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Tay huna tha abhi - 20th May 2002, 05:20 PM

Vo bewafa ha ya bawafa, yeh tay na hu paya tha
Vo apna ha ya begana, yeh tay na hu paya tha

Khil gayay kitanay muhabat kay phool us kay liya yunhi
Abhi say yaadun kay saharay jena tha, yeh tay na hu paya tha

Us ki yaad ko seenay say laga kar behtna hu ga
Us kay sath jeena marna tha, Yeh tay na hu paya tha

Us kay narm marmary hathun ki sarsarahat baqi ha
Yun us say bechar jana tha, yeh tay na hu paya tha

Abhi to us kay huntoun ko kuch or pena tha mujha
Vo sub kuch la jaya ga, yeh tay na hu paya tha

Abhi to agazay safar ki ulghnayn baqi thi
Juda hu kar zinda rehna tha, yeh tay na hu paya tha
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Thumbs up Reply - 20th May 2002, 05:49 PM

Dear Noureen ji
I have replied to you before and told you how good of a poet you are and also asked of what dard and pain you have. because from what I can see it seems like some one has hurt you. Anyway, you said that there is no such thing and you have no dard then how do you write such great poerty about dard pain bewafai. because you have to have pain to know the feelings.

Anyway here is one of my fav poems written by Shakeel Badayuni, a great poet:

YEH AISH-O-TARAB KEY MATWAALE
BEKAAR KI BAATEIN KARTE HAIN
PAAYAL KE GHAMON KAA ILM NAHIN
JHANKAAR KI BAATEIN KARTE HAIN

NAAHAK HAI HAWAS KEY BANDON KO
NAZZAARA-E-FITARAT KAA DAAWAA
AANKHON MEIN NAHIN HAI BETAABI
DEEDAAR KI BAATEIN KARTE HAIN

KAHTEIN HAIN UNHIN KO DUSHMAN-E-DIL
HAI NAAM UNHIN KAA NASEYH BHI
WOH LOGH JO RAH KAR SAAHIL PAR
MANJHDHAAR KI BAATEIN KARTE HAIN

PAHUNCHEIN HAIN JO APNI MANZIL PAR
UN KO TO NAHIN KUCHH NAAZ-E-SAFAR
CHALNE KAA JINHEIN MAQDUR NAHIN
RAFTAAR KI BATEIN KARTE HAIN

Hope you like it, it suits you.

Waiting for your reply

Faisla


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hi - 20th May 2002, 08:24 PM

salam naureen ji ap bahut acha likhtin hain apki shayri main bhi bahut dard hota hai magar pata nahi main kaab aisa likh sakongi leykin ap plz likna maat choreyga keep riting khuda hafiz....


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