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apne nishaane pe aitbaar rakhte hain
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apne nishaane pe aitbaar rakhte hain - 5th September 2001, 04:46 PM

apne nishaane pe aitbaar rakhte hain
woh ik teer hamesha taaiyaar rakhte hain
koi dawaa unpe asar nahin karti
seene mein jo dil bimaar rakhte hain
naadan karta hai gul nazar unko
kadmon tale jo bahaar rakhte hain
hum ik tamanna rakhte hain saamne unke
nikaal ke woh khanjjar hazaar rakhte hain

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hi - 19th April 2006, 10:23 AM

bahut badhiya maikash sahab,

aapki etani old creation ko aaj padha..
bahut achchha laga..

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Re: apne nishaane pe aitbaar rakhte hain - 27th August 2006, 08:20 PM

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apne nishaane pe aitbaar rakhte hain
woh ik teer hamesha taaiyaar rakhte hain
koi dawaa unpe asar nahin karti
seene mein jo dil bimaar rakhte hain
naadan karta hai gul nazar unko
kadmon tale jo bahaar rakhte hain
hum ik tamanna rakhte hain saamne unke
nikaal ke woh khanjjar hazaar rakhte hain

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MaikasH bhaaii,

Aap ko paRhna mujeh hamesha achchha lagta hai.. Aur essliye sochaa kee aaj aap ke puraane ghazaloN ko DhunD DhunD kar paRha jaaye... itni saadgii se itne gehre khayaalaat ka bayaaN.. waah! waah! aasaan lafzoN se khoobsuurat Ghazal kahna aap se hee hame seekhna paRega.. har aashaar behtariin hai... khayaal aur andaaz e bayaaN la-jawaab....

ess nau seekhiye ka daad haazir hai... qubool farmaayeN.. aur yuuN hee likhte raheN....

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