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Love aisa lagta hai.... - 30th March 2002, 04:31 AM

aight....this is my first try.....so plz be kind n tell me whether u like it or not...plz?....... ....thx!!


'aisa lagta hai zindagi tum ho
aye ajnabi, kaise ajnabi tum ho'

socha na tha pyaar kar baithein ge hum bhi
sach to yeh hai ke ab dil lagi tum ho

bohat suni theen pyaar ki daastanein hum dum
humein khud ek daastaan banane wale tum ho

darte the ishq mein ruswayi se magar,
ab to is dil mein basey sirf tum hi tum ho

iqrar-e-mohabbat bhi to nahin hota hum se
is dharaktey dil ki waja bhi tum ho

'aisa lagta hai zindagi tum ho
aye ajnabi kaise ajnabi tum ho'

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n plus.....wat exactly is this beher stuff.....n where can i go to learn more bout it?.......[just wonderin]


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maanga khuda se raat din tere siwa kuch bhi nahin

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30th March 2002, 04:41 PM

love is a part of life,
not a heart of life.....!!!!


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30th March 2002, 11:02 PM

depends on how u think bout it.....govind jee...
sab ki alag alag soch hoti hai...rite?


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Smile yes, you are right...!!! - 31st March 2002, 11:40 AM

aap sahi hain.
sabki alag-alag soch hoti hai...!!!


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Thumbs up behar - 1st April 2002, 07:46 PM

Hi Fari ji,

aapne beher ke baare mein poocha, below are some links that might be useful to read. aapki lekhi achchi thi, likhte rahiyega.

http://www.cs.wisc.edu/~navin/india/...hazal.def.html
http://urdustan.com/alup/bahar03.txt


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kabhee ham unko, kabhee apane ghar ko dekhte haiN

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1st April 2002, 08:55 PM

thank u so much anamika jee....i really need to learn ma urdu grammar n all....all this stuff looks so tuff....ab dekhte hain mein seekh sakti hoon ke nahin.....anyhoo....shukria for the links...i'll go check em out now.... ....aur hawsla afzayi ka bhi shukria.....

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