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duniya bhee do hotee hain -
27th January 2006, 10:33 PM
duniya bhee do hotee hain
too aaj ye mujh se kahtee hai ik dunya main main rahata hoon ik duniya main too rahtee hai mera ye manhoos safar teree rahon pe kaise thahare mere dono pair hain jakhmee tujh ko pankh mile sunahare main gir gir ke chalata hoon too badal par uratee hai duniya bhee do hotee hain too aaj ye mujh se kahtee hai dil ko kaise ye rang dikahyen duniya do hain kaise samjhayen tujhko bahalane ko yoon hee zahir main gar bhool bhee jayen mere liye ab dil ek mandir too ab is main hee rahatee hai duniya bhee do hotee hain too aaj ye mujh se kahtee hai Anil |
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28th January 2006, 06:31 AM
wow
very nice anil ji, tum ek hi din mein kitne kalam likh lete ho? aap har baat ko apni poem mein shaamil kar lete ho, bahot khoob! keep writting. TC |
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devangi -
11th February 2006, 11:32 AM
ye bahut dil se likhee meree nazm tumhree nazar ke siwa aaj tak kisee kee nazar main ayee hee nahee. kya hota agar tum bhee na parhteen? bahut bahut shukria
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11th February 2006, 11:37 AM
bahoot gehari baat.. ek hi jagah do duniya basti hai.. great feelings
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11th February 2006, 12:17 PM
anil ji main deevangi ki baat se shamat hoon
ek din main itna keese likh lete hain aur sab ek se bhadhkar ek . duniya do hoti hai whww nice thought keep penning down shrdh 
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Re: duniya bhee do hotee hain -
11th February 2006, 12:33 PM
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11th February 2006, 12:46 PM
bahaut umda anil sahab...
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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shukriya -
11th February 2006, 05:16 PM
ropp bahut bahut shukriya tumhara is nazm ke pas ana aur farhana tumhaar likha to main prhata hoon tum jab mujeh parhtee ho aur achha lagata hai
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shukriya -
18th March 2006, 12:44 PM
tumhere ye lafz mujh pe udhar the main tumhe shukriya bhee nahee kah paya meree rachanaye agar sach main ek se barh kar ek lagtee hai itna achha likhne walee ko to achha lagega hee SHRADDHA shukriya
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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18th March 2006, 02:19 PM
tum khud bahut umda likhtee ho par meree shayree ache lagee tumhe mujeh achha laga
shukriya Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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18th March 2006, 02:31 PM
Anil ji
phirse ik nayi soch.. sacch bahut pasand aayi ye bhi sab ki tarah yu hin likhte rahiye tc jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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Re: duniya bhee do hotee hain -
18th March 2006, 03:30 PM
dil ko kaise ye rang dikahyen
duniya do hain kaise samjhayen tujhko bahalane ko yoon hee zahir main gar bhool bhee jayen mere liye ab dil ek mandir too ab is main hee rahatee hai duniya bhee do hotee hain too aaj ye mujh se kahtee hai Kis raah chal pade ho aey man Kaise ab tumhein samjhayein Har shakhs ke saath tum jaate ho badal Kis rang mein tujhko apnayein Mere apne man ne hi Jabse badle hain rang Hum isi soch mein jiye Ki kaash dil ke saath hum bhi badal jayein... Kaash... Anil Ji, Bahut khoob ek baar phir! Yun hi likhte rahiye. ... jab se kisi ne karli hai suraj ki chori aao chal ke suraj dhoondhein aur na mile toh kiran kiran phir jama karein hum aur ik suraj naya banyein -NM |
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Re: duniya bhee do hotee hain -
18th March 2006, 06:05 PM
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Tumhare dil ke mandir pe sajda koi kyuN na kare .. murat usme koi dikhe na dikhe .. uski parchai dikh hi jayegi .. mehsoos ho hi jayega .. ki yahaN pyar naam ka khuda to hai hi ... bohta hi acchi saaf aur sundar ... meri daad tumhare naam kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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18th March 2006, 06:40 PM
bahut khoob anil bhai yuhi likhte raho
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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18th March 2006, 06:49 PM
hi anil ji
bahut hi achha likha hai aapney yuhi likhte rahna bye tc |
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shukriya -
18th March 2006, 08:48 PM
shweta shukriya aur meree har soch ko samjhne ke liye dhanywad. aam trend se alag hat ke kuch likhoon aur tumhara sath milta rahe to achha lagata hai dobara shukriya
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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wah -
18th March 2006, 08:50 PM
Kis raah chal pade ho aey man
Kaise ab tumhein samjhayein Har shakhs ke saath tum jaate ho badal Kis rang mein tujhko apnayein Mere apne man ne hi Jabse badle hain rang Hum isi soch mein jiye Ki kaash dil ke saath hum bhi badal jayein... Kaash... jo baat tumahree post main dikhnee chahiye thee tum ne meree kavita ko de dee bahut achha sa yahan likh ke meree kavita ko sundar kar diya ab koyee ayega kavita parhne ko ayee ayega tumahre remark parhne dhanyawad shalini Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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dhanyawad -
18th March 2006, 08:54 PM
kunal batayo to mere dil ke mandir main kaun kaun hain? bahut se log hain dil hai sab ka nam likhoon par koyee nam aise main zaroor chhoot jayega aur use bura lagega par ye jan lo tum un main se ek ho jis dil main itne achhe pyare log hon woh dil mandir nahee hoga to kya hoga us main se pyar kvita ban ke bahega hee na? main nahee likhata kunal sach main nahee likh pata main koyee tum se hai mere dil main baitha rahata hai aur mujhe batata rahata hai ab kya likhna hai?
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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mehul ka shukriya -
18th March 2006, 08:56 PM
ham sab ke ladle mehul ka dhanywad bahut sara
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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18th March 2006, 08:58 PM
surbhi shukriya tum kahtee ho yoon hee likhte rahana main koshish karoonag ke likh sakoon yoon hee sada
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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18th March 2006, 10:13 PM
duniya bhee do hotee hain
too aaj ye mujh se kahtee hai ik dunya main main rahata hoon ik duniya main too rahtee hai............. namskar anil ji, aapki yeh lines toh jaise dil tak utar gayi........really very nice...........bahut hi sundar hai yeh aapki nazam.............. with best wishes ranju |
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dhanyawad -
19th March 2006, 06:02 AM
likhne wale kee koshish hotee hai dil tak utre aap ke dil tak pahunchee meree nazm achha laga
ANil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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17th May 2006, 05:35 PM
mera ye manhoos safar
teree rahon pe kaise thahare mere dono pair hain jakhmee tujh ko pankh mile sunahare main gir gir ke chalata hoon too badal par uratee hai duniya bhee do hotee hain too aaj ye mujh se kahtee hai wah!.....aapki kavitaon mein ek sukoon hai....bahut hia cha lagta hai aapki kavtayen padhna.....bahut khoobsurat hai ye kavita bhi....duniya bhi do hoti hain....wah! dil se nikli daad kabool kijiyega apna khayal rakhyiega |
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meree kavita aur tum |
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17th May 2006, 07:47 PM
meree kavita aur tumahre rishte gahare hote ja rahe hain jo kavita chip jatee hai mujh se bhee use bhee talash kar letee ho tum jo panktiyan tum ne chunee hain meree bhee basand kee hain bas yoon hee meree shayree ke sath chaltee rahana
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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