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yaad beete dinoN kii dilaate ho kyoN
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yaad beete dinoN kii dilaate ho kyoN - 13th June 2002, 06:59 AM

yaad beete dinoN kii dilaate ho kyoN
maiN bahut ro chukaa, ab rulaate ho kyoN

kab ye maiN ne kahaa hai, ho tum be'vafaa
apnii majbuuriyaaN tum bataate ho kyoN

gar nahiiN ho kisii ke gunahgaar tum
apnaa muNh is jahaaN se chhupaate ho kyoN

kyaa milegaa tumheN raakh ke Dher se
Khaak meN mujh ko aaKhir milaate ho kyoN

surKh hai Khuun-e-dil bhii miraa, ai sanam!
apne haathoN meN meNhdii lagaate ho kyoN

lauT kar apne ghar bhii na maiN jaa sakuuN
saaqiyaa! mujh ko itnii pilaate ho kyoN

dekh kar mujh ko kahtaa hai ye, aainaa
aaNkh nam hai to phir muskuraate ho kyoN

huuN Khataavaar, maiN Khud chalaa jaauuNgaa
apnii mehfil se tum uTh ke jaate ho kyoN

dostoN kii tarah mat milo, Thiik hai
dushmanoN kii tarah pesh aate ho kyoN

jab ai "maikasH" huaa tum se voh be'vafaa
tum bhi apni taraf se nibhaate ho kyoN !!


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13th June 2002, 09:19 PM

Sat Sri Akal Jashan ji _/\_

As always I have no words to describe how beautifully you've written.
Khaaskar yeh lines

yaad beete dinoN kii dilaate ho kyoN
maiN bahut ro chukaa, ab rulaate ho kyoN

gar nahiiN ho kisii ke gunahgaar tum
apnaa muNh is jahaaN se chhupaate ho kyoN

lauT kar apne ghar bhii na maiN jaa sakuuN
saaqiyaa! mujh ko itnii pilaate ho kyoN

dostoN kii tarah mat milo, Thiik hai
dushmanoN kii tarah pesh aate ho kyoN

aise he likhte rahiye ga......
chalte hain.....

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14th June 2002, 09:04 AM

kaisi ho paglii....?


duaa na salaam...kahaaN ho aaj-kal....?

meri khushnasiibii ke tumhe is gareeb ki yaad aayi.....ghazal pasaNd farmaane ka shukria...!!


i was surprised to see that u didn't like the "maqta" of the ghazal...

jab ai "maikasH" huaa tum se voh be'vafaa
tum bhi apni taraf se nibhaate ho kyoN !!

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very nice - 15th June 2002, 12:07 AM

maikashjiiiiiii
bahut bahut acha likha hai
aapke shabdo me jaado aur dard ki ajeeb si jhalak mehsus ki maine....

yaad beete dinoN kii dilaate ho kyoN
maiN bahut ro chukaa, ab rulaate ho kyoN

kab ye maiN ne kahaa hai, ho tum be'vafaa
apnii majbuuriyaaN tum bataate ho kyoN

gar nahiiN ho kisii ke gunahgaar tum
apnaa muNh is jahaaN se chhupaate ho kyoN

kyaa milegaa tumheN raakh ke Dher se
Khaak meN mujh ko aaKhir milaate ho kyoN

surKh hai Khuun-e-dil bhii miraa, ai sanam!
apne haathoN meN meNhdii lagaate ho kyoN

lauT kar apne ghar bhii na maiN jaa sakuuN
saaqiyaa! mujh ko itnii pilaate ho kyoN

dekh kar mujh ko kahtaa hai ye, aainaa
aaNkh nam hai to phir muskuraate ho kyoN

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hi maikaash ji...that was very nice. I really really liked it.
Likhthe rehiye ga.

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Maikash saheb har sher dil me bas utarta chala gaya..............yeh tay karna mano namumkeen hai ke kaun sa sher pasandeeda raha..........har sher apna sa laga.......yeh Ghayel ki khushnasibi hai ke usne is kalaam ko padha aur us par aapko daad di.

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maikash ji .... behad umda laga aapkaa kalaam. badee suljhee huwee soch aur flow mein behte huwe alfaaz the har sher mein. padhkar bahaut anand aayaa. dheron daad aur duaon ke saath .... zarraa
   
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yaad beete dinoN kii dilaate ho kyoN
maiN bahut ro chukaa, ab rulaate ho kyoN

kab ye maiN ne kahaa hai, ho tum be'vafaa
apnii majbuuriyaaN tum bataate ho kyoN

gar nahiiN ho kisii ke gunahgaar tum
apnaa muNh is jahaaN se chhupaate ho kyoN

kyaa milegaa tumheN raakh ke Dher se
Khaak meN mujh ko aaKhir milaate ho kyoN

surKh hai Khuun-e-dil bhii miraa, ai sanam!
apne haathoN meN meNhdii lagaate ho kyoN

lauT kar apne ghar bhii na maiN jaa sakuuN
saaqiyaa! mujh ko itnii pilaate ho kyoN

dekh kar mujh ko kahtaa hai ye, aainaa
aaNkh nam hai to phir muskuraate ho kyoN

huuN Khataavaar, maiN Khud chalaa jaauuNgaa
apnii mehfil se tum uTh ke jaate ho kyoN

dostoN kii tarah mat milo, Thiik hai
dushmanoN kii tarah pesh aate ho kyoN

jab ai "maikasH" huaa tum se voh be'vafaa
tum bhi apni taraf se nibhaate ho kyoN !!


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Maikash jii,
aaki gazleN to bas dil meiN uttar jaati hai...aik aik lafz bahut kuch kehta hai...sabse khaas baat ki aapki kalam kisi tareef ki mohtaaz nahi hai...!

dekh kar mujh ko kahtaa hai ye, aainaa
aaNkh nam hai to phir muskuraate ho kyoN

yeh sher bahuttttttttt apna sa lga...!
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Waah janaab maikash saahab... kya adaakari hai.. itnaa lutf milaa hai aapke is kalaam se ke main bataa nahi saktaa...

huuN Khataavaar, maiN Khud chalaa jaauuNgaa
apnii mehfil se tum uTh ke jaate ho kyoN


is sher se na jaane kya rafaaqat hui ke bas alfaaz damm tod chuke hain... daad ka nazraana peshe aqeedat hai.. qubool farmaaen...

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28th December 2012, 03:43 PM

ba-sad-mazrat keh raha huuN ki das saal pehle jin hazraat ke khutuut ka jawaab maiN nahiiN de paaya un se behadd sharmiNdaa huuN

muaaf kar dijiyega

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Maikash saheb har sher dil me bas utarta chala gaya..............yeh tay karna mano namumkeen hai ke kaun sa sher pasandeeda raha..........har sher apna sa laga.......yeh Ghayel ki khushnasibi hai ke usne is kalaam ko padha aur us par aapko daad di.

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ba-har-haal pazi'raii ke liye mamnoon huuN aapka, bohat shukriya janaab


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maikash ji .... behad umda laga aapkaa kalaam. badee suljhee huwee soch aur flow mein behte huwe alfaaz the har sher mein. padhkar bahaut anand aayaa. dheron daad aur duaon ke saath .... zarraa
zarraa bhai aadaab,


bhai aapse se vohi darkhuvaast hai ke muaaf kijiyega maine yeh Ghazal bohat saal na dekhi aaj bhi Sunita jee ki ba'daulat saamne aayi hai, unka sad-shukriya

aap jaisa sho'raa se daad naseeb ho to hauNslaa do-baalaa ho jaata hai, Ghazal pasaNd farmaane ka bohat shukriya saheb

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goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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Maikash jii,
aaki gazleN to bas dil meiN uttar jaati hai...aik aik lafz bahut kuch kehta hai...sabse khaas baat ki aapki kalam kisi tareef ki mohtaaz nahi hai...!

dekh kar mujh ko kahtaa hai ye, aainaa
aaNkh nam hai to phir muskuraate ho kyoN

yeh sher bahuttttttttt apna sa lga...!
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ba-har-haal aap hamesha se hi hauNsla badhaati aayi haiN aur maiN hamesha ki tarah is baar bhi aapka nihaayat shukurguzaar huuN

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bahut achhi hai ghazal aapki..daad hazir


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Waah janaab maikash saahab... kya adaakari hai.. itnaa lutf milaa hai aapke is kalaam se ke main bataa nahi saktaa...

huuN Khataavaar, maiN Khud chalaa jaauuNgaa
apnii mehfil se tum uTh ke jaate ho kyoN


is sher se na jaane kya rafaaqat hui ke bas alfaaz damm tod chuke hain... daad ka nazraana peshe aqeedat hai.. qubool farmaaen...

Shaad...
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amaa bohat hi puraani Ghazal hai aur yeh Ghaal aaj kahi hoti to is meiN ka'ii she'r aise haiN jo na hote shayad

aapko aaj bhi yeh kisi kaam ki lagi yeh jaan kar achcha lagaa aur mujh na'ehl ka hauNslaa badhaane ke liye maskhoor huuN aapka bhai

bohat shukriya

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yaad beete dinoN kii dilaate ho kyoN
maiN bahut ro chukaa, ab rulaate ho kyoN

kab ye maiN ne kahaa hai, ho tum be'vafaa
apnii majbuuriyaaN tum bataate ho kyoN

gar nahiiN ho kisii ke gunahgaar tum
apnaa muNh is jahaaN se chhupaate ho kyoN

kyaa milegaa tumheN raakh ke Dher se
Khaak meN mujh ko aaKhir milaate ho kyoN

surKh hai Khuun-e-dil bhii miraa, ai sanam!
apne haathoN meN meNhdii lagaate ho kyoN

lauT kar apne ghar bhii na maiN jaa sakuuN
saaqiyaa! mujh ko itnii pilaate ho kyoN

dekh kar mujh ko kahtaa hai ye, aainaa
aaNkh nam hai to phir muskuraate ho kyoN

huuN Khataavaar, maiN Khud chalaa jaauuNgaa
apnii mehfil se tum uTh ke jaate ho kyoN

dostoN kii tarah mat milo, Thiik hai
dushmanoN kii tarah pesh aate ho kyoN

jab ai "maikasH" huaa tum se voh be'vafaa
tum bhi apni taraf se nibhaate ho kyoN !!


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bahut achhi hai ghazal aapki..daad hazir
sar-aaNkhoN par, bohat shukriya

rab raakha
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
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Masha Allah behad umda ghazal hai Maikash ji.....her sher lajawaab...jitni bhi taareef ki jaaye kam hai....

Aapki or se bohat jald ek nayi ghazal ka intezaar hai.......
aadaab Zainy sahiba

Ghazal ki pazi'raii ke liye shukriya qabuul farmaaiiye

jee piTaara khola to hai, kuch haaTh meiN aaya to zaroor post karuuNga


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yaad beete dinoN kii dilaate ho kyoN
maiN bahut ro chukaa, ab rulaate ho kyoN

kab ye maiN ne kahaa hai, ho tum be'vafaa
apnii majbuuriyaaN tum bataate ho kyoN

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4th January 2013, 07:02 PM

Bhai saaheb ...

..sharaab jitni puraani ho nasha utna barhta hai yakeenan aapne bahut keemti mai pila dee..
Maza aa gaya sir ..jitni tareef kareiN utni kam hai
Kuch sher to parhte hue laga kisi daastaN me chala gaya
Daad tag e dil se hai
Qubool farmaaeiN
Salamat rahiye
Apna khyaal rakhiye

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dekh kar mujh ko kahtaa hai ye, aainaa
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