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Thumbs up "MERI YADON KO USNE AB KABRA ME DAFNA DI HAI..............." ek kosish .....ek ehsaas - 1st November 2006, 01:56 PM

"mere sabhi doston ko mera namaskaar....aaj main bahot dino baad "shayri-e-dard" me likh raha hu aj tak main "ishq" ke bare main likh raha tha aaj socha k kuch main bh likhu dard ke bare main , shayd main aap sab ki tarha itni achhi tarha se to dard ko nahi bayan kar paunga, mujhe pata hai par ek kosish jaroor ki hai ye sirF ek peshkas hai aur ehsaas ....ummid hai aap sab ko meri ye peshkas pasand aayengi ..aapke jawab ka intezar rahenga"



Badi hi mannato me manga tha jise maine,
Wo mannat hi meri khuda ne thukradi hai……..

Chahat is kadar thi meri zindagi me usse,
Meri chahat ko usne haste hue lautadi hai…….

Khoya rehta tha bas uske hi khwabon mein,
Khawabo ki duniya ko kisine aaj jaldadi hai,…

Mehekta tha mera pyar khusi ki mehek se,
Meri is mehek ko usne hawa me faila di hai….

dil me apne chhupaya firta tha main usko,
meri is deewangi par usne aag ab lagadi hai…..

mohhabbat na kar yun pagalon ki tarha kisise,
ye baat aaj usne mujhe pyaar se samjhadi hai……

yaadon me dooba rehta tha main har lamha,
meri yadon ko usne ab kabra me dafna di hai……

kya kahe ab “dhaval” kuch baki nahi kehne ko,
bas itna hi pata hai k aaj se suru meri barbadi hai…..


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mohhabbat na kar yun pagalon ki tarha kisise,
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hi - 1st November 2006, 05:58 PM

mohhabbat na kar yun pagalon ki tarha kisise,
ye baat aaj usne mujhe pyaar se samjhadi hai……

dhaval tumhe raj ka namaskaar....yaar kya hua?itni udassi bhari nazam..yeh share bhut pyara hai...lakin mere chhotu ko itna dard kisne diya.....main janta hoon.....magar yaar dont worry....yeh sab chalta rehta hai.....bhut achi koshish hai pehle se bhut acha likha hai.....yu hee koshish jarri rakhna....take care.......raj......


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1st November 2006, 06:41 PM

dhaval sabse pahale sorry,

aur ek baat kahu ye sab jo likha hai kaagaz tak hi siiimit rakhna..............jivan me utaraa to apki iss dost ko bahot dard hoga.........agar sirf ehasaas hai to jaroor likhiye..........

mohhabbat na kar yun pagalon ki tarha kisise,
ye baat aaj usne mujhe pyaar se samjhadi hai……

ye sher bahot pyara hai dil ko chhune vala..........daad nahi dungi yaad rakhna.........
bye

grazie

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dhavalji acha likha hai apne

khuda hafiz...........


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aur yaha aap jais dost mili mujko, bas yuhi is dost ka hamesha uhi sath dete rahiyenga

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mohhabbat na kar yun pagalon ki tarha kisise,
ye baat aaj usne mujhe pyaar se samjhadi hai……


bahut khoob!
wafa ji kaisi hai aap?

apko aaj yaha dekh ke bahot hi achha laga mujhe aapko meri ye peshkas pasnad aayi janke baht khusi mili mujhe halak mujhe jayda anubhav nahi hai dard ke bare likhne ka ,par fir bhi mujhse ho sake utni kossish jarur ki ha i bayan karke ki

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dhaval tumhe raj ka namaskaar....yaar kya hua?itni udassi bhari nazam..yeh share bhut pyara hai...lakin mere chhotu ko itna dard kisne diya.....main janta hoon.....magar yaar dont worry....yeh sab chalta rehta hai.....bhut achi koshish hai pehle se bhut acha likha hai.....yu hee koshish jarri rakhna....take care.......raj......


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2nd November 2006, 02:11 PM

mohhabbat na kar yun pagalon ki tarha kisise,
ye baat aaj usne mujhe pyaar se samjhadi hai

miyaa.n dhaval
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aaj to bakai main kamal kar diya bade pyare ehsas hain yaar
keep it up
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dhaval sabse pahale sorry,

aur ek baat kahu ye sab jo likha hai kaagaz tak hi siiimit rakhna..............jivan me utaraa to apki iss dost ko bahot dard hoga.........agar sirf ehasaas hai to jaroor likhiye..........

mohhabbat na kar yun pagalon ki tarha kisise,
ye baat aaj usne mujhe pyaar se samjhadi hai……

ye sher bahot pyara hai dil ko chhune vala..........daad nahi dungi yaad rakhna.........
bye

grazie

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dhavalji acha likha hai apne

take care
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kaisi hai aap?

aap har bar mera sath deti ho aur housla badhati ho ,badhot khusi hui aapko yaha dekh ke sach me mujhe bahot achhe dost mile hai yaha par


aap bas yuhi sath dete rahiyenga

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mohhabbat na kar yun pagalon ki tarha kisise,
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miyaa.n dhaval
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aaj to bakai main kamal kar diya bade pyare ehsas hain yaar
keep it up
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bas aap aaye yaha bahot achha laga, bas aise hi sath dete rahiye shaitaan aap ka peecha aise hi chhodne wala nahi ok???????????


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"mere sabhi doston ko mera namaskaar....aaj main bahot dino baad "shayri-e-dard" me likh raha hu aj tak main "ishq" ke bare main likh raha tha aaj socha k kuch main bh likhu dard ke bare main , shayd main aap sab ki tarha itni achhi tarha se to dard ko nahi bayan kar paunga, mujhe pata hai par ek kosish jaroor ki hai ye sirF ek peshkas hai aur ehsaas ....ummid hai aap sab ko meri ye peshkas pasand aayengi ..aapke jawab ka intezar rahenga"



Badi hi mannato me manga tha jise maine,
Wo mannat hi meri khuda ne thukradi hai……..

Chahat is kadar thi meri zindagi me usse,
Meri chahat ko usne haste hue lautadi hai…….

Khoya rehta tha bas uske hi khwabon mein,
Khawabo ki duniya ko kisine aaj jaldadi hai,…

Mehekta tha mera pyar khusi ki mehek se,
Meri is mehek ko usne hawa me faila di hai….

dil me apne chhupaya firta tha main usko,
meri is deewangi par usne aag ab lagadi hai…..

mohhabbat na kar yun pagalon ki tarha kisise,
ye baat aaj usne mujhe pyaar se samjhadi hai……

yaadon me dooba rehta tha main har lamha,
meri yadon ko usne ab kabra me dafna di hai……

kya kahe ab “dhaval” kuch baki nahi kehne ko,
bas itna hi pata hai k aaj se suru meri barbadi hai…..
bohat khub dhaval tum pehley se bohat acha likhnay lagay ho keep writing aur jo log pyar kertay hain wohi dard ko ziada behter bayan kertay hain


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"mere sabhi doston ko mera namaskaar....aaj main bahot dino baad "shayri-e-dard" me likh raha hu aj tak main "ishq" ke bare main likh raha tha aaj socha k kuch main bh likhu dard ke bare main , shayd main aap sab ki tarha itni achhi tarha se to dard ko nahi bayan kar paunga, mujhe pata hai par ek kosish jaroor ki hai ye sirF ek peshkas hai aur ehsaas ....ummid hai aap sab ko meri ye peshkas pasand aayengi ..aapke jawab ka intezar rahenga"



Badi hi mannato me manga tha jise maine,
Wo mannat hi meri khuda ne thukradi hai……..

Chahat is kadar thi meri zindagi me usse,
Meri chahat ko usne haste hue lautadi hai…….

Khoya rehta tha bas uske hi khwabon mein,
Khawabo ki duniya ko kisine aaj jaldadi hai,…

Mehekta tha mera pyar khusi ki mehek se,
Meri is mehek ko usne hawa me faila di hai….

dil me apne chhupaya firta tha main usko,
meri is deewangi par usne aag ab lagadi hai…..

mohhabbat na kar yun pagalon ki tarha kisise,
ye baat aaj usne mujhe pyaar se samjhadi hai……

yaadon me dooba rehta tha main har lamha,
meri yadon ko usne ab kabra me dafna di hai……

kya kahe ab “dhaval” kuch baki nahi kehne ko,
bas itna hi pata hai k aaj se suru meri barbadi hai…..
hey dhaval, kaya hai yeh sab mujhe bilkul pasand nahi aaya. aur aise shayri tumharey liye nahi bani, samjay. maine phele bhi tumhey kaha tha, ab lagta hai mujhe tumharey kaan kincney ke liye aana padeyga.

vaise shayri badiya hai, kafia barkarar rakhney ke chakaar mai.n kahi kahi kuch sher thik nahi ban paye par ahsaas bahut khoobsurat hai.n

yeh sher mujhe bahut accha lagga:

mohhabbat na kar yun pagalon ki tarha kisise,
ye baat aaj usne mujhe pyaar se samjhadi hai……


kush raho aur aaindha se aisa nahi likhna.........!

lots of love

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bohat khub dhaval tum pehley se bohat acha likhnay lagay ho keep writing aur jo log pyar kertay hain wohi dard ko ziada behter bayan kertay hain


koi to ho ji kais hai aap?

aapko yaha dekh ke bahot hi achha laga, aur apko ais alaga itna hi kafi hai bas aise hi aap meri peshkas ko padhte rahiyenga

aur apki bat bhi sahi hi k pyaar karte hai wohi dard ko zayada betar bayan kar pate hai

apna khayal rakhiye

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5th November 2006, 09:19 PM

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Originally Posted by sunita virender View Post
hey dhaval, kaya hai yeh sab mujhe bilkul pasand nahi aaya. aur aise shayri tumharey liye nahi bani, samjay. maine phele bhi tumhey kaha tha, ab lagta hai mujhe tumharey kaan kincney ke liye aana padeyga.

vaise shayri badiya hai, kafia barkarar rakhney ke chakaar mai.n kahi kahi kuch sher thik nahi ban paye par ahsaas bahut khoobsurat hai.n

yeh sher mujhe bahut accha lagga:

mohhabbat na kar yun pagalon ki tarha kisise,
ye baat aaj usne mujhe pyaar se samjhadi hai……


kush raho aur aaindha se aisa nahi likhna.........!

lots of love

tumhari didi

sister pranaam

aapke bare me mujhe pehle se hi pata tha k aapka jawab yehi aayenga k ye dard wala likha hua aapko pasand nahi ayenga sorry

par ye sirf aise hi likhi thi aapko sirf pasand aaya bahot hi achha laga mujhe

aur main kossish karunga k kam se kam galti ho har sher me aur har sher achha ban paye

apna khayal rakhiyenga

khus rahiye

aapka chhotasa bhai aur dost
dhaval


*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
   
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