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ek rista hai - 20th May 2003, 05:50 PM

mujhe na dekhiye ye naagvaar gujerega
meri ankho mein mere yaar ki tasveer si hai

ek rista hai naa herfoN mein bayaN hota hai
vo hain aajad mere pairon mein janjeer si hai

aaj ki raat bhi aaye nahi kahkar Amber
jinki aankho mein mere khwab ki tabir si hai



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good yaar - 20th May 2003, 08:13 PM

Amber ji,
Bahut hi achha likha hai ji aapne.......ab jaldi se aur nayi nazme likh daliye ...wrana dande padenge........just kidding.
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cool - 20th May 2003, 10:09 PM

Nice written buddy.
I liked it very much ...keep it up....
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thnks - 25th July 2003, 12:18 PM

Pari ji and Gulabo ji

thanks for liking it. and i m sorry for late replying.



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25th July 2003, 08:03 PM

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bohat achche ashaar likhe hain aap ne.
lagta naheen ke aap naee likhne wali hain.
bohat aazmooda shayer ki tarah bare bharpoor shayr hain yeh.
I am really impressed.
Please keep writing and take care.
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25th July 2003, 08:36 PM

bohat amazaing
bohat he acha
i cant belive itna payara sahier
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26th July 2003, 02:47 PM

Amber Jee, Bohot achha likhha hein aapne.

aaj ki raat bhi aaye nahi kahkar Amber
jinki aankho mein mere khwab ki tabir si hai


Really nice one. Thanks for sharing. Likhte rahiyega.
Take care. God bless.
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Hi - 28th October 2003, 03:59 PM

Shukriya mujaffar sheb
bahoot achha laga ye jankar ki mere sher pasand aaye shukriya, keep in touch


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Hi Dost - 28th October 2003, 04:03 PM

shimuljee
mujhe behad khooshi hui ye jankar ki aapko sher pasand aye
Keep in touch. aap jase kadardan milen to likhte rhne ka man karta hai
Buy And TAKE CARE

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