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Jo Khayallon Mein Abb Aate Nahin - 13th May 2006, 09:39 AM

Jazbaat hain kuch Dil ke jo Kaagaz par abb aate nahin
Ehsas hain unke Jo Khayallon mein abb aate Nahin

Meri Palkon par aaj bhi Simte hain kuch Lamhe
Wo Pal kyun thehre hain…Kyun Guzar abb jate nahin

Kshitiz ke paar kisi ne Chand koi khilaya tha
Ye aur baat hai ki Taare bhi humein Abb bulate nahin

Dua thi….tu bane Gulshan, main beshaq Veerana
Khaak ho rahe iss Dil mein Armaan koi abb Sazate nahin

Bebasi hai kuch aisi ke Khamosh hai aaj “wafa”
Rusva na ho tu, teri Bewafai ka Raag hum abb gaate nahin


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bahut khoobsoorat - 13th May 2006, 10:15 AM

ek baar phir bahut gaharee baat kahee hai tum ne wah achha laga tum ko bahut kuch likhna hai abhee
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13th May 2006, 10:17 AM

Jazbaat hain kuch Dil ke jo Kaagaz par abb aate nahin
Ehsas hain unke Jo Khayallon mein abb aate Nahin

Meri Palkon par aaj bhi Simte hain kuch Lamhe
Wo Pal kyun thehre hain…Kyun Guzar abb jate nahin

waaah....bahut khoob likha hai...


Kshitiz ke paar kisi ne Chand koi khilaya tha
Ye aur baat hai ki Taare bhi humein Abb bulate nahin

Dua thi….tu bane Gulshan, main beshaq Veerana
Khaak ho rahe iss Dil mein Armaan koi abb Sazate nahin

well expressed....


Bebasi hai kuch aisi ke Khamosh hai aaj “wafa”
Rusva na ho tu, teri Bewafai ka Raag hum abb gaate nahin

aah... very well expressed... loved this sher....

Wafa,

Ek baar fir bahut hi khoobsurat aur asardaar kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne.... khoosurati se ehsaas piroye hin... I liked it a lot... o keep writing like this.... TC...


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13th May 2006, 05:56 PM

Jazbaat hain kuch Dil ke jo Kaagaz par abb aate nahin
Ehsas hain unke Jo Khayallon mein abb aate Nahin

Meri Palkon par aaj bhi Simte hain kuch Lamhe
Wo Pal kyun thehre hain…Kyun Guzar abb jate nahin


Namaskar Wafa Ji

Iss baar bhi aapka likha bahut acha laga.....Dil ki gehrayi se nikley yeh shabd bahut kuch keh rahey hain........Dil ko chuu gaya aapka qalam...mere daad kabul kijeyega.......aur yuun hi likhtey rahiye...

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Re: Jo Khayallon Mein Abb Aate Nahin - 14th May 2006, 12:49 AM

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Jazbaat hain kuch Dil ke jo Kaagaz par abb aate nahin
Ehsas hain unke Jo Khayallon mein abb aate Nahin

Meri Palkon par aaj bhi Simte hain kuch Lamhe
Wo Pal kyun thehre hain…Kyun Guzar abb jate nahin

Kshitiz ke paar kisi ne Chand koi khilaya tha
Ye aur baat hai ki Taare bhi humein Abb bulate nahin

Dua thi….tu bane Gulshan, main beshaq Veerana
Khaak ho rahe iss Dil mein Armaan koi abb Sazate nahin

Bebasi hai kuch aisi ke Khamosh hai aaj “wafa”
Rusva na ho tu, teri Bewafai ka Raag hum abb gaate nahin
bahut khoob wafaa ji aap ko padhna hamesha ek achha experince raha hai ,bahut khubsurat likha hai aap ne mai is mai kuchh lines add karta hu


Intazaar tera karte karte bhi jee lete ham
par naseeb mai un lamho ki abb saugaate nahi

Gham-e-ulfat mai tanha jina sikh liya hai maine
Khwaab tere bhi mera dil abb dukhaate nahi

ek wafaa karti rahi hamesha wafaa khayaalat se
Varna zamaanevaale bhi is gam ko apnaate nahi

Apne hi jamal ki nishaani hai ye bahte aansu
aajmaaya hai hamne,gairo se chaut khaate nahi

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take care
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Re: bahut khoobsoorat - 14th May 2006, 01:48 PM

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ek baar phir bahut gaharee baat kahee hai tum ne wah achha laga tum ko bahut kuch likhna hai abhee
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bahut bahut shukriya Anil ji.....

aapko pasand aaya ye kalaam..mujhe bahut acha laga...bahut shukriya

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15th May 2006, 01:41 PM

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Jazbaat hain kuch Dil ke jo Kaagaz par abb aate nahin
Ehsas hain unke Jo Khayallon mein abb aate Nahin

Meri Palkon par aaj bhi Simte hain kuch Lamhe
Wo Pal kyun thehre hain…Kyun Guzar abb jate nahin

waaah....bahut khoob likha hai...


Kshitiz ke paar kisi ne Chand koi khilaya tha
Ye aur baat hai ki Taare bhi humein Abb bulate nahin

Dua thi….tu bane Gulshan, main beshaq Veerana
Khaak ho rahe iss Dil mein Armaan koi abb Sazate nahin

well expressed....


Bebasi hai kuch aisi ke Khamosh hai aaj “wafa”
Rusva na ho tu, teri Bewafai ka Raag hum abb gaate nahin

aah... very well expressed... loved this sher....

Wafa,

Ek baar fir bahut hi khoobsurat aur asardaar kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne.... khoosurati se ehsaas piroye hin... I liked it a lot... o keep writing like this.... TC...
Pulkit....

bahut bahut shukriya...aapko ye kalaam pasand aaya....bahut shukriya....aapke reply ka intezar rehta hai....aap yahan aaye...acha laga.....shukriya

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15th May 2006, 03:43 PM

wafa jee
wah wah wah or kya kahun samjh hee nahi paa raha dil ke alfaajon ko behad khubsoorti se sanjoya hai aapne ek naye andaj main bayan kiya hai khud ko daad kabool kijiye or yun hee aate rahiye likhte rahiye naye ahsas naye jajbaat hamare liye
khush rahiye, or khush rakhiye sabhi ko


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15th May 2006, 06:31 PM

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Jazbaat hain kuch Dil ke jo Kaagaz par abb aate nahin
Ehsas hain unke Jo Khayallon mein abb aate Nahin

Meri Palkon par aaj bhi Simte hain kuch Lamhe
Wo Pal kyun thehre hain…Kyun Guzar abb jate nahin


Namaskar Wafa Ji

Iss baar bhi aapka likha bahut acha laga.....Dil ki gehrayi se nikley yeh shabd bahut kuch keh rahey hain........Dil ko chuu gaya aapka qalam...mere daad kabul kijeyega.......aur yuun hi likhtey rahiye...

Apna khyal rakhiyega

Sukanya ji..

bahut acha laga aapko yahan dekhkar….bahut shukriyaa..apko mera kalaam pasand aaya…bahut bahut shurkiya….

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Re: Re: Jo Khayallon Mein Abb Aate Nahin - 15th May 2006, 06:32 PM

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bahut khoob wafaa ji aap ko padhna hamesha ek achha experince raha hai ,bahut khubsurat likha hai aap ne mai is mai kuchh lines add karta hu


Intazaar tera karte karte bhi jee lete ham
par naseeb mai un lamho ki abb saugaate nahi

Gham-e-ulfat mai tanha jina sikh liya hai maine
Khwaab tere bhi mera dil abb dukhaate nahi

ek wafaa karti rahi hamesha wafaa khayaalat se
Varna zamaanevaale bhi is gam ko apnaate nahi

Apne hi jamal ki nishaani hai ye bahte aansu
aajmaaya hai hamne,gairo se chaut khaate nahi

regards
take care
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wah!.... ….’gairon se chaut khate nahin”…… bahut khoob!

daad kabool kijiyega

aap yahan aaye..kalaam pasand kiya…bahut bahut shukriya

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wafa jee
wah wah wah or kya kahun samjh hee nahi paa raha dil ke alfaajon ko behad khubsoorti se sanjoya hai aapne ek naye andaj main bayan kiya hai khud ko daad kabool kijiye or yun hee aate rahiye likhte rahiye naye ahsas naye jajbaat hamare liye
khush rahiye, or khush rakhiye sabhi ko
Anish..

bahut shukriya aap yahan aaye....kalaam apko pasand aaya...bahut bahut shukriya....

.....sabka sath bana rahe..bazm mein shirkat jari rahegi.....

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bahut khoob likha he apne hamesha ki tarah

keep writing

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wafaa ji apki creation wakayi dilii daastan bayaan karti hai...

"Meri Palkon par aaj bhi Simte hain kuch Lamhe
Wo Pal kyun thehre hain…Kyun Guzar abb jate nahin"

yeh sher sacch mein bahut pyara lagaa... aise hi likhte rahiye.. tc


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17th May 2006, 11:47 AM

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bahut khoob likha he apne hamesha ki tarah

keep writing

take care
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Rubeena ji…namaskar

bahut shukriya iss kalaam par gaur farmane ke liye…isse pasand karne ke liye…….shukriya

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wafaa ji apki creation wakayi dilii daastan bayaan karti hai...

"Meri Palkon par aaj bhi Simte hain kuch Lamhe
Wo Pal kyun thehre hain…Kyun Guzar abb jate nahin"

yeh sher sacch mein bahut pyara lagaa... aise hi likhte rahiye.. tc
Shweta...

aap yahan aayi..mere kalaam ko pasand kiya..bahut shukriya….

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