab pehle padi thi tab iska ehsaas kuch kam hua tha, magar aaj is kalam ko pad ke sach mein aapne dost ko khone ka gam ka ehsaas hua.gr8 as usual n one more thing buddy.its gud to see tht u are writing so well n watever u wished tht all shud reply u,look now everyone has showered their love for u. keep going buddy. all the best for future too.

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humse yeh poocho kaisa haal hota hai tanhai ka
maut ko laga lete hai majboor hokar gale yaaron
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Bahut Khoob............ - 3rd April 2005, 09:14 PM

bahut khoob likha hai dost bakayi dil se likha hai
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jubin ji,
your shayri is very good, yes rohin bhai, meena di, and all are good, but you are good too
you have written wht was in your heart, and you never know when it could turn into something completely spectacular
aur main tho abhi sirf shayri ki duniya main new hoon, so i have a long way to go
take care
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i agree mukhra ji
khair is behes ko yahi khatam karte hai
aur aapse bas itni hi guzarish hai saaath dete rehna


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dear jubin,
first of all very srry for replying u late. i was in hell of a condition so was unable to reply u before. aaj tumhara yeh kalam pada,acha laga.sach mein dil ko chu gaya.is kalam ne mujhe mere dost se bhichadne yaad dilaya, so felt like replying u ahead. really awesome n well written dear. i had read it before too. u posted it on the other site too. well wow wat a depth of thoughts in ur post. sach mein jab pehle padi thi tab iska ehsaas kuch kam hua tha, magar aaj is kalam ko pad ke sach mein aapne dost ko khone ka gam ka ehsaas hua.gr8 as usual n one more thing buddy.its gud to see tht u are writing so well n watever u wished tht all shud reply u,look now everyone has showered their love for u. keep going buddy. all the best for future too.

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humse yeh poocho kaisa haal hota hai tanhai ka
maut ko laga lete hai majboor hokar gale yaaron
aisa hota hai hasher jab bhi hota hai,ruswai ka!
thanks for the reply jas
thanks for all the support and love u have given me
thanks


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bahut khoob likha hai dost bakayi dil se likha hai
please keep it up


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naresh ji thanks for the compliments
keeeeeeep reading


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Re: Ek Ladki Ki Zubaan......do Read Frnds Its A Request.....imp - 4th April 2005, 02:43 PM

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HI FRNDS,


EK LADKI KI ZUBAAN HAI YE DOSTON TO PLZ READ


WO MILA BHI HUMSE AUR CHALA BHI GAYA,
ZINDAGI KA SILSILA MAGAR CHALTA HI GAYA,
CHAHA JITNA BHULA DU USE,
WO DIL ME UTNA BASTA HI GAYA,

BHULE TO NAHI MAGAR CHUPA DIYA HUMNE,
KAHE TO SHAYAD SAB KUCH LOOTA DIYA HUMNE,
SAMJHAYA BHI KHUD KO KI WO BEWAFA THA,
MAGAR WO BEWAFA HUMEIN WAFA SIKHA GAYA,

WAFA BHI AISI JO SIRF USKE LIYE THI,
MAGAR USSE DOOR REHNA HI HAMARI KISMAT THI,
CHAHA BAHUT BULA LU USE USI WAQT AWAAZ DEKAR,
MAGAR YE WAQT BHI RETH SA HATHON SE FISALTA GAYA,

GINE TO NAHI MAGAR KAI DAUR GUZAR GAYE,
DOST BADLE,PYAR BADLA AUR MANJAR BADAL GAYE,
SOCHTE THE HUM KAISE JEE SAKENGE TERE BINA,
MAGAR TERA INTEZAR HUME JINA BHI SIKHA GAYA.

fantastic


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Re: Re: Ek Ladki Ki Zubaan......do Read Frnds Its A Request.....imp - 4th April 2005, 02:49 PM

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fantastic
thaank u for rating it to this extent khushiii ji
keeeeeeeeeep reading.......aur bhi posts hai


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KiS HaaL MaiN Hai TeRe SaTaYe HoYe GhaReeB

TuNe Yeh PooChNe Ki ZehMaT KaBhi Na Ki

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JiS Ne KhuD ApNe Aap Se UlFaT{MuHaBbat } KaBhi Na Ki.......... .

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KiS HaaL MaiN Hai TeRe SaTaYe HoYe GhaReeB

TuNe Yeh PooChNe Ki ZehMaT KaBhi Na Ki

MehSooS Kia KaRe Ga Woh AuRoN Ke DaRD Ko

JiS Ne KhuD ApNe Aap Se UlFaT{MuHaBbat } KaBhi Na Ki.......... .

ApNA AsGheR......

asgher sahab
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wah jubin ji aap ne to ek ladki ke dard ko itni aasani se aur itne khubsurati se pesh kiya hai ki har ek ladki ise apni khud ki kahani samajhne lagegi.thanks for giving us the pleasure to see such a wonderful poetry do carry on writing such wonderful poems.
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wah jubin ji aap ne to ek ladki ke dard ko itni aasani se aur itne khubsurati se pesh kiya hai ki har ek ladki ise apni khud ki kahani samajhne lagegi.thanks for giving us the pleasure to see such a wonderful poetry do carry on writing such wonderful poems.
its my pleasure to have u here sir
thanks for the compliments
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bas saath dete rehna


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Bahut khub...........bahut sahi farmaaya aapne Jubin ji


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hi - 18th April 2005, 08:29 PM

too good .........sachchai hai iss poem main ...........
sabka gum dekh ke hum apna gum bhull gaye ...............
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++==
har khushi ek dard ke saaye main hota hai
har gum ek khushi ke saaye maine hota hai
jaise subhh ke baad raat or raat ke baad savera hota hai




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Bahut khub...........bahut sahi farmaaya aapne Jubin ji
thanks nimishaji thanks alot
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too good .........sachchai hai iss poem main ...........
sabka gum dekh ke hum apna gum bhull gaye ...............
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++==
har khushi ek dard ke saaye main hota hai
har gum ek khushi ke saaye maine hota hai
jaise subhh ke baad raat or raat ke baad savera hota hai
chandsi ji
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ek behtareeen pic
which i thought matches with the lines above
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main aur meri tanhayee..............

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hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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