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Love jissey NAAZ boltay haiN - 18th August 2014, 06:18 AM

dil jis pe hai ghumgeeN woH raaz boltay haiN
baat karte haiN us ki jissey naaz boltay haiN

shauqeeN mizaaj hai, khud meiN rehti hai magan
chanchal ko sabhi zubaaN daraaz boltay haiN

ik sawaal pooch bethi thi bhari meHfil meiN
gum-naam shayer ussay dagabaaz boltay haiN

baghiyoN ki ik jamaat khatak’ti hai sab ko
bohat teekha hai in ka andaaz boltay haiN

uss musannif ke hur safhay ko hataa diya jaye ga,
jin ko ananthpak, pari, parStaar, naaz boltay haiN

thanks PS for re-phrasing my thoughts


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Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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18th August 2014, 11:04 AM

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dil jis pe hai ghumgeeN woH raaz boltay haiN
baat karte haiN us ki jissey naaz boltay haiN
shauqeeN mizaaj hai, khud meiN rehti hai magan
chanchal ko sabhi zubaaN daraaz boltay haiN
ik sawaal pooch bethi thi bhari meHfil meiN
gum-naam shayer ussay dagabaaz boltay haiN
baghiyoN ki ik jamaat khatak’ti hai sab ko
bohat teekha hai in ka andaaz boltay haiN
uss musannif ke hur safhay ko hataa diya jaye ga,
jin ko ananthpak, pari, parStaar, naaz boltay haiN
thanks PS for re-phrasing my thoughts
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18th August 2014, 12:28 PM

Dekho bhai Anant ,Pari aur Hasan .

Pehli baat AAPKI Nazm bahut achi.lagi ..hum isme.aap ka dard
mehsoos kar rahe hain..aur darkhwast karenge ki app log
apna rebillion band karein.

Choti si chingaari ne charon taraf aag laga di aur.charon taraf sholey
Bharakne lage aur us aag mein aur koi nahi Naaz khud hi chapet mein
aa gayi.

I am againt the ban of N@aaz and request SDC..fraternity to remove it.

Let there be no animosity in the heart of anybody.from now onwards..
Pls stop.this action and reaction mode and come back to Shayri mode.

Aaj Janamashtami hai ...ek pawan tyohaar hai ..Lets.welcome N@aaz with open
arms im our SDC fraternity..

I will.request. All.worthy members ...seniors...juniors ..Pahunche hue Shayars
and budding.shayars to support my request of bringing N@aaz back to.her home ,
to wbich she belongs ..

With warm regards,
Sanjay Sehgal



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Thumbs up Well Done Sanjay Jiii... - 18th August 2014, 01:50 PM

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baat karte haiN us ki jissey naaz boltay haiN
missing your company at SDC, Naaz! Come back soon...

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Dekho bhai Anant ,Pari aur Hasan .

Pehli baat AAPKI Nazm bahut achi.lagi ..hum isme.aap ka dard
mehsoos kar rahe hain..aur darkhwast karenge ki app log
apna rebillion band karein.

Choti si chingaari ne charon taraf aag laga di aur.charon taraf sholey
Bharakne lage aur us aag mein aur koi nahi Naaz khud hi chapet mein
aa gayi.

I am againt the ban of N@aaz and request SDC..fraternity to remove it.

Let there be no animosity in the heart of anybody.from now onwards..
Pls stop.this action and reaction mode and come back to Shayri mode.

Aaj Janamashtami hai ...ek pawan tyohaar hai ..Lets.welcome N@aaz with open
arms im our SDC fraternity..

I will.request. All.worthy members ...seniors...juniors ..Pahunche hue Shayars
and budding.shayars to support my request of bringing N@aaz back to.her home, to which she belongs ..


With warm regards,
Sanjay Sehgal
Sanjay jii,,

Agreed to all extent with your opinion and suggestion.
I'm happy that we've very sensible Member at SDC in shape
of you!... thanks for being there!

Take care,

Regards,


*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
("Asad")

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18th August 2014, 04:18 PM

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Dekho bhai Anant ,Pari aur Hasan .

Pehli baat AAPKI Nazm bahut achi.lagi ..hum isme.aap ka dard
mehsoos kar rahe hain..aur darkhwast karenge ki app log
apna rebillion band karein.

Choti si chingaari ne charon taraf aag laga di aur.charon taraf sholey
Bharakne lage aur us aag mein aur koi nahi Naaz khud hi chapet mein
aa gayi.

I am againt the ban of N@aaz and request SDC..fraternity to remove it.

Let there be no animosity in the heart of anybody.from now onwards..
Pls stop.this action and reaction mode and come back to Shayri mode.

Aaj Janamashtami hai ...ek pawan tyohaar hai ..Lets.welcome N@aaz with open
arms im our SDC fraternity..

I will.request. All.worthy members ...seniors...juniors ..Pahunche hue Shayars
and budding.shayars to support my request of bringing N@aaz back to.her home ,
to wbich she belongs ..

With warm regards,
Sanjay Sehgal
With all due respect to you and everyone involved Sanjay saahab,

I have Banned Naaz sahiba for 2 weeks.

Yeh ek shayri ka forum hai, jahaaN membraan ek parivaar ki tarah rehte haiN, yahaaN "rebellion" ke liye koi jagah nahiiN hai

main ummeed karta hooN ke Naaz sahiba ke waapas aane ke baad sab members aapas meiN ghul-mil kar raheNgey

phir bhi agar jo members aur mods ka aapas meiN man muTaav hai usey pm ya email ke zariye baiTh kar suljhaa lijiye maiN ban lift kar dooNga

jis-jis mod se kotaahi hui hai unko cheetavani di jaa chuki hai

ab jo members is bagaawat ko badhaava deNge unheiN 2 haftoN ke liye ban kiya jaayega, phir 4 haftoN ke liye aur teesri dafaa permanent ban kar diya jaayega

talkh lehje, taana-kashee, bagaawat, Ghair-zaroori aur Ghair-munaasib alfaaz ka istemaal yahaaN kisi bhi soorat meiN bardaasht nahiiN kiya jaayega


maiN yeh thread filhaal delete nahiiN kar raha haalNke is thread ko kholne ka maqsad saaf zaahir hai lekin phir bhi yeh ek kaavish hai isliye rehne deta hooN, yeh thread koi aur soorat pakdega to aap sab ko pehle se aagaah kar raha hooN



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18th August 2014, 05:33 PM

Dear Maikash Sahib,

After reading your reply I.am satisfied with your cource of action.
My only feeling was that banning a member was very harsh punishment
at initial stage ..but since it is only a temporary ban its OK.

Maikash sahib pls ensure that senior members should be a little more accomodating for
junior members .and should address the querry of junior member with
humility ..

Sometimes freshers might ask small questions to get rid of their
ignorance, which may appear a little irritant to the learned senior member ..

But every querry should be addressed only then can we learn at this platform.
I love and respect the ambience at SDC and hope.that we all live in harmony over here.

Regards,
Sanjay Sehgal



khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.

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With all due respect to you and everyone involved Sanjay saahab,

I have Banned Naaz sahiba for 2 weeks.

Yeh ek shayri ka forum hai, jahaaN membraan ek parivaar ki tarah rehte haiN, yahaaN "rebellion" ke liye koi jagah nahiiN hai

main ummeed karta hooN ke Naaz sahiba ke waapas aane ke baad sab members aapas meiN ghul-mil kar raheNgey

phir bhi agar jo members aur mods ka aapas meiN man muTaav hai usey pm ya email ke zariye baiTh kar suljhaa lijiye maiN ban lift kar dooNga

jis-jis mod se kotaahi hui hai unko cheetavani di jaa chuki hai

ab jo members is bagaawat ko badhaava deNge unheiN 2 haftoN ke liye ban kiya jaayega, phir 4 haftoN ke liye aur teesri dafaa permanent ban kar diya jaayega

talkh lehje, taana-kashee, bagaawat, Ghair-zaroori aur Ghair-munaasib alfaaz ka istemaal yahaaN kisi bhi soorat meiN bardaasht nahiiN kiya jaayega


maiN yeh thread filhaal delete nahiiN kar raha haalNke is thread ko kholne ka maqsad saaf zaahir hai lekin phir bhi yeh ek kaavish hai isliye rehne deta hooN, yeh thread koi aur soorat pakdega to aap sab ko pehle se aagaah kar raha hooN



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Maikash saheb,

Thanks for coming!

maiN umeed karta hooN ke aagay se aisi koi situation paida nahi ho gi,
aur hum apne masloN ka hal, jesa ke aap ne kaha, pm ke zariye nikaaleN ge!

the ban may please be lifted!

Regards,


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Maikash saheb,

Thanks for coming!

maiN umeed karta hooN ke aagay se aisi koi situation paida nahi ho gi,
aur hum apne masloN ka hal, jesa ke aap ne kaha, pm ke zariye nikaaleN ge!

the ban may please be lifted!

Regards,
Hassan saahab aadaab,



jo log bhi is saare jhagDey meiN shareek the voh sab apni Ghalati tasleem kareiN aur aa'iiNda se aise nahiiN hoga is baat ki zimmedaari leiN to maiN ban uthaa dooNga

ab yeh kaise mumkin hoga yeh aap log khud ta'y kar lijiye

kisi bhi member ko agar kisi mod se koi shikayat hai to mujhse seedha raapta kar sakta hai, maiN yahaaN apna personal email address darj kiye deta hooN :

maikash@hotmail.com


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