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Sad Aankhon ka khaalipan poochTa hai sawaal mujhe.... - 22nd November 2006, 04:51 AM

Jab bhi aaTa hai aaina saamne..
Aankhon ka khaalipan poochTa hai kai sawaal mujhe..

Behlaana ise aasaan nahi..
KarTa hai yeh behad pareshaan mujhe..

Bhar laaTa hai dheron samandar na jaane kahan se..
LeTa hai unka naam poochTa hai sawal mujhe..

Kaise samjhaaun is akele andhere ko..
DikhTi nahi abhi roshni kahin mujhe...

Dam leTa hai Tabhi jab unki Tasveer neeharTa hai..
Kabhi hasaaTa hai To kabhi daraa jaaTa hai mujhe..

Na chod umeed Tu "ChaahaT"..
Khushiyon ka daaman ek din To milega mujhe...

Aankhon ka khaalipan poochTa hai sawaal mujhe....

"Nahi hoTa jawaab mere paas..
Phir bhi deTi hun dilaasa Tujhe..
Hoga milan.. Milenge saajan Tujhe..."

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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22nd November 2006, 07:34 AM

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Jab bhi aaTa hai aaina saamne..
Aankhon ka khaalipan poochTa hai kai sawaal mujhe..

Behlaana ise aasaan nahi..
KarTa hai yeh behad pareshaan mujhe..

Bhar laaTa hai dheron samandar na jaane kahan se..
LeTa hai unka naam poochTa hai sawal mujhe..

Kaise samjhaaun is akele andhere ko..
DikhTi nahi abhi roshni kahin mujhe...

Dam leTa hai Tabhi jab unki Tasveer neeharTa hai..
Kabhi hasaaTa hai To kabhi daraa jaaTa hai mujhe..

Na chod umeed Tu "ChaahaT"..
Khushiyon ka daaman ek din To milega mujhe...

Aankhon ka khaalipan poochTa hai sawaal mujhe....

"Nahi hoTa jawaab mere paas..
Phir bhi deTi hun dilaasa Tujhe..
Hoga milan.. Milenge saajan Tujhe..."

~Priya


priya ji namskaar

pehle to main ye kahunga k aaj bahot khusi hui k aaj aapki peshkas mujhe padhne ko mili

priya ji aapto har baar asaar se bhari rachna ye likhti hai iis baar bhi gazab ka likha hai mano ke man me ek ass aur vishwas liye likha ho .aapne aur sath me becheni bhi nazar aati hai is rachna me bahot hi achhi tarike se aapne sare pehlu ko darshaye hai achha laga padh ke

ummid karta hu aage bhi aapki aisi rachna padhne ko milengi [bt khusi khusi wali]

khus rahiyenga
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bhut khub - 22nd November 2006, 09:38 AM

Bhar laaTa hai dheron samandar na jaane kahan se..
LeTa hai unka naam poochTa hai sawal mujhe..

Kaise samjhaaun is akele andhere ko..
DikhTi nahi abhi roshni kahin mujhe...
priya ji aaj to din sanwar gya hamara ek saath do naye or umda kalaam parne ko mile hamari khus naseebii hai....yu hee likhti raho.......take care......raj.....


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22nd November 2006, 05:50 PM

Jab bhi aaTa hai aaina saamne..
Aankhon ka khaalipan poochTa hai kai sawaal mujhe..

Behlaana ise aasaan nahi..
KarTa hai yeh behad pareshaan mujhe..

hmmmm... well expressed...


Bhar laaTa hai dheron samandar na jaane kahan se..
LeTa hai unka naam poochTa hai sawal mujhe..

Kaise samjhaaun is akele andhere ko..
DikhTi nahi abhi roshni kahin mujhe...

hmmmmm....


Dam leTa hai Tabhi jab unki Tasveer neeharTa hai..
Kabhi hasaaTa hai To kabhi daraa jaaTa hai mujhe..

Na chod umeed Tu "ChaahaT"..
Khushiyon ka daaman ek din To milega mujhe...

Aankhon ka khaalipan poochTa hai sawaal mujhe....

Very nice words...


"Nahi hoTa jawaab mere paas..
Phir bhi deTi hun dilaasa Tujhe..
Hoga milan.. Milenge saajan Tujhe..."

nicely written...

Dear Priya,

Humesha ki tarah tumhaare shabdon me ehsaas khoobsurati se ubhar ke aaye hain... bahut accha likha hai tumne... Aise hi likhti raho... apna khayal rakhna... Do take care


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Jab bhi aaTa hai aaina saamne..
Aankhon ka khaalipan poochTa hai kai sawaal mujhe..

Behlaana ise aasaan nahi..
KarTa hai yeh behad pareshaan mujhe..

Bhar laaTa hai dheron samandar na jaane kahan se..
LeTa hai unka naam poochTa hai sawal mujhe..

Kaise samjhaaun is akele andhere ko..
DikhTi nahi abhi roshni kahin mujhe...

Dam leTa hai Tabhi jab unki Tasveer neeharTa hai..
Kabhi hasaaTa hai To kabhi daraa jaaTa hai mujhe..

Na chod umeed Tu "ChaahaT"..
Khushiyon ka daaman ek din To milega mujhe...

Aankhon ka khaalipan poochTa hai sawaal mujhe....

"Nahi hoTa jawaab mere paas..
Phir bhi deTi hun dilaasa Tujhe..
Hoga milan.. Milenge saajan Tujhe..."

~Priya
dear priya

kaise hai tu...!

bahut dino baad tujhe jaha dekh kar accha lagga, aur tumhari yeh rachna bhi pasand aaye.

aree dilasa dene wali kaya baat hai,
mujhe yakeen hai vasal ki raat door nahi,
bas jarra dil thaam ke tu intjaar kar,

duao ke saath teri didi


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pehle to main ye kahunga k aaj bahot khusi hui k aaj aapki peshkas mujhe padhne ko mili

priya ji aapto har baar asaar se bhari rachna ye likhti hai iis baar bhi gazab ka likha hai mano ke man me ek ass aur vishwas liye likha ho .aapne aur sath me becheni bhi nazar aati hai is rachna me bahot hi achhi tarike se aapne sare pehlu ko darshaye hai achha laga padh ke

ummid karta hu aage bhi aapki aisi rachna padhne ko milengi [bt khusi khusi wali]

khus rahiyenga
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Dhaval ji...

Ek Baar phir aapne mera likha kuch pasand kiya... bahut khushi hui..

itne dino baad yahan aa paayi.....

par yahan kuch bhi nahi badla.. vahi har khushi har ek ke dukh me poora parivaar humesha hi ek ho jaata hai...

Thankyou soo much!!!

Take Care...

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"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
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Bhar laaTa hai dheron samandar na jaane kahan se..
LeTa hai unka naam poochTa hai sawal mujhe..

Kaise samjhaaun is akele andhere ko..
DikhTi nahi abhi roshni kahin mujhe...
priya ji aaj to din sanwar gya hamara ek saath do naye or umda kalaam parne ko mile hamari khus naseebii hai....yu hee likhti raho.......take care......raj.....
Raj ji...

Aap to bas kuch jyada hi keh jaate hain....

Aapko pasand aayi meri rachna jaan ke bahut acha laga..

Take Care..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
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Jab bhi aaTa hai aaina saamne..
Aankhon ka khaalipan poochTa hai kai sawaal mujhe..

Behlaana ise aasaan nahi..
KarTa hai yeh behad pareshaan mujhe..

hmmmm... well expressed...


Bhar laaTa hai dheron samandar na jaane kahan se..
LeTa hai unka naam poochTa hai sawal mujhe..

Kaise samjhaaun is akele andhere ko..
DikhTi nahi abhi roshni kahin mujhe...

hmmmmm....


Dam leTa hai Tabhi jab unki Tasveer neeharTa hai..
Kabhi hasaaTa hai To kabhi daraa jaaTa hai mujhe..

Na chod umeed Tu "ChaahaT"..
Khushiyon ka daaman ek din To milega mujhe...

Aankhon ka khaalipan poochTa hai sawaal mujhe....

Very nice words...


"Nahi hoTa jawaab mere paas..
Phir bhi deTi hun dilaasa Tujhe..
Hoga milan.. Milenge saajan Tujhe..."

nicely written...

Dear Priya,

Humesha ki tarah tumhaare shabdon me ehsaas khoobsurati se ubhar ke aaye hain... bahut accha likha hai tumne... Aise hi likhti raho... apna khayal rakhna... Do take care
Bhaiya...

Thankyou soo much.. for just being there for truly appreciating my creations!

Thanx a million...

Take Care...

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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Jab bhi aaTa hai aaina saamne..
Aankhon ka khaalipan poochTa hai kai sawaal mujhe..

Behlaana ise aasaan nahi..
KarTa hai yeh behad pareshaan mujhe..

Bhar laaTa hai dheron samandar na jaane kahan se..
LeTa hai unka naam poochTa hai sawal mujhe..

Kaise samjhaaun is akele andhere ko..
DikhTi nahi abhi roshni kahin mujhe...

Dam leTa hai Tabhi jab unki Tasveer neeharTa hai..
Kabhi hasaaTa hai To kabhi daraa jaaTa hai mujhe..

Na chod umeed Tu "ChaahaT"..
Khushiyon ka daaman ek din To milega mujhe...

Aankhon ka khaalipan poochTa hai sawaal mujhe....

"Nahi hoTa jawaab mere paas..
Phir bhi deTi hun dilaasa Tujhe..
Hoga milan.. Milenge saajan Tujhe..."

~Priya
dear priya
dard to ismein bahut hai tumne achi tarah bayaan bhi kiya hai.
bas dard nikal jaye life se yahi dua hai meri.
sakhi with love


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Jab bhi aaTa hai aaina saamne..
Aankhon ka khaalipan poochTa hai kai sawaal mujhe..

Behlaana ise aasaan nahi..
KarTa hai yeh behad pareshaan mujhe..

Bhar laaTa hai dheron samandar na jaane kahan se..
LeTa hai unka naam poochTa hai sawal mujhe..

Kaise samjhaaun is akele andhere ko..
DikhTi nahi abhi roshni kahin mujhe...

Dam leTa hai Tabhi jab unki Tasveer neeharTa hai..
Kabhi hasaaTa hai To kabhi daraa jaaTa hai mujhe..

Na chod umeed Tu "ChaahaT"..
Khushiyon ka daaman ek din To milega mujhe...

Aankhon ka khaalipan poochTa hai sawaal mujhe....

"Nahi hoTa jawaab mere paas..
Phir bhi deTi hun dilaasa Tujhe..
Hoga milan.. Milenge saajan Tujhe..."

~Priya


Priya aap ne bohat achi tarah dard ko lafzon main piroya hai

Na chod umeed Tu "ChaahaT"..
Khushiyon ka daaman ek din To milega mujhe...

ye sher acha laga is liye ke bawajood dard ke aap ne khushion ki umeed ko nahi chorra bohat achay khayalaat hain aesay hi likhti rahian aur khush rahain humesha


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dear priya

kaise hai tu...!

bahut dino baad tujhe jaha dekh kar accha lagga, aur tumhari yeh rachna bhi pasand aaye.

aree dilasa dene wali kaya baat hai,
mujhe yakeen hai vasal ki raat door nahi,
bas jarra dil thaam ke tu intjaar kar,

duao ke saath teri didi
Diiii...

Aapke aane se kitni himmat milti hai ye aap nahi jaante!!!!

Bas aate rehna!!

Take Care..

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again nice priya ji
Bahut bahur shukriya aapka...

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dard to ismein bahut hai tumne achi tarah bayaan bhi kiya hai.
bas dard nikal jaye life se yahi dua hai meri.
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Khair ye to mumkin nahi.. lekin haan kalpana karne me kya jaata hai..

Tum yahan aayi mujhe bahut khushi hui...

Apna khayal rakhna..

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Priya aap ne bohat achi tarah dard ko lafzon main piroya hai

Na chod umeed Tu "ChaahaT"..
Khushiyon ka daaman ek din To milega mujhe...

ye sher acha laga is liye ke bawajood dard ke aap ne khushion ki umeed ko nahi chorra bohat achay khayalaat hain aesay hi likhti rahian aur khush rahain humesha
Aapse shaayad pehli baar baat kar rahi hun... Sabse pehle to aapko apne is post pe aane ke liye dher sa shukriya.. aap yahana aaye bahut khushi hui...

Haan.. sach hai dost.. jeene ke liye ik umeed ka hona bahut zaroori hota hai.. us umeed ke sahaare na jaane kitne bade bade samundar aasaani se paar ho jaate hain... bin umeed ke to kuch bhi mumkin nahi hota..

Aap apna khayal rakhiye..

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bahut khoob priya,bahut khoob.badi der se nazar padi tumhare is kalaam pe.acha likha hai.sahi hai,umeed ka daaman kabhi nahi chodnachahiye.likhti raho yunhin.


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Post Bahut Khoob - 10th December 2006, 07:58 PM

Hello priya ji,
Aap ne dil me doub ker ye baat kahi bahut bahut hi achaa likha hai is gazal me saari hi baat kah di hai achaa laga aap yu hi likhtee rahe mujhe aap ki nai gazal ka intezaar rahega,

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bahut khoob priya,bahut khoob.badi der se nazar padi tumhare is kalaam pe.acha likha hai.sahi hai,umeed ka daaman kabhi nahi chodnachahiye.likhti raho yunhin.
Sara,

Tumhe yahan dekh ke bahut khushi hui.. bahut arse ke baad tumse baat kar rahi hun... Umeed hai tum achi hi hongi..

Tumne vakt nikaal ke mujhe saraaha bahut acha laga..

Zindagi me umeed na ho to woh berang ho jayegi..

Tum apna khayal rakhna.. aur ho sake to aati rehna..

Tumhari dost..
~Priya



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Hello priya ji,
Aap ne dil me doub ker ye baat kahi bahut bahut hi achaa likha hai is gazal me saari hi baat kah di hai achaa laga aap yu hi likhtee rahe mujhe aap ki nai gazal ka intezaar rahega,

Aapka dost Tariq(SHAAN)

Gamo ki keder karo or uske sath jiyu
Gam kabhi fareb na dege kushi ki tarah
Tariq ji..

Aapko meri rachna itni pasand aayi bahut khushi hui..

Koshish karungi ki agli rachna bhi aapke pasand aane ke laayak ho..

Shukriya..

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