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.....(woh phir waise ho gaye insaan jaise pehle the)..... - 30th March 2003, 02:17 PM

tum phir ho gaye anjaan jaise pehle the
hum phir ho gaye gumnam jaise pehle the

thode jo ashq teri yaad me bahye hain
unse hum ho gaye badnaam jaise pehle the

tere yadon ke jo zakhm bharne lagte hain
yadon ke aate gaye jaam jinko tode the

main sub ko bhulane ki koshish karta hoon
unhi ke aate gaye naam jinko bhoole the

main kyon shikayat karoon in zhakmon ki
wohi yeh de gaye eenaam joki apne the

shayad 'DAMAL' tujhe ab kabhi yaad na aaye
aap waise ho gaye insaan jaise pehle the

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bahot dino ke baad dil mein uska dard utha hai
nahi to koyi wajha nahin hai kisi se kuch kahne ki
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Damal.
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kuch too hi mere dard ka mazmoon samajh le
hansta hua chehra to zamane ke liye hai

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1st April 2003, 10:12 AM

wah damal sahab aap ka kya kahna aap ne to jazbato
ka ek toofaan jaga diya mere dil mein...
aise-aise sher aap ke dimagh mein kahan se aate hain...

thode jo ashq teri yaad me bahye hain
unse hum ho gaye badnaam jaise pehle the

main sub ko bhulane ki koshish karta hoon
unhi ke aate gaye naam jinko bhoole the

yeh sher waqai bahot pasand aaye...
lekin maine dekha ki aap ko ek bhi reply nahi mila...
shayad is waqt ke logon ko achchi cheezen pasand nahin....
pur umeed hai ki aap aise hi likhte rahenge....


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1st April 2003, 10:24 AM

fanah aap ka bahot shukriya jo aap ko meri lkhi hui kuch panktiyan pasand aayin..fanah main pehle hi aap se kah chuka
hoon ki main kabhi kisi se koi umeed nahi rakhta kyon ki
kabhi kabhi aap jisse umeed rakhte hain wohi aap ko dhoka
de jata hai..wohi aap ka dil dukhata hai..is kabhi kisi se koi
umeed, koi aarzoo mat rakhiyega warna uske badle sirf dhoka
hi milta hai...lekin dua karoonga ki aisa kisi ke saath mut ho..

tute hue khwabon ne humko yeh sikhaya hai
dil ne jise paya tha aankhon ne ganwaya hai


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1st April 2003, 04:44 PM

wah wah wah subhan allah damal bhai kya likha hai aapne kasam se pahli hi line me dil nikal ke duikha diya aapne

tum phir ho gaye anjaan jaise pehle the
hum phir ho gaye gumnam jaise pehle the

damal bhai uske bad to poori nazm aisi hai ki hum kya batae hume bahut khushi hai ki humari sarjami ke logo me hunur bacha hua hai abhi vaise ek bat hai hum ise hunur nahi kah sakte dard bayan karne ke sabke alag alag tarike hote hain magar aapki lines padhne ke bad na jane kyon hume apni jindgi ki kuch bate yad aane lagi damal ji hum aapko mail jaror likhenge aur ummid hai ki aap hume reply bhi karenge ! aapne akhiri line me fir se vahi dard jaga diya jo pahli line se paida kiya tha ki

shayad 'DAMAL' tujhe ab kabhi yaad na aaye
aap waise ho gaye insaan jaise pehle the

bahoot khoob damal bhai ek bat hum bhi kahe aapse

bhoolne walo koi yad nahi kiya karta
yade bhuilane walo ki takdeer ban jaya karti hain

aapka dost


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2nd April 2003, 07:42 AM

bahot khoob damal saahab!!
is ghazal ka koii jawaab nahiiN hai mere paas, maiN kya taareef karuuN?!

thode jo ashq teri yaad me bahye hain
unse hum ho gaye badnaam jaise pehle the

-- waaaah! sahii farmaaya hai yaar.. dhoke khaane waale ko sharam se muu chuphaana paDta hai =T

baat ka buura na maaniye damal saahb, magar ek cheez ki kamii dikhi is ghazal meiN -- 'radeef' aapne duusre sher ke baad badal diya.. magar koii baat nahiiN yaar, jab pehle pehle aapke sher paDta tha, tab itna dard nahiiN nazar aata tha..

gustaakhi ke liye ek baar ohr maafi maangta huuN, aur aapse bas ek farmaaiish hai -- likhna mat chhoDiye (bahot khoobiyat se sach beyaan karte haiN aap)!

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2nd April 2003, 09:45 AM

kshitiz aap ko meri ghazal pasand aayi iske liye shukriya..
and i hope to get u'r mail soon....
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Aman aap jub bhi kuch mistakes mere lekh mein batate hain to
main poore dil se use door karne ki koshish karta hoon..
aur ek baat aap se kahni hai..ki aap kuch bhi keh kar mafi mut
manga kariye...kyonki main kabhi kisi ki salah ka bura nahi manta
salah dena to achcha kaam hai aur yeh sure karna ki woh salah
ghalat hai ya sahi hai salah lene wala tai karta hai...aap hamari
inspiration hain isliye mujhe bilkul bhi achcha nahin lagta ki aap
mujhse maafi mange....umeed hai aap meri baat ko ainda bhoole
ge nahin.....agar kuch ghalat laga ho to Nazar-Andaz kar deejiye
ga......


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2nd April 2003, 10:05 AM

Anas main aap ko thankz kehta hoon jo aap ko meri POEM
pasand aayi...aise hi saath dete rahiye....


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