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Exclamation "Chale Ham Farz Karte Hain" - 13th January 2005, 08:52 PM

I didn't know where to submit that's why I thought may be here Main meri raai baad mein doungi lekin Aap Doston agar chahe tou Aapna Aapna raai zarour dijiyega...I would be pleased to see Your replies

Intekhab..Nazm by Amjad Islam Amjad Jee.

"Chale Ham Farz Karte Hain"

Ye keisa khel hain Taqdeer ki benaam bazi ka
Ke jo haare so haare hain
magar jo jeet jaate hain Unhein bhi ik nayi uljhan ki daldal gher leti hain
Ke ek mushkil ke baad ek aur mushkil gher leti hain
Samajhne ke liye aaye, 'chale ham farz karte hain'
Kisi lamhe Kisi ek shaqs ko pana hamarein zindegi se bhi jiyada beshkimat tha
Ham usski arzoo mein sari duniya bhoul baithe thein
Baas ussi ka naam lete thein Ussi ko yaad karte thein
Usski dhoun mein jiite thein Ussi ke gham mein maarte thein

Tou phir kuch youn hua ek roz Ussko paa liya hamnein
Usse rangon ki doli mein bitha kar ghar le aaye
Tasabbour ki har ik khoushboun Gul-e-Manzil mein le aaye
Kahani agein chalti hain
Tou hota iss tarah hain..Zindegi ke karkhane mein,
Dono ke aane jaane mein
Jaahan ke an-gint kamon ka chakkar chalne lagta hain
Badan thakta hain..Aankhein der tak bedaar rehne se sulagti hain
Zuban ek tajrana aur musalsal jhouth ki taqrar se uktane lagti hain
Magar majbour hoti hain ke duniya ka dabaon..Ussko roukne nahin deta
Koi bekar sa qissa wo phir dohrane lagti hain
Thakan aur neend ki milti haad Sar-o-Bistar par
Saher se raat tak ki Be-natija guft-o-gu yaad aane lagti hain

Tou Uss lamhe wo umron ki ziyaadat ka samar
Wo Gohar-e-Yaktaa Usse shiknon bhade bistar ke ek hisse mein hota hain
Magar mehsous hota hain ke jeise wo hazaron meel ki duri pe rehta hain
Issi duri ke sehra mein kayii raatein bikharti hain
Kaii deen Faut hote hain tou phir Ik deen Kisi benaam se ehsaas ki aahat
Hamarein khird ki khali kali mein gunjti hain Aur hamein bedaar karti hain
Baatati hain ke ham jiss ghar mein rehte hain
wahan kuch khoubsourat khwaab bhi aabaad hote hain
Chale ham farz karte hain, Ye sab kuchh ik kahani hain
magar kitni pourani hain*



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Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
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13th January 2005, 10:11 PM

Tou Uss lamhe wo umron ki ziyaadat ka samar
Wo Gohar-e-Yaktaa Usse shiknon bhade bistar ke ek hisse mein hota hain
Magar mehsous hota hain ke jeise wo hazaron meel ki duri pe rehta hain
Issi duri ke sehra mein kayii raatein bikharti hain
Kaii deen Faut hote hain tou phir Ik deen Kisi benaam se ehsaas ki aahat
Hamarein khird ki khali kali mein gunjti hain Aur hamein bedaar karti hain
Baatati hain ke ham jiss ghar mein rehte hain
wahan kuch khoubsourat khwaab bhi aabaad hote hain
Chale ham farz karte hain, Ye sab kuchh ik kahani hain
magar kitni pourani hain*


shimul ...

ye jo nazm tumne pesh ki .. ho sakta hai ki ek kahani lagti hai .. pr wakai jo khayal hai unki gehraiyoN ne dil chu liay hai ... meri daad teh dil se kabool kareN


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13th January 2005, 10:19 PM

I know..... .............abtak bhoola nahi hooN Amjad Islam Amjad ji kis is nazm ko...jo tumne meri post per likhi thi....baat ghazloN, geetoN/nagmoN ke through kehna tumne khoob aata hai Shimul.

Thanks Dear...bahut achchhi lagi ye nazm yahaaN dubara parhkar.

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13th January 2005, 10:28 PM

shimul ji.....


ek khani si ye nazm hai.....

lekin aachi hai......


yunhi pesh karte rahiye.....



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hi - 13th January 2005, 11:27 PM

chale ham farz karte hain....
.shimul
kasi ho?
waise mere khiyal main yeh nazm....SHAYR E USTAAD ,,main suit karti....lekin aap ka yahan post karna bhi kisi khyal ka nitija hoga..
jo shayad hmari soch se yakinan behter hi hoga,,,
baat AMAJAD ISLAM AMJAD sahab ki is nazm ki ho
to un k andaz ka tu ik zmana kayal hay...
aik taweel afsane ko sameet kar...ik kahani
or ik kahani ko sambhal kar ik nazm ki shakl dena
un se behter shayad koi kar paye...
bohat piayar intkhab hay yeh...
or ZIA MOHAUDDIN sahab ki awaz main agar yeh
suna jaye to kmaal lagta hay sunne main...
agar aap ne un ki awaz main sun ne ho to
pakistani music.com parzaror chek kijiye ga..
yakinan pasnd aye ga..
apna khiyal rkahiye ga..
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Sacccha Pyaar..Kuch kehta hain aur? :)
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Sacccha Pyaar..Kuch kehta hain aur? :) - 13th January 2005, 11:31 PM

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Tou Uss lamhe wo umron ki ziyaadat ka samar
Wo Gohar-e-Yaktaa Usse shiknon bhade bistar ke ek hisse mein hota hain
Magar mehsous hota hain ke jeise wo hazaron meel ki duri pe rehta hain
Issi duri ke sehra mein kayii raatein bikharti hain
Kaii deen Faut hote hain tou phir Ik deen Kisi benaam se ehsaas ki aahat
Hamarein khird ki khali kali mein gunjti hain Aur hamein bedaar karti hain
Baatati hain ke ham jiss ghar mein rehte hain
wahan kuch khoubsourat khwaab bhi aabaad hote hain
Chale ham farz karte hain, Ye sab kuchh ik kahani hain
magar kitni pourani hain*


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ye jo nazm tumne pesh ki .. ho sakta hai ki ek kahani lagti hai .. pr wakai jo khayal hai unki gehraiyoN ne dil chu liay hai ... meri daad teh dil se kabool kareN
My Dear Kunal Jee, Ummid karti houn Aap theek honge*Dil ko bohot khushi houi ki Aap yeaha aaye aur reply bhi ki **Ek baat hain sirf ki Aapse kuch aur bhi ummid thi lekin chhodiye ussko I hope You can understand if You give a little more thought in Your Name~You might understand what I ment**Dil ki gehraaion se shukriya kuboul kijiyega...**Haan, Aap mujhe hamesha reply karte ho aur main hi houn jo Aapko reply nahin kar paayi abhi tak..I do feel bad about it**As I already told You that I Love to read Your writings**Mafh kijiyega agar ho sake tou..*Aap jeisa Dost kisko na chahiye hogi**A Flower for You**Dil ki gehraaion se~Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat chahoungi...**Take Care...God bless You.

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Nice to see You here :) - 13th January 2005, 11:39 PM

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I know..... .............abtak bhoola nahi hooN Amjad Islam Amjad ji kis is nazm ko...jo tumne meri post per likhi thi....baat ghazloN, geetoN/nagmoN ke through kehna tumne khoob aata hai Shimul.

Thanks Dear...bahut achchhi lagi ye nazm yahaaN dubara parhkar.

Chaand
Dear Chaand Jee, I know You know Jee Ye main thodi hi na houn..ye tou ik chhota sa dil hain aur kuchh jiyada hi pagal sa bhi shayaad...lol...You are so most welcome**Dil ki gehraaion se shukriya kuboul kijiyega...**Khush rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat... **Take Care...God bless You.

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*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
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Ye tou ik kahani hi hain shayaad :)
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Ye tou ik kahani hi hain shayaad :) - 13th January 2005, 11:46 PM

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shimul ji.....


ek khani si ye nazm hai.....

lekin aachi hai......


yunhi pesh karte rahiye.....
Ummid karti houn Aap theek honge*Hain tou sahi par kitni pourani hain Dil ki gehraaion se shukriya kuboul kijiyega... Aapko achha laga Jaan kar hamein bohot khushi houi Aur Khash kar Aapki keemti waqt ka Tah-e-Dil se Shukriya aada karna chahti houn...**I will try my best to do so..*Khush rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat chahoungi...**Take Care...God bless You.

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*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
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I am so very deeply sorrrrrrrrrrrrrry** - 13th January 2005, 11:56 PM

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chale ham farz karte hain....
.shimul
kasi ho?
waise mere khiyal main yeh nazm....SHAYR E USTAAD ,,main suit karti....lekin aap ka yahan post karna bhi kisi khyal ka nitija hoga..
jo shayad hmari soch se yakinan behter hi hoga,,,
baat AMAJAD ISLAM AMJAD sahab ki is nazm ki ho
to un k andaz ka tu ik zmana kayal hay...
aik taweel afsane ko sameet kar...ik kahani
or ik kahani ko sambhal kar ik nazm ki shakl dena
un se behter shayad koi kar paye...
bohat piayar intkhab hay yeh...
or ZIA MOHAUDDIN sahab ki awaz main agar yeh
suna jaye to kmaal lagta hay sunne main...
agar aap ne un ki awaz main sun ne ho to
pakistani music.com parzaror chek kijiye ga..
yakinan pasnd aye ga..
apna khiyal rkahiye ga..
apne is intkhab se mutarif karwane ka behad shukria
khan
Salaam...Main theek houn..Ummid karti houn ki Aap bhi theek honge Hamse bhoul ho gaayi Hamka mafhi dei dou Haan, Jee bhoul ho gayi...Gane ki hi bol thi par dil se thi...**Ek baat baataoun Aapko? Yaad hain jab maine Bulleh Shah Jee ki Kalam ke bade mein Puchha aur Aapne mujhe link diya tha? You know Now my that account been closed but I did retrived it but it's empty Khair, koi baat nahin hain kyoun ki abhi bhi main hotmain account khol nahin paa rahi houn..Yahoo is working fine**I will listen to it**Dil ki gehraaion se Shukriya kuboul kijiyega...**It's always so nice to see You**You made me smile**Khush rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...God bless You. Allah Hafiz*

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*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
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Kisi lamhe Kisi ek shaqs ko pana hamarein zindegi se bhi jiyada beshkimat tha
Ham usski arzoo mein sari duniya bhoul baithe thein
Baas ussi ka naam lete thein Ussi ko yaad karte thein
Usski dhoun mein jiite thein Ussi ke gham mein maarte thein

Wahh! Very true!


Tou Uss lamhe wo umron ki ziyaadat ka samar
Wo Gohar-e-Yaktaa Usse shiknon bhade bistar ke ek hisse mein hota hain
Magar mehsous hota hain ke jeise wo hazaron meel ki duri pe rehta hain


Very well said!!

Hamarein khird ki khali kali mein gunjti hain Aur hamein bedaar karti hain
Baatati hain ke ham jiss ghar mein rehte hain
wahan kuch khoubsourat khwaab bhi aabaad hote hain
Chale ham farz karte hain, Ye sab kuchh ik kahani hain
magar kitni pourani hain*


Shimul!

Lovely Nazm yaar.... AmjadIsalam ji ki hia.. acchia kais naa ho... Bahut nazmein padjhi hain inki.. I jsut love his style....

Yeh nazm to bahut hi sundar hai... Samajh nahi aata kis sher ki taareef karein aur kis ki nahin.... Bahut Khoob Shimul, Meri Daad kubool karna ise dhoond laane aur yahan post karne ke liye.... Aur kahin to shayd padhna na ho pata

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14th January 2005, 03:02 PM

shimulji


bahoot acha likha hai apne
aise hi likhte rahiyega

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You made me smile :) - 14th January 2005, 05:31 PM

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Kisi lamhe Kisi ek shaqs ko pana hamarein zindegi se bhi jiyada beshkimat tha
Ham usski arzoo mein sari duniya bhoul baithe thein
Baas ussi ka naam lete thein Ussi ko yaad karte thein
Usski dhoun mein jiite thein Ussi ke gham mein maarte thein

Wahh! Very true!


Tou Uss lamhe wo umron ki ziyaadat ka samar
Wo Gohar-e-Yaktaa Usse shiknon bhade bistar ke ek hisse mein hota hain
Magar mehsous hota hain ke jeise wo hazaron meel ki duri pe rehta hain


Very well said!!

Hamarein khird ki khali kali mein gunjti hain Aur hamein bedaar karti hain
Baatati hain ke ham jiss ghar mein rehte hain
wahan kuch khoubsourat khwaab bhi aabaad hote hain
Chale ham farz karte hain, Ye sab kuchh ik kahani hain
magar kitni pourani hain*


Shimul!

Lovely Nazm yaar.... AmjadIsalam ji ki hia.. acchia kais naa ho... Bahut nazmein padjhi hain inki.. I jsut love his style....

Yeh nazm to bahut hi sundar hai... Samajh nahi aata kis sher ki taareef karein aur kis ki nahin.... Bahut Khoob Shimul, Meri Daad kubool karna ise dhoond laane aur yahan post karne ke liye.... Aur kahin to shayd padhna na ho pata

Sooo... TC and Keeeeeppp Smiling
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Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
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So Sweet of You to come... :) - 14th January 2005, 05:35 PM

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shimulji


bahoot acha likha hai apne
aise hi likhte rahiyega

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Dear Pallavi Jee, keisi hain aap? I hope You are well Dil ko bohot achha laga jo Aap yeaha aaye aur parhkar reply bhi ki...Dil ki gehraaion se Shukriya kuboul kijiyega **A Flower for You*Younhi saath dete rahiyega*Khush rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat chahoungi...**Take Care...God bless You.

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Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
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14th January 2005, 10:02 PM

Hmmm..Tumhare kucch baad me kehne ki baad pe kucch yaad aaya

Dil ki dil me naa reh jaaye, kahaani keh lop
Chahe do harf likho, chaahe zabaani keh lo...

Wakayi is ghazal me sawaal bhi hai aur jawaab bhi... but hai lajawaab jo bhi ho...

Kunaal jee.. aapke ek hi hain site pe.. inke jaisa doosra milna mushkil.. hai.. .. Kyun Kunaal? Abhi kisi ko main inke avataar ka explanation de raha thhaa

Tum naa shukriya keh keh ke mujh mota kar dogi.... Mujhe patla rhne do amrita ka liye

Hor kee dassan... Bass tumi khyaal rekho.. and doo keep smiling...Hpe to see u sooooooonn


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Hmmm..Tumhare kucch baad me kehne ki baad pe kucch yaad aaya

Dil ki dil me naa reh jaaye, kahaani keh lop
Chahe do harf likho, chaahe zabaani keh lo... NICE**

Wakayi is ghazal me sawaal bhi hai aur jawaab bhi... but hai lajawaab jo bhi ho...ACHHA>>>LOL>>>

Kunaal jee.. aapke ek hi hain site pe.. inke jaisa doosra milna mushkil.. hai.. .. Kyun Kunaal? Abhi kisi ko main inke avataar ka explanation de raha thhaa...HEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeY !

Tum naa shukriya keh keh ke mujh mota kar dogi.... Mujhe patla rhne do amrita ka liye..ha ha ha ha...**

Hor kee dassan... Bass tumi khyaal rekho.. and doo keep smiling...Hpe to see u sooooooonn
Main tou hashti hi rehti houn**Dil de ander jo vi hove woi dassdeon...lol...My Punjabi...!!! Khush rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...God bless You.

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Cooolll! Meri company me rehkar tum sab seekha rahi ho Chahe Bengali ho ya Punjabi.. Woh baat alah\g ahi ke Tum bhi meri tarah tooti-footi hi bolti ho....

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Re: "Chale Ham Farz Karte Hain" - 11th February 2005, 10:42 PM

shimul....

ye lo maiN aa gaya tumhare is kalam pe ... apne kuch khayal pesh karne ... waqt kaafi laga par maiN kuch bhoola nahi .. ek azeem kalaam ki shaan maiN jo alfaaz nahi keh paya tha aaj tak woh likhne ke liye ... janaab Amjad Islam Amjad Jee ki likhi is gazal ko maine kabhi suna to nahi ... par jab tumne ise yahaN pesh kiya .. sach ek ek alfaaz jigar ke andar tha ... jaisa maine pehle kaha ki ek kahani se kam nahi ... jo iski sacchai hai ... ek khwab hai jo bahar aa jana chahta hai ... aur ek sach se roobroo kaewa jana chahta hai sabko...

sach hai ... ki jab koi shay humse door hoti aur jispar hum dil haar baithte hai .... woh hume is duniya main sabse azeem hoti hai ... kyuNki jab woh humare liye ek khwab hoti hai ... aur jab woh khwab poora ho jata hai to nighaeN koi aur khwab bunne lagti hai ... kyuNki inhe to aadat hai naye sapne bunne ka ... tabhi jab koi shakhs humse door hota hai to uske kareeb aane maiN hum koi kasar nahi chorte ... aur baad maiN usi ki chand batoN ko seeene se laga lete hai ... aur rishtoN maiN daraar pad jati hai ... isi liye sahab amjad ji use bas khwab hi mante hai ... aur sach maiN jee lena chahte hai ... aur khush rehte hai isi baat se ki kam se kam abhi ye khwab hi to hai ...

hazaroN maiN se tumhe maine apnaya...
ek khawab ko apne roobroo sach paya...
rozmarra ki chakki maiN pis gaya "saccha_pyar"
tum khawab hi rehte dil mai khayal ye aaya...

shimul bohat bohat shukriya aise azeem nazrane ko yahan hum tak lane ke liye ... muafi chahuNga bohat deri se aaya yahaN

aap apna khayal rakhna

aapka apna

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hi - 12th February 2005, 01:01 AM

aaj bar bar parhne ko dil kiya ise or bar bar parha
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Hello Shimul - 12th February 2005, 05:16 PM

Shimul ji

How r you??Kitni khoobsurat Nazm hay..........Aapki choice ja jawab nahin.......Always u present so beautiful Nazm...........

"Chale Ham Farz Karte Hain"

Ye keisa khel hain Taqdeer ki benaam bazi ka
Ke jo haare so haare hain
magar jo jeet jaate hain Unhein bhi ik nayi uljhan ki daldal gher leti hain
Ke ek mushkil ke baad ek aur mushkil gher leti hain
Samajhne ke liye aaye, 'chale ham farz karte hain'


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Kunal Jee: I know You haven't forgotten... :)** - 12th February 2005, 05:41 PM

Dear Friend's: I will come back & reply tomorrow **Main bohot jiyada busy houn **I hope You All Can Understand...*Khush Rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat chahoungi...**Take Care...**God bless You All.

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13th February 2005, 01:57 PM

Hi Shimul Jee,

I believe No words can explain your divine heart.... After all The divine is beyond any explanations..... What u have written here is makin a nostalgia creeping in my mind......

"uski yaad ko seene se lagaaye beqaraar main
karta raha hun ta-umr.... uska intezaar main
na woh aata hei ....... na koi khabar uski
un khato.N se lipat ke roya baar baar main""

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Younhi Hashte Rehna :)** - 14th February 2005, 05:35 PM

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Cooolll! Meri company me rehkar tum sab seekha rahi ho Chahe Bengali ho ya Punjabi.. Woh baat alah\g ahi ke Tum bhi meri tarah tooti-footi hi bolti ho....

U TC 2... Muskurati Raho....
Phir Bhi~Kuch Tou Hain Na Khush Rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...**God bless You.

Keep smilling.......


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Salaam :) Nice to see You... :)** - 14th February 2005, 05:39 PM

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aaj bar bar parhne ko dil kiya ise or bar bar parha
thanks again for sharing
Hope You are well Dil Ki Gehraaion se shukriya**You are so Most Welcome**Khush Rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...**God bless You.

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Your Sher's made me smile :) - 14th February 2005, 05:45 PM

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Hi Shimul Jee,

I believe No words can explain your divine heart.... After all The divine is beyond any explanations..... What u have written here is makin a nostalgia creeping in my mind......

"uski yaad ko seene se lagaaye beqaraar main
karta raha hun ta-umr.... uska intezaar main
na woh aata hei ....... na koi khabar uski
un khato.N se lipat ke roya baar baar main""

God Helps
Warm Regards
Hope You are well Dilki Gehraai Tak Chhouya Aapki Sher's**Dilki Gehraaion se Daad aur Shukriya Kuboul Kijiyega... **Did Made my Day**A Flower For You**Khush Rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat chahoungi...**Take Care...**God bless You.

Keep smilling.......


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Aadab** - 14th February 2005, 07:48 PM

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shimul....

ye lo maiN aa gaya tumhare is kalam pe ... apne kuch khayal pesh karne ... waqt kaafi laga par maiN kuch bhoola nahi .. ek azeem kalaam ki shaan maiN jo alfaaz nahi keh paya tha aaj tak woh likhne ke liye ... janaab Amjad Islam Amjad Jee ki likhi is gazal ko maine kabhi suna to nahi ... par jab tumne ise yahaN pesh kiya .. sach ek ek alfaaz jigar ke andar tha ... jaisa maine pehle kaha ki ek kahani se kam nahi ... jo iski sacchai hai ... ek khwab hai jo bahar aa jana chahta hai ... aur ek sach se roobroo kaewa jana chahta hai sabko...

sach hai ... ki jab koi shay humse door hoti aur jispar hum dil haar baithte hai .... woh hume is duniya main sabse azeem hoti hai ... kyuNki jab woh humare liye ek khwab hoti hai ... aur jab woh khwab poora ho jata hai to nighaeN koi aur khwab bunne lagti hai ... kyuNki inhe to aadat hai naye sapne bunne ka ... tabhi jab koi shakhs humse door hota hai to uske kareeb aane maiN hum koi kasar nahi chorte ... aur baad maiN usi ki chand batoN ko seeene se laga lete hai ... aur rishtoN maiN daraar pad jati hai ... isi liye sahab amjad ji use bas khwab hi mante hai ... aur sach maiN jee lena chahte hai ... aur khush rehte hai isi baat se ki kam se kam abhi ye khwab hi to hai ...

hazaroN maiN se tumhe maine apnaya...
ek khawab ko apne roobroo sach paya...
rozmarra ki chakki maiN pis gaya "saccha_pyar"
tum khawab hi rehte dil mai khayal ye aaya...

shimul bohat bohat shukriya aise azeem nazrane ko yahan hum tak lane ke liye ... muafi chahuNga bohat deri se aaya yahaN

aap apna khayal rakhna

aapka apna

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