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ghazal - 24th September 2006, 10:29 AM

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andhaera is museebat ka bataayae sae nahin bat ta
wazan is ka bhi ziyaada hai,ghataayae sae nahin ghat ta

suna hai ser jhukaanae sae,khuda daeta hai hum sab ko
jhuka sajdae main ser maera,uttayae sae nahin utt ta

kisi ko doash kiya daena,yehi khismat ka likha hai
jo kae khismat main hona hai,mitaayae sae nahin mitt ta

naseeboan main ujardnae kae siwa ,rakha hai kiya ayae RAZ
ujardna jis ko hota hai,sajaayae sae nahin sajta

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24th September 2006, 01:07 PM

ghazal
andhaera is museebat ka bataayae sae nahin bat ta
wazan is ka bhi ziyaada hai,ghataayae sae nahin ghat ta

suna hai ser jhukaanae sae,khuda daeta hai hum sab ko
jhuka sajdae main ser maera,uttayae sae nahin utt ta

kisi ko doash kiya daena,yehi khismat ka likha hai
jo kae khismat main hona hai,mitaayae sae nahin mitt ta

naseeboan main ujardnae kae siwa ,rakha hai kiya ayae RAZ
ujardna jis ko hota hai,sajaayae sae nahin sajta

razia yasmeen raz


bahot khub razia ji


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aacha laga is bar bhi aapko padhke

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24th September 2006, 08:11 PM

suna hai ser jhukaanae sae,khuda daeta hai hum sab ko
jhuka sajdae main ser maera,uttayae sae nahin utt ta

kisi ko doash kiya daena,yehi khismat ka likha hai
jo kae khismat main hona hai,mitaayae sae nahin mitt ta

waaah razia ji,kya kehne aapke.well said.

kayi dino baad aaj fursat mili yahan aane ki aur aapka yeh shaandaar kalaam padhne naseeb hua.bahut khoob.bahut hi badhiya.likhte rahiye.


yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??

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Re: ghazal - 25th September 2006, 02:38 PM

suna hai ser jhukaanae sae,khuda daeta hai hum sab ko
jhuka sajdae main ser maera,uttayae sae nahin utt ta

kisi ko doash kiya daena,yehi khismat ka likha hai
jo kae khismat main hona hai,mitaayae sae nahin mitt ta

naseeboan main ujardnae kae siwa ,rakha hai kiya ayae RAZ
ujardna jis ko hota hai,sajaayae sae nahin sajta

razia sahiba
kya baat hai...!!! is naacheez ka salaam kubool kijiye...aaj ek arse baad is mehfil mein aana ho raha hai....waqt "chura" kar aaj aapko padha to laga jaise dil e sehra mein mudaddtton baad saba bahi hai...!! ek taazgi se labrez ho kar aap ko daad dene baitha hoon....gazal ke jis "chashme" se aap mujhe dunia dikhati hai ,,bas barbas labon se "wah" nikal padta hai...har sher haqeeqat ka jama pehne aankhon se kuch yun guzarta hai jaise kisi bujurg ki naseehatein...aur yehi adda aapki mujhe behad pasand hai....haqeeqat bayan karna wo bhi kis khoobi se....!!! wah..!!
meri duayein kubool kijiye..apna khayal rakhiye
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25th September 2006, 06:50 PM

wah! wah! bahut khoob!


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