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.." Meri jaan-e-jigar mujhe shayar na bana dena " .. - 14th April 2009, 12:01 AM

hEy you aLL,

Mahfil main Sabhi doston ko “ OMi ” ka Salam....
Ek chhoti si koshish ke saath me ye aapne likhe kuch new lines aap logo ko suna raha hu..
Ummeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi.....


Maine aapni taraf se achaa likhane ki kafi kosis ki hai..
agar fir bhi koi galti reh gai hoo, toh aap loog maaf kariga..


And My this " Gazal " is for my A very special " SOMEONE "..

hope u like it sweetoo..

Dhanywad..dostoo..enJoY..

**OMi **




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" Meri jaan-e-jigar mujhe shayar na bana dena "
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Ek Jaam Mohbbat kaa Aankho se pilaa dena
Aaj nahin shaki mujhe kal tu bhulaa dena


Jab Zikr mohabbat ka mehfil me aa jaye.
Nazare jhuka ke tum aapna Ikrar jataa dena

Tere ishq mein aabad hai ab meri duniya
Thukara ker mujhe tum faqiir na banaa dena

Jab hijar ka dard tumhe bhi satane lage
Meri tarah tum bhi AshQ na bahaa dena

Yaad jab tu aati hai, sukh jata hai sawan
Bin uske jiu mein rab aisa na banaa dena

IshQ ke raho main gar wafa na nibha saka
Mout se badh kar muje koi aur sazaa dena

Teri ek pal ki bi judai na seh payega ab "Omi"
Meri jaan-e-jigar mujhe shayar na bana dena


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(((((( >> ** OMi ** << ))))))
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Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......

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14th April 2009, 06:09 PM


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Ek Jaam Mohbbat kaa Aankho se pilaa dena

Aaj nahin shaki mujhe kal tu bhulaa dena


Jab Zikr mohabbat ka mehfil me aa jaye.
Nazare jhuka ke tum aapna Ikrar jataa dena

Tere ishq mein aabad hai ab meri duniya
Thukara ker mujhe tum faqiir na banaa dena

Jab hijar ka dard tumhe bhi satane lage
Meri tarah tum bhi AshQ na bahaa dena

Yaad jab tu aati hai, sukh jata hai sawan
Bin uske jiu mein rab aisa na banaa dena

IshQ ke raho main gar wafa na nibha saka
Mout se badh kar muje koi aur sazaa dena

Teri ek pal ki bi judai na seh payega ab "Omi"
Meri jaan-e-jigar mujhe shayar na bana dena


Tumhari jaane jigar ne to tumhe wakai shayar bana dia bade chupe rustom ho yaar bht hi achcha likha hai..........yunhi likhte raho aur dil ka haal bayaan karte raho
   
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14th April 2009, 07:00 PM

Bahut hi acha likha hai dost...


Main toh kab ka marr chuka hoon,
Zinda hai ye Jism mera,
Ki koi phir apni Mohabbat se,
Jeene ki nayi wajah de dein...
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14th April 2009, 08:25 PM

khud ghazal likh ke kahte ho shayar na bana dena
hmmmmmmmmm yeh to sochne wali baat hai

bahot achhi ghazal Omi jee
ab aap shayar jald ban jaoge
Dua.oN ke saath
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Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai


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14th April 2009, 09:58 PM

Bahut achche Omi Bhai lagta hai Hijra me shayar banhi gaye ho! Bahut achche ahsas hai aapke aur unhe aapne achche lafzon me utara hai, Kya baat hai keep posting like it,

Yeh line to kafi asardar lagi mujhe.....................

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Mout se badh kar muje koi aur sazaa dena


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14th April 2009, 10:12 PM

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" Meri jaan-e-jigar mujhe shayar na bana dena "
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Ek Jaam Mohbbat kaa Aankho se pilaa dena
Aaj nahin shaki mujhe kal tu bhulaa dena


Jab Zikr mohabbat ka mehfil me aa jaye.
Nazare jhuka ke tum aapna Ikrar jataa dena

Tere ishq mein aabad hai ab meri duniya
Thukara ker mujhe tum faqiir na banaa dena

Jab hijar ka dard tumhe bhi satane lage
Meri tarah tum bhi AshQ na bahaa dena

Yaad jab tu aati hai, sukh jata hai sawan
Bin uske jiu mein rab aisa na banaa dena

IshQ ke raho main gar wafa na nibha saka
Mout se badh kar muje koi aur sazaa dena

Teri ek pal ki bi judai na seh payega ab "Omi"
Meri jaan-e-jigar mujhe shayar na bana dena


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hmmmm............kya khoob likha hai aapne Omi jiii, yakeen nahi aa raha ki aap etne acche shayar bhi ho, maiN to aaj tak bas games meiN hi aapko dekhti aaye hoon....sacchi mein bahut accha laga aapki poetry padkar....sabhi sher pasand aaye.....umeed hai ab routine mein aapki poetry padne ko milti rahegi.

kush rahiye

god bless u


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14th April 2009, 11:13 PM

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hEy you aLL,

Mahfil main Sabhi doston ko “ OMi ” ka Salam....
Ek chhoti si koshish ke saath me ye aapne likhe kuch new lines aap logo ko suna raha hu..
Ummeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi.....


Maine aapni taraf se achaa likhane ki kafi kosis ki hai..
agar fir bhi koi galti reh gai hoo, toh aap loog maaf kariga..

And My this " Gazal " is for my A very special " SOMEONE "..
hope u like it sweetoo..

Dhanywad..dostoo..enJoY..

**OMi **



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" Meri jaan-e-jigar mujhe shayar na bana dena "
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Ek Jaam Mohbbat kaa Aankho se pilaa dena
Aaj nahin shaki mujhe kal tu bhulaa dena


Jab Zikr mohabbat ka mehfil me aa jaye.
Nazare jhuka ke tum aapna Ikrar jataa dena

Tere ishq mein aabad hai ab meri duniya
Thukara ker mujhe tum faqiir na banaa dena

Jab hijar ka dard tumhe bhi satane lage
Meri tarah tum bhi AshQ na bahaa dena

Yaad jab tu aati hai, sukh jata hai sawan
Bin uske jiu mein rab aisa na banaa dena

IshQ ke raho main gar wafa na nibha saka
Mout se badh kar muje koi aur sazaa dena

Teri ek pal ki bi judai na seh payega ab "Omi"
Meri jaan-e-jigar mujhe shayar na bana dena


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(((((( >> ** OMi ** << ))))))


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omi ji bahut acha likha hai apne
apka ye 2 sher bahut acha laga
Yaad jab tu aati hai, sukh jata hai sawan
Bin uske jiu mein rab aisa na banaa dena

IshQ ke raho main gar wafa na nibha saka
Mout se badh kar muje koi aur sazaa dena


khush rahiye humesha dua ke sath


AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam
Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
   
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Thx aLLL.. - 15th April 2009, 12:22 AM

To,

N@zneen ,

TheDemonPrince ,

Diya_Jale ,

kwahish ,

sunita virender ,

dineshdharvi



Hey Dear Frnds...

Aap sabhi logo ka Tahe diL se Sukriyaaa.. joo aap logo ne meri Kosis ko saraha... Aap logo ka pyar aur sath mila, yeh dekh ke diL khuS hua..

Aage bhi yu hi sath aur hausala dete rahiyega..

..Dhaynwaad.. May gOD blEss u aLL..


With Best Regard..
** OMi **


Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......

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OMI..................great work yaar.......awesome.....keep it up dear


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Love good:) - 17th April 2009, 12:12 PM

acha likha hai aap ne...keep it up
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Thx yaa very much... thx for da support..aaise hi sath nibhate rahiye... dhaywad

May god bless u...

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Thx.. alot Praneeta ji..

aap ki hausala aafjai ka bahut-bahut sukriyaa... aap ne samay nikal ke yeh pada.. achaa laga..

thx... God bless u ..

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And My this " Gazal " is for my A very special " SOMEONE "..
hope u like it sweetoo..


**OMi **
Abey tu ney bata ya nahi teri Sweeetooooooo bhi yahin aati hai padne teri ghazalein.....
   
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H.KILLER . . . aapne to sachiii me maaaar daaaalaaa

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