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Totay Sapnay - 14th May 2002, 05:58 PM

Jo bechar gaya vo milla hi kab tha
Jo ruth gaya vo mana hi kab tha

Main to yunhi khab sajaya behty reh gayi
Us ko aa kar mujha samatna hi kab tha

Main har sham us ki yaad main chargh jalaty thi
Hawa ki zad main charaghun ko jalni hi kab tha

Vo jo door rah kar maray dill main utar gaya
Us ko mary udasi main aana hi kab tha

Vo jo mehndi maray hathun par lagi rahi
main bhool gayi, us mehndi ko sukhna hi kab tha

Har sapna to tot ta jata ha khud hi ab muj say
In sapnoon ki door ko sulhjna hi kab tha

Haan saaray kasoor sirf maray hi thay
Vo ata bhi to mujha piyar karna hi kab tha
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Re: Totay Sapnay - 14th May 2002, 10:01 PM

hi naureen
bahut hi pyara likha hai i like this sher best

Main har sham us ki yaad main chargh jalaty thi
Hawa ki zad main charaghun ko jalni hi kab tha

Vo jo mehndi maray hathun par lagi rahi
main bhool gayi, us mehndi ko sukhna hi kab tha

bahut hi pyara laga yeh wala sher aage bhi likhti rehiyega
take care bbye
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Thumbs up In Pain - 15th May 2002, 01:09 PM

Dear Noureen
I like your sher is is very nice. I like it all from top to bottom.

You sound like you have been hurt in love, some one as hurt your feelings or broken your heart.

I am sorry to hear this, but please carry on writing this is the best way to express your feelings.


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