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mere sehare ki khushboo -
26th December 2009, 04:08 PM
Bazm ko salam..............
Yeh chahat dil ki ke mohobbat mil jaye Ho KwahisheN puri wo din wo shab aaye Meri ankhoN mein basi hia tere chehare ki khushboo Basa deN meri sansoN mein, tere gajare ki khushboo Mere nas nas mein hai jo rawani banke baheti Mere dilber woh tere Naaz o nakhare ke khushboo Teri har ek adaa har roop hai chandan sa mahekta Basa luN dil mein tere surkh laal joure ki khushboo Gul gul bikhare raahoN mein takhat e suhaag maheke Mahek jaye gar sang tere, mere sehare ki khushboo Ta-umar bhula na paunga woH bekarari ke lamhe Bas jaye dil o dimag mein vasl e kamare ki khushboo Kuch shab e roz hia baki abhi waqt guzarne mein Karlo na tum bhi tasawwur us nazare ki khushboo Mehka do mera bhi tan badan pur zore ishq say Barsa do mujh pe youwan e sharare ki khushboo Hai muraad meri yehi hasrat meri yehi Kwahish Bhar duN mang mien tere chand taare ki khushboo 
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26th December 2009, 04:22 PM
Ye tumne likha hai ????
 agar haan, to . . . . . . . . . . ¤£€&@%*~¿§$%^£  samajh aaya ? Nahi na... Meri b samajh ni aaya k kya kahu...  just . . . . . Wonderfulll |
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26th December 2009, 05:50 PM
Sameer..... Its high time you should be married...hahahaha
Waise last line.......... "Bhar duN mang mien tere chand taare ki khushboo" never heard... Chand taaron mein bhi khushboo hoti hai..... I alwayz thought those celestial things are used for comparing beauty or a measure for infinity  |
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26th December 2009, 08:57 PM
Sameer Ji...Aadaab ! bahut khub...sameer bhai....bahut khubsurat khayal aur utni hi umda adaayegi.....Naaz o nakhare ki khushboo se mehakti yeh ghazal dil ko chhu gai....sabhi ashaar bahut ache bune hai aapne....yuhi likhte rahiye.....
tahe dil se daad hazir hai...kabul ki jiye... khush rahiye... apna khayal rakhiye... duaaon ke saath...  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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27th December 2009, 04:43 PM
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Nahi aaya........... But aapki tarif ka andaaz bahut bhaya.......... Thanks for appriciate, Take care, May God bless you......
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28th December 2009, 10:27 AM
Sameer Bhai,,
Kia baat hai bhai, boht hi kamaal likha hai,, Mujhe to hur misra aik se bhad k aik laga,,, main issey ishq se bharpoor aik junooni tehreer kahooN ga.. Jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai,,, Reps dena chahta hooN, lekin de nahi paa raha hooN...  chalo udhaar sahii.. Aur mujhe herat hai k main ne pehle kyun nahi dekhi yeh tehreer, dar-asal main "Aapki-Shayri" ki taraf kam hi rukh karta hooN, shayed is liye... khair....dair aaye du.rust aaye.... Ok apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,, Aur acha acha mehfil mein pesh karte rahiye ga,,, Regardz, Aap ka bhai,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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29th December 2009, 03:08 PM
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Hmm waqt se pahele aur taqdeer se jyada per hi mujhe bharosa hia so... Khuda jab chahega tab hi meri shadi hogi....... Haan actualy we poets often use illogical pharases to convey our feelings Its high time you get used to it Baqs.......  Wel thanks for appriciation.............. Keep reading....... keep visiting .........Khuda Hafez...........
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31st December 2009, 03:50 PM
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Naresh jee Dil ke mousam mein haryal ho o khizaa bhi bahar jaisi lagati hai...... isa hi kuch is creation mein hai .......... aapki daad hamesha sir ankhoN per hai, Aage bhi aisi koshsh jari rahengi....... Aur ummid per khara utarne ki koshsih karunga ke isse bhi achchi creation main kar sakuN....... Apna saath banaye rakhiye, Khush rahiye, Apna khayal rakhiye, Khuda Hafez.............
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2nd January 2010, 03:47 PM
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Janab der aaye per aaye to sahiN yehi kafi hai humare liye.......... Jee, ishq ki jununi tehreer hi hai yeh....... Pahele bahut likhata tha ishq per aab bahut kam ho gaya...... Daad ke liye aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa....... Aate rahiye...... khush rhaiye...... Khuda Hafez........
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2nd January 2010, 08:08 PM
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wahhhhhhhhhhh Sameer....bahut khoob dear..... dil se daad hazir hai.... yuhi likhte raho aur is mehfil ki rounak badhate raho.... khush raho..... rep+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ added  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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7th January 2010, 04:16 PM
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And thanks again for Rep too......... Keep visiting, Keep smiling, khuda hafez.......
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