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Meraa deewanaa na koi rahaa -
19th June 2003, 07:47 AM
Meraa deewanaa na koi rahaa
jeene ka bahana na koi rahaa jis din se wida tere dil se hu-ae us din se thikaana na koi rahaa patjhad lage musame-e bahar bhi ab mausam suhana na koi rahaa tere shaher me hai ab sab ajnabi ab jana pehchana na koi rahaa Meraa deewanaa na koi rahaa jeene ka bahana na koi rahaa zeba likhti rahegi....................... |
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HI -
19th June 2003, 10:16 AM
Dear Zeba , Buhat Hi aacha Likha ha aap na, wasa to har share hi buhat aacha ha, but I like last 2.
keep it up, b happy, b brave & B alive, Regards, zeesaanjan |
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19th June 2003, 06:41 PM
Thanks zeeshan ji,
aap ne meri gazal ko padhne aur is ka reply karne ki zehmet ki, zeba. |
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19th June 2003, 09:34 PM
Bahut khoob likha hai Zeba ji ..
Bahut khoobsorat si ghazal likhi hai aapne .. meri taraf se bhi daad kabool farmaiye .. |
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19th June 2003, 10:32 PM
dear Zebaji
bahot pyaari si najm likhi hai...aur kafiya bahot achchha milaya hai..keep writing sanam jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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20th June 2003, 04:07 AM
hey zeba ji
jaise jaise me is nazm ko padhti gayi..sidha sidha mere dil me samaatai gayi samaati gayi....aur kya kahu is nazm aur likhne wale ki tarif mein ? Meraa deewanaa na koi rahaa jeene ka bahana na koi rahaa jis din se wida tere dil se hu-ae us din se thikaana na koi rahaa patjhad lage musame-e bahar bhi ab mausam suhana na koi rahaa tere shaher me hai ab sab ajnabi ab jana pehchana na koi rahaa Meraa deewanaa na koi rahaa jeene ka bahana na koi rahaa ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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21st June 2003, 12:45 AM
kshitiz
ji, sanam ji , aur priya ji, aap ne meri gazal ko padhne ka waqt nikaala aur is ki tareef ki ,is bohot shukriya.aap teenoon ne mera dil khush kadiya aur mujhe agli gazal likhne ke liye protsaahit kiya. zeba |
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meraa deewanaa na koi rahaa |
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meraa deewanaa na koi rahaa -
21st June 2003, 06:11 AM
aslaamaa leikuum zebaa jee
aapkha alfaaz padhe acha lagha yuh deewaneh koh bhi aap pareshaan kar shaktee hoh nahee thaa maaloom jeeta hain kaisha yeh deewana battayeh kiya jab baaji yeh jaan kee laghai chukkee hain shukriya apneh bahut acha leekha hain apkee post read kar letah hoon dil koh shayad yeh deewaana kaheen shookon pah shakeh allah hafiz leekhteh rahiyeh |
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21st June 2003, 04:43 PM
Wah!.. Bohat hi achha likha hai aapne Zeba ji! Apke kalaam me humesha ek saadgi rehti hai.. lekin jazbaaton ki koi kami nahi hoti.. yahi saadgi aur ehsaas aapke kalaamon ki khubsoorti hote hain..
Yeh ghazal to kamaal ki hai.. behad pasand aayi..Tareef qubool kijiyega..  |
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21st June 2003, 09:38 PM
accha likha hai, par ye kya baat huii ke jo dunya mai koii apka deewaana nahi to aap jeena nahi chaahti. just kiddin. i get what you are saying.
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23rd June 2003, 04:39 AM
Thanks dewaana ji, banno ji, aur sanah ji,
aap teenoon ka bhi behad shukriya meri gazal ko padhne aur iski iski sanjeedgi ko pasand karne ke liye. zeba. |
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