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tumhare liye -
9th September 2006, 06:44 PM
TUMHARI JINDGI MAI BUS PYAR HO,
KHUSHIYON SE BHRA TUMHARA SANSAR HO
KHUDA KARE HUMARI HER KHUSHIYON KE TUM,
AUR TUMHAARE HER GAM KE HUM HAQDAR HO
HAR PAL TUMHARA HI INTJAAR KARTI HOON
HAR PAL TUMHARE HI BAARE MAI SOCHTI HOON
HAR DUA MAI KHUDA SE TUMHE HI MANGTI HOON
MAIN KHUD NAHI JANTI MAI TUMHE KITNA CHAHTI HOON
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THANKS -
9th September 2006, 07:18 PM
THANKS UN SAB LOGON KO JIN LOGON NE MUJHE REPLY KIYA THA
US POST PER DOOSRA REPLY NAHI JAA RAHA HAi........aap sabke posts mujhe bhoot ache lage
humari khushiyon ki khuda se feriyad na kerna
bhoola dena hume kabhi yaad na kerna
mili hume bewfai yeh humaribadnasibi thi
bus yehi gujarish hai kisi aur ke saath yun bewafai na karna
AGAR KHUDA NE ISHQ BANAYA HOGA,
TO KHUD BHI AAZMAYA HOGA,
HUMAARI TO AAUKAT HIE KYA,
KHUDA NE KHUD BHI AANSU BAHAYA HOGA……….
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once more -
10th September 2006, 04:43 PM
TUMHARE SIVA NA KISI KO CHAHA HAI NA KISI KO CHAHUNGI,
HAR LAMHA TUMHARA HI INTJAAR KIYA HAI TUMHARA HI INTJAR KRUNGI,
TUMHARE SIVA NA KHUDA SE KUCH MANGA HAI NA MANGUNGI,
DIL KI HAR DHADKAN MAI TUMHE HI BASAYA TUMHE HI BASAUNGI,
TUM BHOOL JAAU MUJHE YEH TUMHARI CHAHAT HOGI,
MAINE TO HAR LAMHA SIRF TUMHI KO CHAHA HAI TUMHI KO CHAHUNGI……..
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10th September 2006, 04:51 PM
TUMHARI JINDGI MAI BUS PYAR HO,
KHUSHIYON SE BHRA TUMHARA SANSAR HO
KHUDA KARE HUMARI HER KHUSHIYON KE TUM,
AUR TUMHAARE HER GAM KE HUM HAQDAR HO
HAR PAL TUMHARA HI INTJAAR KARTI HOON
HAR PAL TUMHARE HI BAARE MAI SOCHTI HOON
HAR DUA MAI KHUDA SE TUMHE HI MANGTI HOON
MAIN KHUD NAHI JANTI MAI TUMHE KITNA CHAHTI HOON
hi arpita
kaisi ho aap
aapne likhne k badi koisis ki haia ur peshkas hi achhi hai
ummid haiaap age uhi likhterahogi
aapka dost dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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10th September 2006, 11:38 PM
arpita ji,
acha likha hai apne.sab hi pasand aaye.likhte rahiye
yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??
--akelijaan--
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THANKS -
11th September 2006, 01:26 PM
THANKS AAP MERI POST PER AAYE AUR USE PASAND KIYA..AAGE BHI MERA SAATH DIJIYEGA
HE IS FLOD WITH ME,
I AM NOT HAPPY.
HE IS HAPPY WITHOUT ME,
I AM SO HAPPY,
BECAUSE-MY LOVE IS REAL
AND REAL LOVE SAYS-YOU ARE WANT TO ALWAYS PLEASENT OF YOUR LOVE.
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hi -
11th September 2006, 02:30 PM
Arpita ji,
aapki teeno post padhi.. bahut achchhi lagi.. aap likhati rahiye..
reply to milate hi rahenge.....
Akant...
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आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
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hi frnds.......... -
15th September 2008, 02:25 PM
hw r u all.......?ap logo ke posts kafi acche lage really........
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17th September 2008, 08:27 PM
Quote:
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hw r u all.......?ap logo ke posts kafi acche lage really........
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Hi Arpita. Welcome back. Aap kaafi achha likhte ho... Keep it up..
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21st September 2008, 07:01 PM
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Originally Posted by arpita
TUMHARI JINDGI MAI BUS PYAR HO,
KHUSHIYON SE BHRA TUMHARA SANSAR HO
KHUDA KARE HUMARI HER KHUSHIYON KE TUM,
AUR TUMHAARE HER GAM KE HUM HAQDAR HO
HAR PAL TUMHARA HI INTJAAR KARTI HOON
HAR PAL TUMHARE HI BAARE MAI SOCHTI HOON
HAR DUA MAI KHUDA SE TUMHE HI MANGTI HOON
MAIN KHUD NAHI JANTI MAI TUMHE KITNA CHAHTI HOON
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bahut achha likha hai apne. ahsas me kashis hai. yu hi likhte rahe.
best wishes.
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21st September 2008, 11:12 PM
Arpita Sahiba! ..
BahuT Hi KhoobsuraT Koshish Hai aaP kii ... Pad kar Accha LeGa aaP ka QalaaM .. isi Tarah Likhte Rahe ... aur is Bazm Ki Shoba BaadaaYe..
ChalTa Hoon.....
AaP Ka DosT
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Amrit
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23rd September 2008, 02:34 PM
arpita ji,
acha likha hai apne.sab hi pasand aaye.likhte rahiye
yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??
-- Ravinder kumar--------
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23rd September 2008, 03:09 PM
Nice expression... I liked them... do keep writing...
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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hello frnds.......... -
23rd September 2008, 10:10 PM
ye mene to nhi likha per mujhe pasand hai.....jald hi kuch apna post krungi.......
Zakhm dilka tumhe dikha na sake,
Roye aise ke aansu aa na sake,
Yaad karte rahe tumhe har pal,
Bus paas apne tumhe bula na sake
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