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Virane main....... - 11th June 2005, 11:46 PM

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Koi dekhe meri in aankho main
ki inse aaj bhi nadiya behti hai
koi aaye mere virane main
ki unki yaad bahut satati hai...

Bhula baitha tha jis kahani ko
wo kahani phir dohrai jaati hai
koi aaye mere virane main
ki unki yaad satati hai.....

Tha kisi ka intzaar itna
ki palak na jhapkaye jaati hai,
koi aaye mere virane main
ki mujhse unki yaad na bhulaye jaati hai....

Dhundta tha dhoop main
wo to ek parchai thi
haat jo mere aaye wo uski hi bewafai thi

Aaj bhi jhumta hai dil ki uski jhalak dekh paata hun
mehfil main na sahi virane main usko khayal main laaya hun

Koi mere dil se pooche chot ye kaisi khaye hai,
koi aaye mere virane main unki yaad chali aaye hai....
   
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Re: Virane main....... - 12th June 2005, 06:34 AM

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hope u like it frnd



Koi dekhe meri in aankho main
ki inse aaj bhi nadiya behti hai
koi aaye mere virane main
ki unki yaad bahut satati hai...

Bhula baitha tha jis kahani ko
wo kahani phir dohrai jaati hai
koi aaye mere virane main
ki unki yaad satati hai.....

Tha kisi ka intzaar itna
ki palak na jhapkaye jaati hai,
koi aaye mere virane main
ki mujhse unki yaad na bhulaye jaati hai....

Dhundta tha dhoop main
wo to ek parchai thi
haat jo mere aaye wo uski hi bewafai thi

Aaj bhi jhumta hai dil ki uski jhalak dekh paata hun
mehfil main na sahi virane main usko khayal main laaya hun

Koi mere dil se pooche chot ye kaisi khaye hai,
koi aaye mere virane main unki yaad chali aaye hai....
excellent buddy,
well wat a flow of thoughts. har alfaas aapne aap mein mukamal hai. its superb. meri daad kabool karna and keep writing ahead too. it was fantastic n well written by u. judai ki tarap ka kya bakhubhi se beyaan diya aapne. likhte rahiye. take care and may god bless u with his finnest glitters.



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ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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12th June 2005, 12:56 PM

Hi ...

bahoot achha likha hai.. nice one..


Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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12th June 2005, 01:31 PM

Namaskar Tanha ji

Bahut khoobsurat Rachna hay........dard bhari

Koi dekhe meri in aankho main
ki inse aaj bhi nadiya behti hai
koi aaye mere virane main
ki unki yaad bahut satati hai...


Meri daad kijega......

Sada kush Rahiye.......keep writing


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Re: Virane main....... - 12th June 2005, 06:21 PM

Bhula baitha tha jis kahani ko
wo kahani phir dohrai jaati hai
koi aaye mere virane main
ki unki yaad satati hai.....



Waah...waah...I'liked it!


take care


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Kuch nagme gaa kar chale gaye kuch aahe bhar kar laut gaye,

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12th June 2005, 06:27 PM

tanha ji, (sorry don no ur name)amazin
simply superb keep writin liek this....really it was wonderful
take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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shukriya - 12th June 2005, 11:34 PM

bahut bahut shukiria dosto ki aane mere likha pasand kiya bas likh leta hun kabhi kabhi aise hi jab man karta hai phir aapke saamne haajir hunga aisa hi kuch lekar tab tak ke liye maaf kijye aur sada khush rahiye

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Re: Virane main....... - 13th June 2005, 01:58 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by Ek_Tanha_Dil
hope u like it frnd

Koi dekhe meri in aankho main
ki inse aaj bhi nadiya behti hai
koi aaye mere virane main
ki unki yaad bahut satati hai...

Bhula baitha tha jis kahani ko
wo kahani phir dohrai jaati hai
koi aaye mere virane main
ki unki yaad satati hai.....

Tha kisi ka intzaar itna
ki palak na jhapkaye jaati hai,
koi aaye mere virane main
ki mujhse unki yaad na bhulaye jaati hai....

Dhundta tha dhoop main
wo to ek parchai thi
haat jo mere aaye wo uski hi bewafai thi

Aaj bhi jhumta hai dil ki uski jhalak dekh paata hun
mehfil main na sahi virane main usko khayal main laaya hun

Koi mere dil se pooche chot ye kaisi khaye hai,
koi aaye mere virane main unki yaad chali aaye hai....
Hi Rohit,
Bahut acha likha hai apne...it was superb

Bhula baitha tha jis kahani ko
wo kahani phir dohrai jaati hai
koi aaye mere virane main
ki unki yaad satati hai.....
These lines were amzaing...keep writing

Take Care

Regards Nidhi


Na Chaho kisi ko itna ~ ~ ki chahat tumhari majboori ban jaye ~ ~ chaho kisi ko itna ki ~ ~ tumhara pyar us ke liye zaroori ban jaye...............


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13th June 2005, 10:51 AM

Thanks a lot dear friends mujhe bahut accha laga ki aapne mera likha pasand kiya

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beautiful
likhte rahiye

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Thanks a lot dear soni accha laga aapne mera likha pasand kiya
   
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