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' Baat Baat Par Baatein Banaana Koyi Dilkash Adaa Nahin...! ' - 9th November 2008, 06:34 PM

Kuch kehna jurm hai to khataawaar mein bhi houn
Ye aur baat hai mera kahaa woh samajh na paaye


Baat baat par baatein banaana koyi dilkash adaa nahin
Baar baar unko yahi samjhaaya houa koyi faidaa nahin

Bahaane itne woh kar gayi ab lage unki har baat jhoothi
Khataa meri nahin bharosaa jo unpar raha jyadaa nahin

Meethe do bol ke badle apne kitaab e hayaat unko diya
Zaahiran mujhse yaha houa koyi accha sa saudaa nahin

Iss nazook dil ke sang khelne ka shauq jab se rakha hai
Mann bhelaane ko ussne ek bhi khilonaa kharidaa nahin

Basaaya tha dil main unko magar sar par woh jaa baithi
Khareeb e Khudaa rehna unka tha shayad iraadaa nahin

Dil se mera naam mitaane main masroof hein woh aajkal
Shukr e Khudaa, baazu pe ussne ‘D’ akshar godaa nahin

Unke ehsaanon ne iss kadar wajood ko dabaa rakha hai
Shikwaa karne ke liye zubaan se nikalti koyi sadaa nahin

Uff ! Zaraa zaraa si baat pe tera ye ruuth jaana “Amanush “
BaDaa accha houa iss jahaan ka tu banaa khudaa nahin



Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai


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10th November 2008, 12:09 AM

denny ji
namste kaise hai aa??

kafi waqt baad apko pada...aur ek achi gazal padi ye bahut acha laga...
sukun sa mila padke..ki purane log aja bhi yahan sath hai..me bhi kam hi aati hun u to magar aap sabka sath hamehsa bana arhe yahi chahti hun...
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11th November 2008, 11:16 PM

bohat khoob danny ji bohat arsey baad aapki taraf se kuch parrhne ko mila bohat acha likha hai khas ker akhri sher main chupi gehri baat bohat achi lagi aur ye sher bohat acha laga............


Bahaane itne woh kar gayi ab lage unki har baat jhoothi
Khataa meri nahin bharosaa jo unpar raha jyadaa nahin

likhte rahiyega danny ji daad qubool kijiye........


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12th November 2008, 11:39 AM

Iss nazook dil ke sang khelne ka shauq jab se rakha hai
Mann bhelaane ko ussne ek bhi khilonaa kharidaa nahin

Unke ehsaanon ne iss kadar wajood ko dabaa rakha hai
Shikwaa karne ke liye zubaan se nikalti koyi sadaa nahin

Uff ! Zaraa zaraa si baat pe tera ye ruuth jaana “Amanush “
BaDaa accha houa iss jahaan ka tu banaa khudaa nahin

bahut acchi ghazal hain dannyji.......khakaar uparwale sher..........yunhi mehfil ki ronak badhate rahe........daad@......

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12th November 2008, 06:27 PM

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Kuch kehna jurm hai to khataawaar mein bhi houn
Ye aur baat hai mera kahaa woh samajh na paaye


Baat baat par baatein banaana koyi dilkash adaa nahin
Baar baar unko yahi samjhaaya houa koyi faidaa nahin

Bahaane itne woh kar gayi ab lage unki har baat jhoothi
Khataa meri nahin bharosaa jo unpar raha jyadaa nahin

Meethe do bol ke badle apne kitaab e hayaat unko diya
Zaahiran mujhse yaha houa koyi accha sa saudaa nahin

Iss nazook dil ke sang khelne ka shauq jab se rakha hai
Mann bhelaane ko ussne ek bhi khilonaa kharidaa nahin

Basaaya tha dil main unko magar sar par woh jaa baithi
Khareeb e Khudaa rehna unka tha shayad iraadaa nahin

Dil se mera naam mitaane main masroof hein woh aajkal
Shukr e Khudaa, baazu pe ussne ‘D’ akshar godaa nahin

Unke ehsaanon ne iss kadar wajood ko dabaa rakha hai
Shikwaa karne ke liye zubaan se nikalti koyi sadaa nahin

Uff ! Zaraa zaraa si baat pe tera ye ruuth jaana “Amanush “
BaDaa accha houa iss jahaan ka tu banaa khudaa nahin

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ek arse ke baad aapko pada hai... yakeen maniye behad accha laga.

maqta wakai kaamal ka likha hai..
baise to sabhii sher kafi acche lage per ye mujhe behad khas laga

Basaaya tha dil main unko magar sar par woh jaa baithi
Khareeb e Khudaa rehna unaka tha shayad iraadaa nahin


aage behtreen tareen gazal ke liye merii daad
shukriya

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13th November 2008, 12:45 PM

namaskaar Danny jiiiiiiii

to akhir aapki gazal mahfil ki nazar ho hi gaye accha laga aapko padkar....ahsaas to aapke har gazal mein khoob hote hi haiN, vaise hi es baar bhi khoob haiN....jo aapne eske reaction ke bare mein likha tha uska kaya hua bata dijiyega janab....hume intzaar hai aapke reply ka

bahut umda gazal pesh ki hai aapne....sabhi sher tareef ke kabil haiN, kisi ek sher ko behtar nahi kah sakti.....yoon hi mahfil mein aate rahiye aur hume acchi acchi gazleN padne ka mokka detey rahiye.


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16th November 2008, 09:15 AM

Iss nazook dil ke sang khelne ka shauq jab se rakha hai
Mann bhelaane ko ussne ek bhi khilonaa kharidaa nahin


Unke ehsaanon ne iss kadar wajood ko dabaa rakha hai
Shikwaa karne ke liye zubaan se nikalti koyi sadaa nahin




bahut khoobsurat likha hai apne...........................

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16th November 2008, 05:53 PM

danny sahib jee !

kaise haiN aap ?

aapke iss ghazal ko yahaN chaspaa karne ke baad maine kam se kam isse 10 martabaa to padhaa hi hogaa !

waakeyii bahut khoobsoorat juzbaat se saraabor ghazal kahi aapne ...

meraa maan naa hai ki kisi bhi shayri ko khoobsoorat banaane meiN jo cheez sabse aham kirdaar adaa karti hai vo hai shayar ki maasoomiyat aur uskaa mizaaj !

yaQiinan aapne apne juzbaat ke saath poorii tarah se insaaf kiyaa hai mujhe ghazal ke har sher meiN paakeezgii aur maasoomiyat dikhaaii dee !

dostana taur pe ek raay shumaar karnaa chaahungaa ...

kuch ashaar zubaaN se faNs faNs ke nikLe to mere khyaal se agar wahaN beher ki rasm adaaygii kii gayi hoti to ye Qadam aapke kalaam ki khoobsoorati meiN chaar chaand lagaane jaisa kaam kartaa !

khair ... aapki aakhiri ghazal ke baad badi besabRii se aapkaa intezaar ho rahaa thaa ummeed kartaa huN abki jaldii hi naye kalaam se ruBru hone kaa maukaa denege aap !

meri jaanib se ek behtareen ghazal pe dheroN daad Qabool farmaayeiN !

maalik aapki Qalam aur roshan kare !

taareef Qabool ki jiye !
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Very very sorry for late replies...! - 10th September 2009, 02:54 AM

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namste kaise hai aa??

kafi waqt baad apko pada...aur ek achi gazal padi ye bahut acha laga...
sukun sa mila padke..ki purane log aja bhi yahan sath hai..me bhi kam hi aati hun u to magar aap sabka sath hamehsa bana arhe yahi chahti hun...
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Kaisi hein aap Sakhi ji...?

Hum bhi yahi chahte hein ki iss parivaar main aissa silsila hamesha kaayam rahe...! Dil ki baatein yahan par likhne ke siwaa aur bahut zimmedaariyan hein naa...!

Aap ne iss rachna ko parha aur pasand bhi ki so hum aap ka shukraguzaar hein...!

Yun hi saath dete rahiyegaa, ok...?

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bohat khoob danny ji bohat arsey baad aapki taraf se kuch parrhne ko mila bohat acha likha hai khas ker akhri sher main chupi gehri baat bohat achi lagi aur ye sher bohat acha laga............


Bahaane itne woh kar gayi ab lage unki har baat jhoothi
Khataa meri nahin bharosaa jo unpar raha jyadaa nahin

likhte rahiyega danny ji daad qubool kijiye........
Tah e dil se daad kabuul hai, Mani Ji...!

Aap ne thik hi kaha ki aakhri sher main chupi houi gehri baat hai...!

Yunhi saath dete rahein aur hum, Inshallah likhte raheinge

Apna khayaal rakhiyega, ok...?



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Kuch kehna jurm hai to khataawaar mein bhi houn
Ye aur baat hai mera kahaa woh samajh na paaye


Baat baat par baatein banaana koyi dilkash adaa nahin
Baar baar unko yahi samjhaaya houa koyi faidaa nahin

Bahaane itne woh kar gayi ab lage unki har baat jhoothi
Khataa meri nahin bharosaa jo unpar raha jyadaa nahin

Meethe do bol ke badle apne kitaab e hayaat unko diya
Zaahiran mujhse yaha houa koyi accha sa saudaa nahin

Iss nazook dil ke sang khelne ka shauq jab se rakha hai
Mann bhelaane ko ussne ek bhi khilonaa kharidaa nahin

Basaaya tha dil main unko magar sar par woh jaa baithi
Khareeb e Khudaa rehna unka tha shayad iraadaa nahin

Dil se mera naam mitaane main masroof hein woh aajkal
Shukr e Khudaa, baazu pe ussne ‘D’ akshar godaa nahin

Unke ehsaanon ne iss kadar wajood ko dabaa rakha hai
Shikwaa karne ke liye zubaan se nikalti koyi sadaa nahin

Uff ! Zaraa zaraa si baat pe tera ye ruuth jaana “Amanush “
BaDaa accha houa iss jahaan ka tu banaa khudaa nahin

Iss nazook dil ke sang khelne ka shauq jab se rakha hai
Mann bhelaane ko ussne ek bhi khilonaa kharidaa nahin


yeh do lines padh kar main sirf yeh kah paayi.....WOW!!!
yeh paheli baar hai main aap ko padh rahi hun aur bata nahi sakti ki kitni khush hui hun yeh poetry padh kar
bahot khub janab....waqt milte aur bhi poetries aap ki zarur padhungi.....keep writing

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Iss nazook dil ke sang khelne ka shauq jab se rakha hai
Mann bhelaane ko ussne ek bhi khilonaa kharidaa nahin

Unke ehsaanon ne iss kadar wajood ko dabaa rakha hai
Shikwaa karne ke liye zubaan se nikalti koyi sadaa nahin

Uff ! Zaraa zaraa si baat pe tera ye ruuth jaana “Amanush “
BaDaa accha houa iss jahaan ka tu banaa khudaa nahin

bahut acchi ghazal hain dannyji.......khakaar uparwale sher..........yunhi mehfil ki ronak badhate rahe........daad@......

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Shukriyaa jo aapne iss rachna ko parha aur saraaha...!

Tah e dil se daad kabuul hai...!

Saath dete rahiye aur apna khayaal rakhiyegaa,ok...?

Duaaon ke saath



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denny sahab
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ek arse ke baad aapko pada hai... yakeen maniye behad accha laga.

maqta wakai kaamal ka likha hai..
baise to sabhii sher kafi acche lage per ye mujhe behad khas laga

Basaaya tha dil main unko magar sar par woh jaa baithi
Khareeb e Khudaa rehna unaka tha shayad iraadaa nahin


aage behtreen tareen gazal ke liye merii daad
shukriya

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Namaskaar Dilip Bhai...! Kaise hein aap...?

Yaha kalaam aap ko accha lagaa so hum samjhe hamari koshish safal rahi...!

Daad ke liye bahut shukriyaa

Yunhi saath dete rahiye aur apna khayaal rakhiyegaa,ok...?

Duaaon ke saath



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14th September 2009, 07:30 PM

Very well written Mushkil

This was fantastic

Uff ! Zaraa zaraa si baat pe tera ye ruuth jaana “Amanush “
BaDaa accha houa iss jahaan ka tu banaa khudaa nahin


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Kuch kehna jurm hai to khataawaar mein bhi houn
Ye aur baat hai mera kahaa woh samajh na paaye


Baat baat par baatein banaana koyi dilkash adaa nahin
Baar baar unko yahi samjhaaya houa koyi faidaa nahin

Bahaane itne woh kar gayi ab lage unki har baat jhoothi
Khataa meri nahin bharosaa jo unpar raha jyadaa nahin

Meethe do bol ke badle apne kitaab e hayaat unko diya
Zaahiran mujhse yaha houa koyi accha sa saudaa nahin

Iss nazook dil ke sang khelne ka shauq jab se rakha hai
Mann bhelaane ko ussne ek bhi khilonaa kharidaa nahin

Basaaya tha dil main unko magar sar par woh jaa baithi
Khareeb e Khudaa rehna unka tha shayad iraadaa nahin

Dil se mera naam mitaane main masroof hein woh aajkal
Shukr e Khudaa, baazu pe ussne ‘D’ akshar godaa nahin

Unke ehsaanon ne iss kadar wajood ko dabaa rakha hai
Shikwaa karne ke liye zubaan se nikalti koyi sadaa nahin

Uff ! Zaraa zaraa si baat pe tera ye ruuth jaana “Amanush “
BaDaa accha houa iss jahaan ka tu banaa khudaa nahin

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namaskaar Danny jiiiiiiii

to akhir aapki gazal mahfil ki nazar ho hi gaye accha laga aapko padkar....ahsaas to aapke har gazal mein khoob hote hi haiN, vaise hi es baar bhi khoob haiN....jo aapne eske reaction ke bare mein likha tha uska kaya hua bata dijiyega janab....hume intzaar hai aapke reply ka

bahut umda gazal pesh ki hai aapne....sabhi sher tareef ke kabil haiN, kisi ek sher ko behtar nahi kah sakti.....yoon hi mahfil mein aate rahiye aur hume acchi acchi gazleN padne ka mokka detey rahiye.


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Kaisi hein aap, Sunita Behan...?

Jab jab fursat aur ilHaam ( inspiration ) milegi, hum mehfil main yunhi aaya kareinge...!

Jiss reaction ke baare main hum ne likhaa tha, Khudaa Ji ki mehrbaani se hum ne usse sambhaal liya hai...!

Shayri ki tareef ke liye bahut shukriyaa...! Yunhi daad dete rahein aur hum kalam chalaate raheinge...!

Apna khayaal rakhein,ok...?

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Unke ehsaanon ne iss kadar wajood ko dabaa rakha hai
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bahut khoobsurat likha hai apne...........................

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Isse pasand karne ke liye bahut shukriyaa, Zainy Ji...!

Saath dete rahiyegaa

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mujhe kuch kehna chaiye kya...!

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danny sahib jee !

kaise haiN aap ?

aapke iss ghazal ko yahaN chaspaa karne ke baad maine kam se kam isse 10 martabaa to padhaa hi hogaa !

waakeyii bahut khoobsoorat juzbaat se saraabor ghazal kahi aapne ...

meraa maan naa hai ki kisi bhi shayri ko khoobsoorat banaane meiN jo cheez sabse aham kirdaar adaa karti hai vo hai shayar ki maasoomiyat aur uskaa mizaaj !

yaQiinan aapne apne juzbaat ke saath poorii tarah se insaaf kiyaa hai mujhe ghazal ke har sher meiN paakeezgii aur maasoomiyat dikhaaii dee !

dostana taur pe ek raay shumaar karnaa chaahungaa ...

kuch ashaar zubaaN se faNs faNs ke nikLe to mere khyaal se agar wahaN beher ki rasm adaaygii kii gayi hoti to ye Qadam aapke kalaam ki khoobsoorati meiN chaar chaand lagaane jaisa kaam kartaa !

khair ... aapki aakhiri ghazal ke baad badi besabRii se aapkaa intezaar ho rahaa thaa ummeed kartaa huN abki jaldii hi naye kalaam se ruBru hone kaa maukaa denege aap !

meri jaanib se ek behtareen ghazal pe dheroN daad Qabool farmaayeiN !

maalik aapki Qalam aur roshan kare !

taareef Qabool ki jiye !
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apnaa khyaal rakhiye !
Aap ke raay sar ankhon par, Khsitij Ji...! Hum iss ke or zaruur dhyaan deinge...!

Itne acche comments parh kar hum bahut khush houe aur kalaam ki tateef ke liye dher saara shukriyaa...!

Yunhi hauslaa dete rahiyegaa aur apna khayaal bhi rakhein,ok...?

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Danny Ji,
Kia baat hai, Kia khob likha aapnay,

aisey hi likhtay rahiye,

GOD BLESS You


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Iss nazook dil ke sang khelne ka shauq jab se rakha hai
Mann bhelaane ko ussne ek bhi khilonaa kharidaa nahin

yeh do lines padh kar main sirf yeh kah paayi.....WOW!!!
yeh paheli baar hai main aap ko padh rahi hun aur bata nahi sakti ki kitni khush hui hun yeh poetry padh kar
bahot khub janab....waqt milte aur bhi poetries aap ki zarur padhungi.....keep writing

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Jeete raho, Bitiya...!

Khushi houi ki tumhein yaha kalaam pasand aaya... Tumhare ye bataaye houe sher hamare bhi dil ke bahut khareeb hai...!

Apna khoob khayaal rakhna, ok...?

With blessings

Chachu



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Very well written Mushkil

This was fantastic

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BaDaa accha houa iss jahaan ka tu banaa khudaa nahin
Thanks so much for appreciating, Mayoos Ji...!

Take care, ok...?



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mujhe kuch kehna chaiye kya...!

Kunaal
Bahut kuch keh gaye ho , Kunnu Bhaiyaa...?

Yunnhi aate rehna...!

Tumhaare khayaal pehle se jyaada...!

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Danny Ji,
Kia baat hai, Kia khob likha aapnay,

aisey hi likhtay rahiye,

GOD BLESS You
Ek baar phir aap ki ehsaanmand houn, jo aapne waqt nikaal ke meraa kalaam paRha.

Shukriya, Hassan Ji...!

With blessings...!



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Danny jii,

Namastey..Kaise hain aap? Umeed karti hu aap khariyaat se hongey ... jii phele to aapko Happy Diwali ...as aaj Diwali per kuch aacha padhne ko mila ...

Har sher pasand aaya ... simply heart touching !!!

Likhtey raheye .... yehi dua karugii es Diwali sevaapki zidnagii mein khushiyon se roshan ho aur hamesha roshan rahye Aameen

aapna khayal rakhyega

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Danny jii,

Namastey..Kaise hain aap? Umeed karti hu aap khariyaat se hongey ... jii phele to aapko Happy Diwali ...as aaj Diwali per kuch aacha padhne ko mila ...

Har sher pasand aaya ... simply heart touching !!!

Likhtey raheye .... yehi dua karugii es Diwali sevaapki zidnagii mein khushiyon se roshan ho aur hamesha roshan rahye Aameen

aapna khayal rakhyega

aapki

mandeep
I'm so very sorry for late reply, Mandy Behna...!

Happy belated Diwaali to you too...! Aap ki duaa sar ankhon par...!

Saath dene ke liye bahut shukriyaa...!

Bhaai ki ashirvaad hameshaa aap ke saath hein...!

Sadaa khush rahein...!



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Kuch kehna jurm hai to khataawaar mein bhi houn
Ye aur baat hai mera kahaa woh samajh na paaye


Baat baat par baatein banaana koyi dilkash adaa nahin
Baar baar unko yahi samjhaaya houa koyi faidaa nahin

Bahaane itne woh kar gayi ab lage unki har baat jhoothi
Khataa meri nahin bharosaa jo unpar raha jyadaa nahin

Meethe do bol ke badle apne kitaab e hayaat unko diya
Zaahiran mujhse yaha houa koyi accha sa saudaa nahin

Iss nazook dil ke sang khelne ka shauq jab se rakha hai
Mann bhelaane ko ussne ek bhi khilonaa kharidaa nahin

Basaaya tha dil main unko magar sar par woh jaa baithi
Khareeb e Khudaa rehna unka tha shayad iraadaa nahin

Dil se mera naam mitaane main masroof hein woh aajkal
Shukr e Khudaa, baazu pe ussne D akshar godaa nahin

Unke ehsaanon ne iss kadar wajood ko dabaa rakha hai
Shikwaa karne ke liye zubaan se nikalti koyi sadaa nahin

Uff ! Zaraa zaraa si baat pe tera ye ruuth jaana Amanush 
BaDaa accha houa iss jahaan ka tu banaa khudaa nahin

Mushkil saheb,

Uff ! Zaraa zaraa si baat pe tera ye ruuth jaana Amanush 
BaDaa accha houa iss jahaan ka tu banaa
khudaa nahin


Bahut hi umda....maza aa gaya padh kar...
daad qabuul kijiye......

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Mushkil saheb,

Uff ! Zaraa zaraa si baat pe tera ye ruuth jaana Amanush 
BaDaa accha houa iss jahaan ka tu banaa
khudaa nahin

Bahut hi umda....maza aa gaya padh kar...
daad qabuul kijiye......

Vikram
Hamare thread par pehli baar aap aaye so aap ka swaagat hai, Vikram Ji...!

Kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye aap ka shukriyaa aur tah e dil se daad qabuul karte hein hum...!

Yunhi aate rahiyegaa aur apna khayaal rakhiye, ok...?

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