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आज फिर से बाग़ में पत्ते झड़े हैं - 12th August 2014, 07:48 PM

मेज़ के नीचे फटे कागज़ पड़े हैं,
अल्फ़ाज़ मेरे रात भर मुझ से लड़े हैं !!

मेरी भलाई में वो मुफलिस हो गया है,
फैसले उसने लिए अक्सर कड़े हैं !!

संगमरमर भी तो आखिर पथ्थर ही है !!
शबाहत उसकी, जिसने ये पथ्थर गढ़े हैं !!

दश्त से अब काग वो भी जा चूका है ,
कंकड़ों के बीच अब सूखे घड़े हैं !!

हम कभी खेला किये जिस खेत में,
मिलकियत पे इसकी अब मसले खड़े हैं !!


उँगलियों में हुस्न है जज़्बात का,
उसकी नीयत में कईं हीरे जड़े हैं !!

हर्फ़-ओ-कागज़ का नहीं है मुंतज़िर,
ख़िश्त के खांचों में बस किस्से पढ़े हैं !!

बागबां से पूछिये क्या हाल-ए-दिल 'नकुल',
आज फिर से बाग़ में पत्ते झड़े हैं !!

mez ke neeche fate kaagaz pade hain,
alfaaz mere raat bhar mujh se lade hain!!

meri bhalai me wo Mufalis ho gaya he
faisale usne liye aksar kade hain!!

Sangemarmar bhi to aakhir paththar hi he!!
shabahat uski he jisne ye paththar gadhe hain!!

dasht se ab kaag wo bhi jaa chuka he,
kankadon ke beech ab sookhe ghade hain!!

hum kabhi khela kiye jiss khet me,
milkiyat pe uski ab masale khade hain!!


unglion me husn hai jazbaat ka,
Uski neeyat me kayin heere jade hain!!

harf-o-kaagaz ka nahi hai muntazir,
Khisht ke khanchon me bas kisse padhe hain!!

baagban se pochiye kya haal-e-dil 'Nakul',
Aaj fir se baag me patte jhade hain!!

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12th August 2014, 08:10 PM

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मेज़ के नीचे फटे कागज़ पड़े हैं,
अल्फ़ाज़ मेरे रात भर मुझ से लड़े हैं !!

मेरी भलाई में वो मुफलिस हो गया है,
फैसले उसने लिए अक्सर कड़े हैं !!

संगमरमर भी तो आखिर पथ्थर ही है !!
शबाहत उसकी, जिसने ये पथ्थर गढ़े हैं !!

दश्त से अब काग वो भी जा चूका है ,
कंकड़ों के बीच अब सूखे घड़े हैं !!

हम कभी खेला किये जिस खेत में,
मिलकियत पे इसकी अब मसले खड़े हैं !!


उँगलियों में हुस्न है जज़्बात का,
उसकी नीयत में कईं हीरे जड़े हैं !!

हर्फ़-ओ-कागज़ का नहीं है मुंतज़िर,
ख़िश्त के खांचों में बस किस्से पढ़े हैं !!

बागबां से पूछिये क्या हाल-ए-दिल 'नकुल',
आज फिर से बाग़ में पत्ते झड़े हैं !!

wah wah bohat khoob Nakul ji..kya shaandar peshkash hai...

Welcome to shayri.com. .

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1..apne baare me kuch bataiye introduction forum per

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12th August 2014, 08:20 PM

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मेज़ के नीचे फटे कागज़ पड़े हैं,
अल्फ़ाज़ मेरे रात भर मुझ से लड़े हैं !!

मेरी भलाई में वो मुफलिस हो गया है,
फैसले उसने लिए अक्सर कड़े हैं !!

संगमरमर भी तो आखिर पथ्थर ही है !!
शबाहत उसकी, जिसने ये पथ्थर गढ़े हैं !!

दश्त से अब काग वो भी जा चूका है ,
कंकड़ों के बीच अब सूखे घड़े हैं !!

हम कभी खेला किये जिस खेत में,
मिलकियत पे इसकी अब मसले खड़े हैं !!


उँगलियों में हुस्न है जज़्बात का,
उसकी नीयत में कईं हीरे जड़े हैं !!

हर्फ़-ओ-कागज़ का नहीं है मुंतज़िर,
ख़िश्त के खांचों में बस किस्से पढ़े हैं !!

बागबां से पूछिये क्या हाल-ए-दिल 'नकुल',
आज फिर से बाग़ में पत्ते झड़े हैं !!

behad ummdah peshkaash nakkul saahab.................... welcome to SDC.


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12th August 2014, 08:24 PM

Shukriya,

Mene Roman me post ko modify kar diya he!!
Halanki ye har baar mumkin nahi ho sakega, kyun ki me devnaagri me hi likhta hun, aur roman pe pronunciation achha nahi aa paata!!
Apna introduction bhi jald hi denge!!



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wah wah bohat khoob Nakul ji..kya shaandar peshkash hai...

Welcome to shayri.com. .

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1..apne baare me kuch bataiye introduction forum per

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baagban se pochiye kya haal-e-dil 'Nakul',
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