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Kaash....................... - 22nd October 2006, 10:35 PM

This is my first mail in Dard I hope all the members like it.
AISA THA KABHI APNE THE SABHI
LAMHE NAGHME KHUSHIYON KA JAHAN
RAASTE MEIN MILI HAI TAARIKIYAN
PALKON KO NAMI NAZRON KO DHUAN
EK AAS BANDHI DILKO HAI YAKEEN
EK ROZ TO HOGI SEHER YAHAAN.........................

KAHIN SAFAR HAI KAHIN RAASTA HAI MANZIL KA
YE RAAT DIN KI GHUTAN KYUN AZAAB HAI DIL KA
RAWAN HAI KASHTI MAGAR HAR TARAF ANDHERA HAI
KISI KA DOSH NAHI YE KUSOOR MERA HAI
BUJHA HAI MERE HI HAATHON
CHIRAG SAAHIL KA......................
KAHIN SAFAR HAI KAHIN RAASTA HAI MANZIL KA
YE RAAT DIN KI GHUTAN KYUN AZAAB HAI DIL KA.........
   
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22nd October 2006, 10:38 PM

fari ji aapne kaha k aapki ye shayri e dard me pehli hi post hai ye pehli hai aur bahot hi achhi hai
bas aap ehsas ke sath likhe to zarur likh paongi achha laga apko padhke

aur khas karke ye line pasand aayi

KAHIN SAFAR HAI KAHIN RAASTA HAI MANZIL KA
YE RAAT DIN KI GHUTAN KYUN AZAAB HAI DIL KA

likhte rahiye uhi

apna khayal rakhiyenga

khus rahiye

aapka dost
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