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I'm Sad - 15th June 2005, 09:22 PM

hello friends...these r not jus words...i wud be happy if u can giv me ur valuable suggestions

I love her like hell
But she dint respond so well
And I am sad

I stand by her side
But she'll never be my bride
And I am sad

Shez never going to stay with me
Don't know why it always happens with me
And I am sad

I have nothing to fear today
Coz I've lost my every thing,my love
And I am sad

There is no one to care
No one to respond to my words
And I am sad

Thanks..


Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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hi - 15th June 2005, 10:58 PM

dearest Karthik
i could feel in ur words the pain and the sadness..

please dont be sad
most of the time we are sad that things did not work in our favor but hey not to forget.........

be happy that it happend and did bring good moments in your life....

good composition

Priya


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15th June 2005, 11:01 PM

priya didi,
thanks for ur carin words.....u cud understand my feelins....how???did this happen to u also???
ne ways thanks for ur reply
take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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15th June 2005, 11:49 PM

karthik

great depth in what u have written

sonal


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not because that person started hating us .....
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Re: I'm Sad - 16th June 2005, 12:09 AM

I love her like hell (She should not make you feel as if you are in one)

I stand by her side (Be happy that she is happy whether with you or without you)

Shez never going to stay with me (There is someone better waiting for you and also for her)

I have nothing to fear today (You NEVER NEVER loose your love)

There is no one to care (Never expect people to come and listen to you for they are waiting for someone to listen to them... lend a listening ear and you will find one to hear you )

Hi Karthik bro...

There is sadness in composition....
but wehn you read my reply ... i hope you smile....

for the sonner you realise the truth the better for you...

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Re: I'm Sad - 16th June 2005, 01:06 AM

I love her like hell
But she dint respond so well
And I am sad

hmmm...nice...have felt tht before

I stand by her side
But she'll never be my bride
And I am sad

Shez never going to stay with me
Don't know why it always happens with me
And I am sad

dont be sad...and never say tht...i know...it will only make u feel worse if u blame yourself and fate...and think why it always happens to you...dont think tht

I have nothing to fear today
Coz I've lost my every thing,my love
And I am sad

but, my dear, there will always be someone for you

There is no one to care
No one to respond to my words
And I am sad

"khamosh kyun ho...jo bhi kehna hai kaho...
tumko milega utna pyar...MAIN HOON NA "

hi karthik!
well...another good work of poetry from a wonderful and dard-filled shayar...magar mr.karthik...why so sad?....if u say long story...i will say....I HAVE TIME TO LISTEN!!!...do tell....

and dont feel so sad
phir bhi....I LOVED THIS POEM TOO!

keep writing

take care
bye
warda


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on the way....some hurt, yet some love...

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16th June 2005, 08:30 PM

hello sonal ji,
thanks for the reply...n thanks for understandin my feelings
take care


Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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16th June 2005, 08:39 PM

hello rohin bhayya,
well...i was out of sorts ven i rote this.....but may b vat u say is true......feelin a lil better now...
ne ways thanks for always bein there for me
take care


Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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16th June 2005, 08:51 PM

my dearest friend warda....ven did u feel it?????u said u felt it before.....arree oooo...u don say wonderful shayar ree..plzz....i am toh flyin...on cloud nine well...even i am there for u ven u hav no words to say......thanks a lot for readin n replyin....felt really nice readin ur reply....keep readin ok
take gud care of ur self


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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16th June 2005, 08:52 PM

Dear Kartik,

I can understand your feeling.. But dear Kartik a word of advice don't get too emotional. This might be your first instance, but it happend few times with me. So just cheer up. There are lot of other more important things in the world.


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17th June 2005, 10:16 AM

hello abdul ji,
thanks a lot for ur reply....keep readin
bye take care


Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
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Re: I'm Sad - 17th June 2005, 10:23 AM

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hello friends...these r not jus words...i wud be happy if u can giv me ur valuable suggestions

I love her like hell
But she dint respond so well
And I am sad

I stand by her side
But she'll never be my bride
And I am sad

Shez never going to stay with me
Don't know why it always happens with me
And I am sad

I have nothing to fear today
Coz I've lost my every thing,my love
And I am sad

There is no one to care
No one to respond to my words
And I am sad

Thanks..
no comments karthik,
i am sad becoz my friend is sad. cant see u in this state of mind. well i want to see ur smiling face back. so this time i wont say a word regarding ur post. keep smiling. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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17th June 2005, 10:26 AM

didi.....i am fine...really....chalo if u want c arree....u don be sad ...i am really fine now...the other day i wasnt feelin nice....but now i am feelin ok....
chalo then tok to u later ok
keep smilin ...don b sad...
take care


Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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