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I the Moon, and The Boy - 7th December 2005, 12:39 AM

Hey everyone,
Well…I havent written poetry for a while…so this is a little sloppy…but I was reading one of my friend karthik’s poems…its called “My Only Wish!!!” and I suddenly got an idea from it…so I tried to present something familiar to it…let’s see wht u think…and again I will say…I got the idea as I was reading karthik’s “My Only Wish!!!”


In the waxing cycle of my day,
I came upon a strange figure
A young boy, with eyes having a lot to say
To him, I said “Little boy, come hither
Tell me you troubles…tell me your bother
He looked at me with a innocent face
And said “I have lost….I have lost the race”
Confused, I said “It’s just a race….no big deal”
The boy smiled sadly and said:

“You are the moon…you do not know
You are marveled at….loved…you do not know
You do not know why my tears fall continuously
For she is not hear to wipe them away
You do not know why my heart is marred
For she always promised, but didn’t stay
You do not know I can not sleep
For her beautiful face will not let me close my eyes
You do not know how much I love her
For she will never be mine
Loving her is a waste of tears and time
But I still do…and it is killing me
To see her so happy, so unlike me
And now…I have lost the race
The race against time….
For I will pass away…
Before I could make her mine
Death has knocked on my door
I will have to let it in
But my one wish before I go…
Is to fall into her arms
To feel her gentle caress
But, o beautiful moon, that is not to be
She will never be mine
There is no more time…..”

And I, the beautiful and precious moon
Had nothing to say but:
“Young man…never have I seen
A more loving man than thee
Never have I seen…
A lover as sad as thee”
And the boy closed his eyes…
Letting the angel of death
Take him away…


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7th December 2005, 12:49 AM

Dear Warda...! Lovely job you have done...! Made me remember a
quote...!

It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all...!

Keep sharing your feelings like this...ok ?

And take good care of yourself

Amanspeare...!



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7th December 2005, 08:25 AM

oyeeeee meri choti si bachchi........
inspired frm me??
chaloo atleast there is one person who get inspired readin me
and comin to the poem...
it was great readin it...but i dint loose the race yet...idiott...u've written on me naaaaa
very nicely written
take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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7th December 2005, 08:42 AM

hi sweets.........
how r u doing dear?
u have written really well dear....
loved it...do write more often..........
take care sweets...keep smiling....bye


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11th December 2005, 10:47 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Mushkil
Dear Warda...! Lovely job you have done...! Made me remember a
quote...!

It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all...!

Keep sharing your feelings like this...ok ?

And take good care of yourself

Amanspeare...!

hi amanspeare!!!!!!!

thanx for always supporting me and liking yet another one of my words....
and yes....the quote is very true.....it is better to have known tht feeling of love...than not to have known at all.....

u take care
bye
u kno meeeeeeeeeeeeee


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11th December 2005, 10:51 PM

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oyeeeee meri choti si bachchi........
inspired frm me??
chaloo atleast there is one person who get inspired readin me
and comin to the poem...
it was great readin it...but i dint loose the race yet...idiott...u've written on me naaaaa
very nicely written
take care
oyyyeeeeee meray dada!

ya i was inspired by u......and arre idiot....tumhe kis idiot ne kaha k i was writing on u.....mujhe pata hai tumne race nahi haari....idiotttttt....i was writing on someone else...although i dont know tht someone is yet .........

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx for liking it

and guesssssssss whttttttttt......im comin to hydrabad.....lolzzzz....just kiddin

take care
byeeeeeeeeeee
ur choti si bacccchhiiiiiii


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11th December 2005, 10:53 PM

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hi sweets.........
how r u doing dear?
u have written really well dear....
loved it...do write more often..........
take care sweets...keep smiling....bye
hi farhana!!

im fine and wht abt u??? i hope ur doing good too
and thanx for liking my effort.......but there is one thng...i swear im losing my touch...i seem to be writing less and less shayri
.......but i willl keeeep writing

thanx again
take care always

bye
warda


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