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tera akhri salaam aa jaye - 3rd May 2016, 08:39 PM
Bahut arse ke baad kuch toota foota likhme ki koshish ki hai....


Na janey kis gali meiN shaam aa jaye,
Meri zindagee ka akhree muqaam aa jaye.

Dekhe thhe maine bhi kayee baar sapne,
Waqt chalte na ruksatee ka paigam aa jaye.

Kuch bachi hui ghariyan main bhi jee loon,
Ankh moondne se pehle koi toofan aa jaye.

Bahut ker liye tujh se giley shikve zindagee,
Chand lamhoN ki khushi mere naam aa jaye.

kal shayad Milne ka mauka mile ya na mile,
Jane se pehle tera aakhri salaam aa jaye.

Tujh ko haasil na ker saka koi ghum nahiN,
Jane fir kabhi tere saath mera naam aa jaye


khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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3rd May 2016, 11:15 PM
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Bahut arse ke baad kuch toota foota likhme ki koshish ki hai....


Na janey kis gali meiN shaam aa jaye,
Meri zindagee ka akhree muqaam aa jaye.

Dekhe thhe maine bhi kayee baar sapne,
Waqt chalte na ruksatee ka paigam aa jaye.

Kuch bachi hui ghariyan main bhi jee loon,
Ankh moondne se pehle koi toofan aa jaye.

Bahut ker liye tujh se giley shikve zindagee,
Chand lamhoN ki khushi mere naam aa jaye.

kal shayad Milne ka mauka mile ya na mile,
Jane se pehle tera aakhri salaam aa jaye.

Tujh ko haasil na ker saka koi ghum nahiN,
Jane fir kabhi tere saath mera naam aa jaye
Bahut umdaa janaab pehle to aapko yaha waapis dekhkar bahut hi khushi mehsuus ho rahi hai...aise jaise koi ghar laut aaya ho.

Maauf kijiyega par jitni maloomat rakhta hoon us nazariye se to yeh umdaa hi nazr aa rahi hai....matlaa pur asar raha haan ek sher mein aapne kaafiye mein lafz 'toofan' ka istemaal kiya hai jo baaki sheron ke kaafiye se alag hai par ehsaas aur rawaangi behad umdaa rahi janaab...

likhte rahiYeGaa


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4th May 2016, 07:05 AM
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Bahut arse ke baad kuch toota foota likhme ki koshish ki hai....


Na janey kis gali meiN shaam aa jaye,
Meri zindagee ka akhree muqaam aa jaye.

Dekhe thhe maine bhi kayee baar sapne,
Waqt chalte na ruksatee ka paigam aa jaye.

Kuch bachi hui ghariyan main bhi jee loon,
Ankh moondne se pehle koi toofan aa jaye.

Bahut ker liye tujh se giley shikve zindagee,
Chand lamhoN ki khushi mere naam aa jaye.

kal shayad Milne ka mauka mile ya na mile,
Jane se pehle tera aakhri salaam aa jaye.

Tujh ko haasil na ker saka koi ghum nahiN,
Jane fir kabhi tere saath mera naam aa jaye

Namaskaar sanjay ji...
Behad khushi ho rahi hai aapko yahaan dekhkar....bahut hee purasar kalaam se mahfil ko nawaza hai aapne..ehsaas khoob bayaan huye hain..sabhi ashaar khoob rahe.. daad qubool kijiyega.......

Aate rahiyega...

Regards
Madhu..


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4th May 2016, 11:22 AM
Hamdam ji...


gazal ki baarikion k baare me jyada to kuch nahi jaanti par gazal k ehesaas mujhe bahot pasand aaye...

aage bhi aap ki rachna padhne ka mauka dete rahiyega

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