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jis mod pe chhoda wahin talash lena mujhe - 19th August 2009, 10:28 AM

kaatoge jism mera to kya paaoge
apni karni par khud hi pachhtaaoge
mein to had-maans me lipti ik laash hun
tum to shayad mujhe chhoo bhi na paaoge
aankhe.n band karke tum muh ko mod loge
kisi aur se daaman ko apne jod loge
hum to ik kadam bhi na chal payenge
jis mod pe chhoda hai wahin nazar aayenge

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19th August 2009, 10:47 AM

Accha likha hai..
aankhe.n band karke tum muh ko mod loge
kisi aur se daaman ko apne jod loge
hum to ik kadam bhi na chal payenge
jis mod pe chhoda hai wahin nazar aayenge


likhte rahiye.


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pyar ka naam likha tha jisme bade pyar se - 19th August 2009, 11:45 AM

thnx dear,,,
u r also good writer,,, keep it up

likhne wale ne ye kaisi teri taqdeer bana daali
pyar haasil hone se pahle hi teri hasti mita daali
pyar ka naam likha tha jisme bade pyar se
hamne to woh kitab hi apne ghar se jalaa daali

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