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Thumbs up Ghazal: ab roz nah yuuN aanaa jaanaa hogaa....! - 31st July 2008, 10:19 AM

Mere pyaare dostoN:

sabhee ko meraa namaskaaR aur aadaab!!

aik baar fir se bazm ko rauShan karne kii dil meiN KhaahiSh liye fir haaZir huuN apnii aik taazaah Ghazal ke saath... dostoN ummid kartaa huuN ki aapkaa pyaar aur saath zaruur mileNgaa... aapki raae'y aur sujhaavo kaa iNtezaar raheNgaa.... mulaa'iizaa farmaa'iiye !!


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bazm se meraa door Thikaanaa hogaa
ab roz nah yuuN aanaa jaanaa hogaa

ye waQt bhi naa jaane beetaa kaise
Khud se sawaal yahee rozaanaa hogaa

kis ko sunaauNgaa haal-e-dil yaaraaN!!
har Shaks wahaaN to aNjaanaa hogaa

bhoole yaaree ko aap to Ghum naa hogaa
maiN bhooluuN to qazaa hi bahaanaa hogaa

qazaa : maut

lauTegaa jab jab apne Ghar me.n "Dhaval"
fir wahi hasnaa aur hasaanaa hogaa

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31st July 2008, 10:35 AM

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Mere pyaare dostoN:

sabhee ko meraa namaskaaR aur aadaab!!

aik baar fir se bazm ko rauShan karne kii dil meiN KhaahiSh liye fir haaZir huuN apnii aik taazaah Ghazal ke saath... dostoN ummid kartaa huuN ki aapkaa pyaar aur saath zaruur mileNgaa... aapki raae'y aur sujhaavo kaa iNtezaar raheNgaa.... mulaa'iizaa farmaa'iiye !!


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bazm se meraa door Thikaanaa hogaa
ab roz nah yuuN aanaa jaanaa hogaa

ye waQt bhi naa jaane beetaa kaise (kaise beetaa)
Khud se sawaal yahee rozaanaa hogaa
*kaunsaa waqt (any specialized period)

kis ko sunaauNgaa haal-e-dil yaaraaN!!
har Shaks wahaaN to aNjaanaa hogaa
*yaaraa
* wahaaN .... kahaaN ????? sher mubham rah gayaa

bhoole yaaree ko aap to Ghum naa hogaa
maiN bhooluuN to qazaa hi bahaanaa hogaa
* :nah: ko :naa: likhne se bacho to behtar hai. waise baRii baat naheeN hai.
qazaa : maut

lauTegaa jab jab apne Ghar me.n "Dhaval"
fir wahi hasnaa aur hasaanaa hogaa

*tumne kaii jagah flexible metering kaa istemaal kiyaa hai. karte waqt aik baar rawaanee dekh liyaa karo, koee misraa kaheeN par aTaknaa naheeN chaahiye.

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achchhee koshish... .... aise hee likhte raho!
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Dheer bhaiya:

namaste!!

koShiSh par sab se pehle aapkaa Khat paRh ke baRii KhuShii hu'ii.. aapki raa'ey se haMeshaa mere hunar meiN izaafaa huaa haii.. jee haaN maiNe flexible metering kaa bahot jaGah istemaal kiYaa haii.. aapne jo baat kahii wo baat moHtaram sarwar saaHeb ne bhee mujhe kahii thee ki jahaaN tumhe lageN ki tumHaarii zubaaN aTke samjho wahiiN tumHaarii Ghaltii haii.. par ees naasamjh se yeh Ghaltii ho hi ga'ii.. aglii baar maiN apnii taraf se pooree koShiSh karuNgaa ki aapko Shikaayat kaa mauqaa na duuN... ! Ghazal kii pasaNdagee ke liYe maiN aapkaa be-Had ShuKraGuzaar huuN..! YuuNhi saath dete rahiYeNgaa..!


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Thumbs up yahaN bhi rahna hanste hansate rahna - 31st July 2008, 12:44 PM

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Mere pyaare dostoN:

sabhee ko meraa namaskaaR aur aadaab!!

aik baar fir se bazm ko rauShan karne kii dil meiN KhaahiSh liye fir haaZir huuN apnii aik taazaah Ghazal ke saath... dostoN ummid kartaa huuN ki aapkaa pyaar aur saath zaruur mileNgaa... aapki raae'y aur sujhaavo kaa iNtezaar raheNgaa.... mulaa'iizaa farmaa'iiye !!


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bazm se meraa door Thikaanaa hogaa
ab roz nah yuuN aanaa jaanaa hogaa

ye waQt bhi naa jaane beetaa kaise
Khud se sawaal yahee rozaanaa hogaa

kis ko sunaauNgaa haal-e-dil yaaraaN!!
har Shaks wahaaN to aNjaanaa hogaa

bhoole yaaree ko aap to Ghum naa hogaa
maiN bhooluuN to qazaa hi bahaanaa hogaa

qazaa : maut

lauTegaa jab jab apne Ghar me.n "Dhaval"
fir wahi hasnaa aur hasaanaa hogaa

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Mere pyaare dostoN:

sabhee ko meraa namaskaaR aur aadaab!!

aik baar fir se bazm ko rauShan karne kii dil meiN KhaahiSh liye fir haaZir huuN apnii aik taazaah Ghazal ke saath... dostoN ummid kartaa huuN ki aapkaa pyaar aur saath zaruur mileNgaa... aapki raae'y aur sujhaavo kaa iNtezaar raheNgaa.... mulaa'iizaa farmaa'iiye !!


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bazm se meraa door Thikaanaa hogaa
ab roz nah yuuN aanaa jaanaa hogaa

ye waQt bhi naa jaane beetaa kaise
Khud se sawaal yahee rozaanaa hogaa

kis ko sunaauNgaa haal-e-dil yaaraaN!!
har Shaks wahaaN to aNjaanaa hogaa

bhoole yaaree ko aap to Ghum naa hogaa
maiN bhooluuN to qazaa hi bahaanaa hogaa

qazaa : maut

lauTegaa jab jab apne Ghar me.n "Dhaval"
fir wahi hasnaa aur hasaanaa hogaa

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achchii kohshish hai, alfaaz meiN thoDii aur mazbootii darkaar hai, wazan ke hawaale se kuchh nahiiN kahuuNga aap khud dekh lijiyega


mashq jaari rakhiye, aap meiN ek achche shayar hone ke tam'aam gunn mau'jood haiN, mehnat karte rahiye



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Mere pyaare dostoN:

sabhee ko meraa namaskaaR aur aadaab!!

aik baar fir se bazm ko rauShan karne kii dil meiN KhaahiSh liye fir haaZir huuN apnii aik taazaah Ghazal ke saath... dostoN ummid kartaa huuN ki aapkaa pyaar aur saath zaruur mileNgaa... aapki raae'y aur sujhaavo kaa iNtezaar raheNgaa.... mulaa'iizaa farmaa'iiye !!


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bazm se meraa door Thikaanaa hogaa
ab roz nah yuuN aanaa jaanaa hogaa

ye waQt bhi naa jaane beetaa kaise
Khud se sawaal yahee rozaanaa hogaa

kis ko sunaauNgaa haal-e-dil yaaraaN!!
har Shaks wahaaN to aNjaanaa hogaa

bhoole yaaree ko aap to Ghum naa hogaa
maiN bhooluuN to qazaa hi bahaanaa hogaa

qazaa : maut

lauTegaa jab jab apne Ghar me.n "Dhaval"
fir wahi hasnaa aur hasaanaa hogaa

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halaki tumne mujhe phone per bata diya tha per is gazal se main bavasta nahi tha..... aaj ise pada to pahle to wah waahi nikli per baad main dekh bhii huaa ki tum ja rahe ho...
jaisii mehnat shayri main ki baisii mehnat padaaii main bhii karna mere dost

fir milenge....

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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, ahchi kosish thi dhaval bhai, aur bahut waqt baad padha v hai, maikash bhai se sehmat huN maiN, ki alfaazoN meN thodi aur majbooti chahiye, par ahcha laga padhne meN, umeed hai jald hiN aapko dobara padhne ka mauka milega....!!



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merii ees koShiSh ko aapkaa jawaab haasil huaa yahii bahot baRii baat hai mere liYe.. aapke jawaab ka haMeShaa iNtezaar hotaa haii.. maiN apnii GhaltiyoN ko door karne kii poorii koShiSh karuNgaa.. Ghazal ki pasaNdagee ke liYe maiN aapka be-Had mamnuun huuN..!

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Rutho na a dost k fir!roth jany waly maan b jaien tumanany waly thak sy jaty hynaur hamary sath zindagi k saffer mienchalny k qabil nahi rehtykhafa na ho a sathi k fir!khafgion k mosum dyr tak nahi teltydil-o-jaan mien,ruh k ander bohat hibohat hi door ja ker basyra kerty hynnaraz na ho a hamdam k fir!narazgi kadurraton ko janm dyti hykadurratien dil ki fir nahi jatien aur!zindagi ki shaffaf rahien dhundli-o-gurd aalood ho jati hynso myry dost ,myry sathi,myry hamdam!mujhy aatbar ka maan do!


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halaki tumne mujhe phone per bata diya tha per is gazal se main bavasta nahi tha..... aaj ise pada to pahle to wah waahi nikli per baad main dekh bhii huaa ki tum ja rahe ho...
jaisii mehnat shayri main ki baisii mehnat padaaii main bhii karna mere dost

fir milenge....

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aapkaa saath Shuruaat se hi milaa hai mujhe... baRii KhuShii huii aapko merii koShiSh par deKh ke.. Hmm paRhaa'ii. aapki baatoN kaa Khayaal raKhuNgaa

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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, ahchi kosish thi dhaval bhai, aur bahut waqt baad padha v hai, maikash bhai se sehmat huN maiN, ki alfaazoN meN thodi aur majbooti chahiye, par ahcha laga padhne meN, umeed hai jald hiN aapko dobara padhne ka mauka milega....!!
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kaise haiN aap? Ghazal ki pazeerA'ii ke liYe maiN aapka be-Had ShuKraGuzaar huuN.. merii koShiSh haMeShaa yahee rehtii hai ki apnii GhaltiyoN se seeKh aage baRhuN.. aapki baatoN kaa Khayaal raKhuNgaa.. ! aik baar fir se ShuKriyaaH..! YuuNhi saath dete raheN..!

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Rutho na a dost k fir!roth jany waly maan b jaien tumanany waly thak sy jaty hynaur hamary sath zindagi k saffer mienchalny k qabil nahi rehtykhafa na ho a sathi k fir!khafgion k mosum dyr tak nahi teltydil-o-jaan mien,ruh k ander bohat hibohat hi door ja ker basyra kerty hynnaraz na ho a hamdam k fir!narazgi kadurraton ko janm dyti hykadurratien dil ki fir nahi jatien aur!zindagi ki shaffaf rahien dhundli-o-gurd aalood ho jati hynso myry dost ,myry sathi,myry hamdam!mujhy aatbar ka maan do!
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tah-e-dil se ShuKriyaaH aapka..! YuuNhi paRhte raheN aage bhee..!

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Khoobsurat Peshkash Dhaval Saheb......yeh sher pasandida raha...

bhoole yaaree ko aap to Ghum naa hogaa
maiN bhooluuN to qazaa hi bahaanaa hogaa


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3rd April 2010, 08:14 AM

Dhaval Bhai,,

Aap ne boht hi achaa likha hai,,

Khas-kar maqta boht pasand aaya...

Younhi likhtay rahiye,,

DuaooN k saath ijazat,

Faqat,,


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bhoole yaaree ko aap to Ghum naa hogaa
maiN bhooluuN to qazaa hi bahaanaa hogaa
saajid bhaa'ii:

Aadaab!

koShish ki pasaNdagee ke liye maiN aapka be-had ShuKragyzaar huuN... saajid bhaa'ii yeh koShiSh mere dil ke bahot hi qareeb haii..yeh maine tab liKhi thee.. jab Engg. kaa nayaa sem. Shuru hone waala tha aur mujhe jaana tha Hostel..! wahaaN hotaa huuN to roz aane kaa mauqaa nahiiN miltaa..Khair.. aapka aik baar fir se shuKriyaaH ki aapne apnaa Qeemtee waQt diaa.. saath dete raheN.. !

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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Aap ne boht hi achaa likha hai,,

Khas-kar maqta boht pasand aaya...

Younhi likhtay rahiye,,

DuaooN k saath ijazat,

Faqat,,
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koShiSh ko pasaNd karne ke liye bahot bahot ShuKriyaa'h!

yuuNhi saath dete raheN aage bhee..!

KhuSh raheN... anaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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jee haaN saHeeH kahaa aapne do saal pooraani Ghazal hay yeh... border pe to nahiiN jaanaa thaa bhaa'ii ab kyuuN liKhi yeh saajid bhaa'ii ko jawaab dete huye ziK'r kar diaa.. Baqtiar bhaa'ii jab koii hamaare dil se juRaa huaa hay to usse jab door jaaanaa ho to dil maantaa nahiiN.. aisaa hi kuch mere saath bhee huaa thaa... Shaa'iiree Parivaar mere dil se juRaa huaa hay.. yahaaN ke sabhee dost merii ziNdagee kaa aik hissaa hay.. jab nayaa sem Shuru hone jaa rahaa tha to aisa lagtaa thaa ki ab Shaayad roz naa aane ko mile.. uss ehsaas ko maine lafzoN meiN bayaa.n karne ki ik ChhoTi si koShiSh kii thee.. aapne eesey paRhaa mujhe baRii hi KhuShii hu'ii aage bhee paRhte rahiyengaa ! maiN aapka ShuKraGuzaar huuN..!

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Chhoti Koshish.............................Bahut hi achi lagi.

Aisi koshish mujhse kabhi ho nahi paye gi...... , kyun ke thoda sa sangh dil hoon, thoda sa blunt hoon, thoda sa karab hoon, thoda sa sab ko na-gawaar hoon.... isliye aise ehsasaat likhna mujhse kabhi nahi hoga
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Zaruur ho paayeNgee koShiSh.. saNg dil aur blunt hone se dil ke ehsaasoN ki bayaanee meN ko'ii farq nahiiN paRtaa bhaa'ii.. jab dil aur ehsaas aapka bhee saath denge to aap bhee uss saadagee ko lafzoN meN bayaa.n kar paayeNge.. aur dostoN ko to hum apne dil meiN jaGah dete hai.n .. na-gawaar ki to baat hi kahaaN..!

paRhte raheN aage bhee.. ShuKriyaaH!

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bhoole yaaree ko aap to Ghum naa hogaa
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lauTegaa jab jab apne Ghar me.n "Dhaval"
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Dhawal Bhai bahut umdaa koshish lagi aapki.....

sabhi sher dil ko chu gaye, Tarif ke liye lafz nahi sache dil ke ahsaas saaf bayan hote hai.
aise hi likhate rhiaye... Dil se daad kabool kijiye...

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