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"kameene","laffange parindo.n" ki "badmaash compny" - 17th August 2010, 10:58 AM

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"kameene","laffange parindo.n" ki "badmaash compny" ne qahar dhaya hai,
afsos ! bharat ki vuva peedhi ko kaha.n se kaha.n pahunchaya hai.

ladkio.n se chedchaad, rape , motarcyclo.n ki race dikhate hai.n,
noujawaano.n ko nikamma , tapori , traffic rule todne wala banate hai.n.

bhali aurto.n ko dekhkar seeti bajane ki dete hai.n parerna,
inki hi bachhio.n ko padta hai sadko.n pe aankhe.n tarerna.

be-hayaio.n badkario.n ka cheekhta dhindora ban gaya hai t.v.,
pariwar,insan,samaj ke khilaaf besharmi se tan gaya hai t.v. .

sencer board ke Dhritrashtro ! mat karo beda garak kuchh ahsaas karo,
behuda diolauge, gandi harkato.n vali filmo ko na paas karo.


utho logo!
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"kameene","laffange parindo.n"
ki "badmaash compny"


"kameene","laffange parindo.n" ki "badmaash compny" ne qahar dhaya hai,
afsos ! bharat ki vuva peedhi ko kaha.n se kaha.n pahunchaya hai.

komal sahab ram ram..........
abhi to pahucha baki hai......abhi to sab afar me hai.........magar jis disha me jaa rahe hai bahut sahi hai.....sorry mai apki baat se sahmat nahi
apki photo me dekho ladka ladki kitne khush hai...ye kabhi danga fasaad nahi karenge...kabhi mazhabi aakDe nahi khelenge....bus inke paas pyaar hai....bhaichara hai ...aman hai.....khurapaat ka waqt nahi....
jeeyo aaj ke naujavaano isi tarah........
yehi kaam karte hai jisse bharat bulandi ka aasmaa chu raha hai....pahle ke khusaD tuffed logo ne kya kiya?

ladkio.n se chedchaad, rape , motarcyclo.n ki race dikhate hai.n,
noujawaano.n ko nikamma , tapori , traffic rule todne wala banate hai.n.

ye sahi zindgi dikha rahe hai.......parde me baat nahi rakh rahe hai
aur sabko pata hai parde me baat rahti hai to kya hota hai.......
arab me sab clean hai magar waha ka maids servants ka exploitation aasaani se saamne nahi aata.......hamara bharat laakh guna accha.....sab kuch saamne hota hai......hota har jagah hai magar bus saamne nahi aata...




bhali aurto.n ko dekhkar seeti bajane ki dete hai.n parerna,
inki hi bachhio.n ko padta hai sadko.n pe aankhe.n tarerna.

zindgai me bahut pahlu hai......haa ye aap kahenge ki aap ke saath agar hua hota tab aap samjhte......ab sab perfect nahi ho sakta....acchi chizo ko enjoy karne ke liye thoda badmizaaj chize bhi accept karni padti hai....akhir cow milk deti hai to usme bhi thoda namak hota hai...magar peete huye ehsaans nahi hota....bus control ka formula hai...magar kitna ye bahut bada issue hai

be-hayaio.n badkario.n ka cheekhta dhindora ban gaya hai t.v.,
pariwar,insan,samaj ke khilaaf besharmi se tan gaya hai t.v. .

sabka apna apna definition hai..in baato ka...mujhe to kabhi koi besharmi nahi lagi....aapki baat sirf politically correct hai....haqiqat nahi....

sencer board ke Dhritrashtro ! mat karo beda garak kuchh ahsaas karo,
behuda diolauge, gandi harkato.n vali filmo ko na paas karo.

sensor board to hona hi nahi chaiye....bus ek certification board......
phir jiski jo marzi ho vo ,vo dekhe....

democracy ko agee badaya jaaye ...na ki peeche jaaye...kuch kachra bhi saath leke chalna hoga....ye majboori hai....
varna gaal par baitha machar maarne ke liye ham apne gaal par hi tamacha rasiid denge


utho logo!
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paise ke lie samaaj ko barbaad karne walo.n ki khadi khaat karo.

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"kameene","laffange parindo.n"
ki "badmaash compny"


"kameene","laffange parindo.n" ki "badmaash compny" ne qahar dhaya hai,
afsos ! bharat ki vuva peedhi ko kaha.n se kaha.n pahunchaya hai.

ladkio.n se chedchaad, rape , motarcyclo.n ki race dikhate hai.n,
noujawaano.n ko nikamma , tapori , traffic rule todne wala banate hai.n.

bhali aurto.n ko dekhkar seeti bajane ki dete hai.n parerna,
inki hi bachhio.n ko padta hai sadko.n pe aankhe.n tarerna.

be-hayaio.n badkario.n ka cheekhta dhindora ban gaya hai t.v.,
pariwar,insan,samaj ke khilaaf besharmi se tan gaya hai t.v. .

sencer board ke Dhritrashtro ! mat karo beda garak kuchh ahsaas karo,
behuda diolauge, gandi harkato.n vali filmo ko na paas karo.


utho logo!
aise "badmaash","kameene","laffange parindo,n" ka baaikaat* karo,
paise ke lie samaaj ko barbaad karne walo.n ki khadi khaat karo.

*{boycott}




Komal shahab . pranaaM ........

bahut dino se maine koe aapko reply nhi diyaa ....

mujhe lagta hai aap jin muddo pe likhte hain, unko rokne ke chakkar mai aur bhi advertise karte hai ......

aapne newspaper padha hoga uske front page pe kabhi rape jaisi news nahi hoti ....

aap jis tarah itni blunt bhashaa mai likh dete haiN, poetry ke hisaaab se sahi nahi ,
aisa nahi ki rape , blatkaar jaise word poem nah anhi aate, lekin unka content itna jabardast hota hai ki , woh cheekhti huee cheezeN dab jaati hai....


aapne jo pic yahaaN lagaye hai, woh unnecessary , aur ek dam galat haiN .

ap likheN, is tarah ki tasbereN kyuN,
sirf apni poem ko jyada wazn dene ke liye ......!!

HumeN azzadi hai har cheez ki, lekin limitation bhi zaroor haiN ...

bakki .... aap jano .....

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17th August 2010, 02:17 PM

Komal jii, muje bhi aapki es poetry ke saath jo pictures thi zara bhi nahi sahi nahi lagi, accha hua dhaval ne delete kar di, hum kuch bhi post karte haiN usko ek baar gaur se pad leN, dekh leN, soch leN ki kuch galat to nahi lag raha, bada azeeb sa laga en pictures ko dekh kar, enki jaroorat nahi thi post karne ki....pls SDC ki maan-maryada ka khayaal rakha kijiye, yehi sirf aur sirf shayri ki site hai....koi sahi pictures ho to koi baat nahi par yeh adnangi ladkiyaoN ki pictures kisi bhi lihaaz se sahi nahi haiN


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Komal jii, muje bhi aapki es poetry ke saath jo pictures thi zara bhi nahi sahi nahi lagi, accha hua dhaval ne delete kar di, hum kuch bhi post karte haiN usko ek baar gaur se pad leN, dekh leN, soch leN ki kuch galat to nahi lag raha, bada azeeb sa laga en pictures ko dekh kar, enki jaroorat nahi thi post karne ki....pls SDC ki maan-maryada ka khayaal rakha kijiye, yehi sirf aur sirf shayri ki site hai....koi sahi pictures ho to koi baat nahi par yeh adnangi ladkiyaoN ki pictures kisi bhi lihaaz se sahi nahi haiN
Sunita Ji......Main aapki baat se sehmat hoon.........is tarha ki pictures prastut karna.... sahi maansiikta ko nahi darshaata .... isse prveen komal ji ko parhez karna chaahiye......kahi se bhi yeh adab ki bazm ki garimaa ke liye accha nahi hai

sunita ji .....aapka unhe samjhaane ka taariika mujhe behad pasand aaya......aur saath hi dhaval ji ka bhi shukriya adaa karta hoon....in ashleel tasveeron ko hataane ka........ !




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Shukraana - 17th August 2010, 08:55 PM

mere zaheen dosto, achha laga jab aap jaane maane fankaaro'n ne is post pe aake mera maan badhaya. ye tasveer film lafange parinde se thi jisne aapke man ko andolit kar diya. in tasveero'n ko dhhaddale se postro'n me aur media me dikhaya ja raha hai . aapke in coments se mujhe khushi mahsoos ho rahi hai ki is baat ka apko ahsaas aur dukh hua ki is film ki ye tasveer behad gandi hai. aur naresh bhaai ! aap khud hi sochie jis tasveer ne Aap jaise suljhe hue insaan ko hilakar rakh dia vo tasveer aam logo'n ya sadak par jaate bachho'n aadi ke man par kya parbhaav dalti hogi ? mera yehi maqsad tha ki lok raae banane vali is forum se aisi tasveer banane valo.n ke khilaaf jagrukta andolan chheda jaae . kiunki fourms akhbaar se bhi taqtwar hoti hai. ye hi haal pariwaar niyojan ke sadhno'n ki advt. ka hai. Lekin fir bhi aapki slaah sir aankho.n par. aage se aise mudde par likhte vaqat mahanpursho.n ki tasveer lagane ko tarzeeh doonga. Aapne maragdarshan kiya,Aap sabhi ka tah-e-dil se shukria.
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17th August 2010, 09:41 PM

komal sahab , dikkat in tasveroN ki nahi

balki inko yaha post karne ki hai .............
ye shayri ki jagah hai, iske alag kayde haiN .... movie mai woh sab chal jata hai yaha nahi ...........

filo mai bahut kuch galat dikhaya jata hai

woh sab yaha to nahi post kar sakte

par aapme ek khaas baat hai, aap theekra humesha doosre ke sar hi fodte ho ....
are ek ne galat photo li hai to aap kyun use dikha rahe haiN, ........ u r doing the same job ..............

ek kahawat yaad aayee ...... himachali maiN hai ...


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maa .... beta itna mail(dirt) hai ki sar pe jhaadi ug aayee hai

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17th August 2010, 11:48 PM

ParveeN jii, maine kisi mahapursh ki tasveer lagane ko nahi kaha aapko, bas etna kaha hai ki koi sahi tasveer ho to koi baat nahi par aisi nahi, aapne pahle bhi apni poetry ke saath tasveereN lagai haiN, tab to humne koi objection nahi kiya...kyuN?? esi tasveer par kyuN kiya, kyuN yeh koi cinemahall nahi hai, yeh shayri ki site hai...agar yahan par bhi vaise hi pictures lagani shuru kar di hum sabne to cinema aur SDC meiN kya fark rah gaya.

SDC ko SDC hi rahne diya jaye to bahuttttttttttttt acchi baat hai.


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