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Post words cant explain....can u? - 30th April 2005, 06:55 PM

Words can't explain



Was it a dream or a real day?
When I was speechless & nothing to say
Standing still, just looking at you
Words can't explain that day.

I thought one day you will be mine
Does I have a right to see a dream so fine?
Standing still, just looking at you
Words can't explain my dream.

I proposed & said "I love you"
She said, " I am so proud to have a friend like you"
Standing still, just looking at you
Words can't explain my love.

I said, "May you be happy forever"
Your mother's choice was it
With whom you will live forever
Words cant't explain my feelings.

God made you, so proud will he be,
I left the country, went away.
Did you ever think how I will be?
Words can't explain my sadness.

In my life I never married
Lived my life
With the dream of her that I carried
Words can't explain this poem.
   
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Very nice poem indeed...Yashad ji!

I've read it with great pleasure...

Keep flowing your thoughts...

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2nd May 2005, 12:33 AM

Hello Yashad,

Bahut aacha likha hain aapne...

There is so much pain and love in it... and pyaar aur dard ka rishta tou hamesha se raha hain....

Keep writing...

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