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baharhaal aap apnaa sher irshaad karen..... shukran jazaaq Allah...... |
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1st April 2016, 10:54 AM
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Nikla mera janaaza tere koochey se qurbat Ho gayi zard humdum teri dast-e-hinaayi(Mujahid) |
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1st April 2016, 11:57 AM
Tarz.. hum the jinke sahaare.. Behr..2122 122 2122 122 Matla Das rahi hai judaayii..yaad phir unki aayi Ro rahi dil ki dhadkan..shor deta sunayii 1 sher Jab bhi kii haiN duaaeN, Kuchh na maNga Khuda se Jissko mil jaaye chaahat, KyuN wo maaNge Khudayee(praveen ji) 2 sher naam tera hi dil meiN. har su deta sunaaii, dekh le meri haalat ab na jaaye bataayii..(sunita di) 3 sher tera hee aksh meri har ek ghazal me basa hai, aaina bhi jo dekhoon tu hee tu de dikhaayi.(acharya_mj) 4 sher Ye nazaare wahin hai..nazrein par woh nahi hain Jinse milti thi palkein..dete naa wo dikhaayi(masti) 5th sher Ek jhalak apni dekar le gaya mera sab kuch Dil mera poochta hai....kyun nazar ye milai.. (madhu) 6th sher Nikla mera janaaza tere koochey se qurbat Ho gayi zard humdum teri dast-e-hinaayi(Mujahid) waah bahut khoob sher..mujahid ji... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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1st April 2016, 03:20 PM
Madhu ji
Ek shayar yaha iss ghazal mai ek hi sher pesh kar sakta hai Ek se zayed nahi |
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1st April 2016, 04:02 PM
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Aisa sirf sabko mauka dene ke liye hai......to thoda sa intzaar...tab tak sabhi doston se request hai ki aap bhi mahfil ko aage badhayein aur di gayi behr par is ghazal ka agla sher pesh karein... Shukriya... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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8th April 2016, 10:45 AM
Dosto mehfil ko aagey baraye
Itni khubsurat ghazal ko adhoora na rakhey |
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8th April 2016, 04:16 PM
Tarz.. hum the jinke sahaare..
Behr..2122 122 2122 122 Matla Das rahi hai judaayii..yaad phir unki aayi Ro rahi dil ki dhadkan..shor deta sunayii 1 sher Jab bhi kii haiN duaaeN, Kuchh na maNga Khuda se Jissko mil jaaye chaahat, KyuN wo maaNge Khudayee(praveen ji) 2 sher naam tera hi dil meiN. har su deta sunaaii, dekh le meri haalat ab na jaaye bataayii..(sunita di) 3 sher tera hee aksh meri har ek ghazal me basa hai, aaina bhi jo dekhoon tu hee tu de dikhaayi.(acharya_mj) 4 sher Ye nazaare wahin hai..nazrein par woh nahi hain Jinse milti thi palkein..dete naa wo dikhaayi(masti) 5th sher Ek jhalak apni dekar le gaya mera sab kuch Dil mera poochta hai....kyun nazar ye milai.. (madhu) 6th sher Nikla mera janaaza tere koochey se qurbat Ho gayi zard humdum teri dast-e-hinaayi(Mujahid) 7th sher Meri kya hai khata jo.. hijra hee ab saza hai. Uske masoom dil me berukhi kyun samayi....(madhu.) अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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8th April 2016, 04:23 PM
Bohat khoob madhu ji
Umeed hai ye ghazal yaha ikhtataam hoti hai Agli behar aur matla ka intezaar rahega |
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8th April 2016, 04:41 PM
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Agla matla aap hee dijiye nayi behr k sath... Imtzaar me... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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8th April 2016, 05:52 PM
aek dost ney aj yeh baher bajhi isi per kuch likhen
1 2 2 2, 1 2 2 2, 1 2 2 2, 1 2 2 2 mujhe terii muhabbat ka, sahaaraa mil gayaa hotaa agar toofaN nahin aataa, kinaaraa mil gayaa hotaa |
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8th April 2016, 09:47 PM
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Zamaney ka agar mujh par koi bandish nahi hota Tujhe meri mohabbat ka sahaara mil gaya hota Mujahid |
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8th April 2016, 11:11 PM
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Ummeed hai ek umda ghazal padhne ko milegi.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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8th April 2016, 11:16 PM
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9th April 2016, 11:58 AM
Madhu ji
Matla toh saba ji ne already de diya hai Mainey ussi matla ko daraaz karte hue sher pesh kiya |
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10th April 2016, 04:19 PM
mohabut mein badul jaana dagha dainey ke jaisa hey
ye kahtey us se gar woh he dobaraa mil gaya hotaa |
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11th April 2016, 01:10 PM
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aur apna sher pichle diye gaye matle ya sher ko quote karke pesh karna hai.. jissse ki sabhi sher sequence me nazar aayein... aap pichli ghazl ka example dekh sakte hain.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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13th April 2016, 01:46 PM
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Kaash merey khuloos-e-ishq ka tujh ko yaqeen hota Toh aye hum-dum terey dil ka faqat mai hi makeen hota Mujahid |
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13th April 2016, 01:59 PM
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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13th April 2016, 02:07 PM
Mumkin hai ki kaash ki agar zyada mauzu hota hai
Maslan Agar merey khuloos-e-ishq ka tujh ko yaqeen hota Toh aye hum-dum terey dil ka faqat mai hi makeen hota |
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13th April 2016, 02:58 PM
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Ummeed hai is qafiye aur radeef par aur bhi haseen sher padhne ko milenge... Duaon ke sath Madhu... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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13th April 2016, 05:38 PM
buhet khoob mujahid saheb buhet achaa shair likha,a hey aap ney
aik koshish meri taraf sey bhii 1 Agar merey khuloos-e-ishq ka tujh ko yaqeen hota Toh aye hum-dum terey dil ka faqat mai hi makeen hota 2 khuloose dil to laazim hey wafaa bhe shart hey laekin suno ay hum sukhan bas ishq dobaaraa naheen hota Quote:
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13th April 2016, 05:53 PM
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Waaahhh...waaah......khoob hai.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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16th April 2016, 08:05 AM
behr.. 1 2 2 2, 1 2 2 2, 1 2 2 2, 1 2 2 2 Example.. mujhe terii muhabbat ka, sahaaraa mil gayaa hotaa agar toofaN nahin aataa, kinaaraa mil gayaa hotaa Matla.. Agar merey khuloos-e-ishq ka tujh ko yaqeen hota Toh aye hum-dum terey dil ka faqat mai hi makeen hota(mujahid ji) 1 sher khuloose dil to laazim hey wafaa bhe shart hey laekin suno ay hum sukhan bas ishq dobaaraa naheen hota(saba) 2sher Meri tanhaiyon par yun shazar hanste na ye raahein.. jo ek hamraah tu hota safar kitna haseen hota.(madhu) अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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16th April 2016, 02:38 PM
3rd sher
Hamey toh lag gayi aadat sanam teri judaayi ki Agar tu saath merey hota you dil na hazeen hota Hazeen=sad Mujahid |
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16th April 2016, 03:27 PM
wah madhu ji buhet achaa shei,r paish kiaa hey aap ne
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16th April 2016, 03:29 PM
wah buhet acha,a sheir likha,aa hey aa,p ne mujahid saheb............. achi ghazal bane gi
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19th April 2016, 04:37 PM
4th sher
Gila-e-taqdeer bhi kab talak karta rahu ya rab Dil-e-makhloot ko yak baar hasil hum-nasheen hota Dil-e-makhloot= confused heart Mujahid |
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21st April 2016, 10:51 AM
Moazziz khavateen aur hazraat
Mehfil ko aagey baraye |
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22nd April 2016, 04:17 PM
behr.. 1 2 2 2, 1 2 2 2, 1 2 2 2, 1 2 2 2 Example.. mujhe terii muhabbat ka, sahaaraa mil gayaa hotaa agar toofaN nahin aataa, kinaaraa mil gayaa hotaa Matla.. Agar merey khuloos-e-ishq ka tujh ko yaqeen hota Toh aye hum-dum terey dil ka faqat mai hi makeen hota(mujahid ji) 1 sher khuloose dil to laazim hey wafaa bhe shart hey laekin suno ay hum sukhan bas ishq dobaaraa naheen hota(saba) 2sher Meri tanhaiyon par yun shazar hanste na ye raahein.. jo ek hamraah tu hota safar kitna haseen hota.(madhu) 3 sher Hamey toh lag gayi aadat sanam teri judaayi ki Agar tu saath merey hota you dil na hazeen hota(mujahid) 4th sher Gila-e-taqdeer bhi kab talak karta rahu ya rab Dil-e-makhloot ko yak baar hasil hum-nasheen hota (mujahid) 5th sher Jo bas ikraar tumne bhi kabhi khulkar kiya hota Muhabbat rang lati yun nishaan bhi har kahiin hota.(madhu) अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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27th April 2016, 03:30 PM
buhet achi ghazal ho rahi hey madhu ji aur mujahid ji daad qubool kariye
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27th April 2016, 09:09 PM
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28th April 2016, 08:58 AM
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Ye daur-e-muflisi mushkil nahi hota merey hum-dum Tu iss ehed-e-masaib mai merey qurb-o-qareen hota Mujahid |
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14th May 2016, 10:49 AM
7th sher
Nawaaza hai khuda ne tujh ko ab aisi zahaanat se Agar sohbat mai tere hota toh mai bhi zaheen hota(Mujahid) |
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14th May 2016, 11:33 AM
Ghazal yaha ikhtataam hota hai
Agli behar ka intezaar rahega |
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14th May 2016, 01:03 PM
buhet achi ghazal hui h mujahid aheb aur madhu ji
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15th May 2016, 04:38 PM
Dosto pesh-e-khidmat hu naye behar ke saath
Behar: Behar-e-rajaz musamman salim Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun 2212, 2212, 2212, 2212 Matla: Zauq-o-tamanna bhi nahi dil mai mohabbat ke liye Mashgool itna hu nahi fursat adaavat ke liye(Mujahid) |
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15th May 2016, 09:40 PM
1 2 2 2, 1 2 2 2, 1 2 2 2, 1 2 2 2 Example.. mujhe terii muhabbat ka, sahaaraa mil gayaa hotaa agar toofaN nahin aataa, kinaaraa mil gayaa hotaa Matla.. Agar merey khuloos-e-ishq ka tujh ko yaqeen hota Toh aye hum-dum terey dil ka faqat mai hi makeen hota(mujahid ji) 1 sher khuloose dil to laazim hey wafaa bhe shart hey laekin suno ay hum sukhan bas ishq dobaaraa naheen hota(saba) 2sher Meri tanhaiyon par yun shazar hanste na ye raahein.. jo ek hamraah tu hota safar kitna haseen hota.(madhu) 3 sher Hamey toh lag gayi aadat sanam teri judaayi ki Agar tu saath merey hota you dil na hazeen hota(mujahid) 4th sher Gila-e-taqdeer bhi kab talak karta rahu ya rab Dil-e-makhloot ko yak baar hasil hum-nasheen hota (mujahid) 5th sher Jo bas ikraar tumne bhi kabhi khulkar kiya hota Muhabbat rang lati yun nishaan bhi har kahiin hota.(madhu) 6th sher Ye daur-e-muflisi mushkil nahi hota merey hum-dum Tu iss ehed-e-masaib mai merey qurb-o-qareen hota (mujahid) 7th sher Nawaaza hai khuda ne tujh ko ab aisi zahaanat se Agar sohbat mai tere hota toh mai bhi zaheen hota(Mujahid) अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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15th May 2016, 09:42 PM
bahut khoob ghazal...........shukriya doston...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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Waah khoob behr chuni hai mujahid ji.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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19th May 2016, 01:16 PM
Mehfil ko aagey baraye
Khawateen aur hazraat Yu be-kas matla achha nahi lagta |
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