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16th October 2005, 06:08 PM
pata nahi dosto na jane kyun mujhe in sare questions ka jabab nahi mil raha hai, agar aap mai se kisi ko pata ho to jarur bataiga.
Aakhir kyun dil is kadar rota hai,
Na jagta hai aur na hi sota hai.
Aakhir kyun use hum bhul na pate hai,
Bas har pal hum hi dhokha kha jate hai.
Aakhir kyun humse jindagi is kadar khelti hai,
Bas har woqte hume, ek gum naam andhere mai dhakelti hai.
Aakhir kyun hum diey ki tarah jalte hai,
Jab ki O hume pero tale kuchalte hai.
Aakhir kyun jindagi hume yu rulati hai,
Hume to O LADKI AAJ BHI YAAD ATI HAI.
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Tutna na kabhi tum har kar,
Jiwan to hai ek sangram,
Jise tum jito har DWAR par.
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Parayo ne apnaya,
par, apno ne diya dhokha.
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Re: ****Aakhir Kyun**** -
16th October 2005, 08:17 PM
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pata nahi dosto na jane kyun mujhe in sare questions ka jabab nahi mil raha hai, agar aap mai se kisi ko pata ho to jarur bataiga.
Aakhir kyun dil is kadar rota hai,
Na jagta hai aur na hi sota hai.
Aakhir kyun use hum bhul na pate hai,
Bas har pal hum hi dhokha kha jate hai.
Aakhir kyun humse jindagi is kadar khelti hai,
Bas har woqte hume, ek gum naam andhere mai dhakelti hai.
Aakhir kyun hum diey ki tarah jalte hai,
Jab ki O hume pero tale kuchalte hai.
Aakhir kyun jindagi hume yu rulati hai,
Hume to O LADKI AAJ BHI YAAD ATI HAI.
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ravi jee......
pyaar to hota hi sawaaloN ka dariyaa hai.......jisme jitne gehre jaaoge....nikalnaa utna hi mushkil ho jaata hai.....aapne abhi pyar ke ehsaas ko mehsoos nahi kiya hai.....jab aap is ehsaas me bandheNge tab aapse maiN ye sawaal karungi....hum yahi duaa karte haiN ki jald se jald apko apka humsafar mil jaaye.....magar apke saath aisa kuch na ho jo bhi aapne is kalaam me kahaa.....
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat,
KasaK......
~A tease in heart~
Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii,
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18th October 2005, 12:12 PM
Hume bhi yahi lagta tha ki payar ek hasin jindagi aur dher sara sawal jo khusiyo se laga hua hai. par jab koi payar mai dhokha khata hai to use hi malum hota hai ki payar sirf bhahari dikhwa hai, aur bhitar se bas time pass hai. SO .............................
mene ye kaha.
BUt aapki baate sachi payar pe jarur lagu hota hai. so thanx 4 nice thinking about love.
Tutna na kabhi tum har kar,
Jiwan to hai ek sangram,
Jise tum jito har DWAR par.
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18th October 2005, 12:20 PM
dekhiye ravi jee.....
har dhoke ka matlab ye nahi hota ki hum kisi ke saath time-pass sort of thing kar rahe the.....ya humaraa pyar sirf ek dikhaawa tha...kabhi kabhi humari bebasi humari bewafaai ban jaati hai....hum laakh logoN ko samjhaayeiN magar ye duniya nahi sunti......isliye rishtoN k maayne badal jaate haiN....aur log ise otherwise le lete haiN......
jab aap pyar karenge tab apse baat karungi......
luv,
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Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii,
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18th October 2005, 12:48 PM
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dekhiye ravi jee.....
har dhoke ka matlab ye nahi hota ki hum kisi ke saath time-pass sort of thing kar rahe the.....ya humaraa pyar sirf ek dikhaawa tha...kabhi kabhi humari bebasi humari bewafaai ban jaati hai....hum laakh logoN ko samjhaayeiN magar ye duniya nahi sunti......isliye rishtoN k maayne badal jaate haiN....aur log ise otherwise le lete haiN......
jab aap pyar karenge tab apse baat karungi......
luv,
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HEy kasak aapki feeling payar k taraf achi hai,
Apne payar ka ek rup dekha hai dusra rup dekhegi tab aapko bhi iska pata chalega.
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Tutna na kabhi tum har kar,
Jiwan to hai ek sangram,
Jise tum jito har DWAR par.
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18th October 2005, 07:01 PM
pyar k bhi roop hote hain.......ye mujhe aaj pataa chala.....ravi jee..apko ek baat kahooN.....pyar karne ke alag alag roop ho sakte haiN..alag alag tareeke ho sakte haiN..lekin pyar sirf ek hota hai..tabhi to aaj tak iski definitioN nahi bani.....logoN ne ise har tarah se le liyaa....lekin jis tarah se lena chahiye tha us tarah se nahi liya.....aur jahaaN tak meri baat hai ki main kaunsa roop jaanti hoN kaunsa nahi......to wo to aapko kisi aur din bataaungi.......filhaal aap khush rahiye apni zindagi me.....khuda se yahi guzarish hai.....
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18th October 2005, 07:21 PM
shama chahta hu raviji iske jabab to mere paas bhi nahi hai magar itna keh sakta hu pyar ka matlad dard hai. yeh wo dard hai jo ek baar sabko milta hi hai kal humare paas tha aaj tumhare paas hai...............................
meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi
ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main
na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi
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18th October 2005, 07:21 PM
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dekhiye ravi jee.....
har dhoke ka matlab ye nahi hota ki hum kisi ke saath time-pass sort of thing kar rahe the.....ya humaraa pyar sirf ek dikhaawa tha...kabhi kabhi humari bebasi humari bewafaai ban jaati hai....hum laakh logoN ko samjhaayeiN magar ye duniya nahi sunti......isliye rishtoN k maayne badal jaate haiN....aur log ise otherwise le lete haiN......
jab aap pyar karenge tab apse baat karungi......
luv,
KasaK.......
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ek baat kehta hoon kasa k ji,
ishq karne se wehdat ka maza milta hai,
ishq saccha ho to bande ko khuda milta hai.
aur main isi baat par yakeen karta hoon.agar ishq saccha ho to aisi koi majboori nahi hai jo hume majboor karde dagabazi ke liye.ye to hui ek baat.
doosri baat ye ki aaj ke zamane me sach kahoon to saccha pyar khatm ho chuka hai,bahut kam log bache hain jo saccha pyar karte honge.kuch khelte hain,kuch time pass karte hain,kuch majak karte hain,aur na jane kya kya aur kehte hain ki pyar karte hain,aur sach kahoon to log saccha pyar karen bhi to kyun kyunki pyar me sirf dard aur bewafai hi milti hai.bas kahin jyada keh gaya hoonga agar to maafi chahta hoon.bas tunhi likhte rahiye aap.
aapka LUCKY 
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18th October 2005, 07:54 PM
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ek baat kehta hoon kasa k ji,
ishq karne se wehdat ka maza milta hai,
ishq saccha ho to bande ko khuda milta hai.
aur main isi baat par yakeen karta hoon.agar ishq saccha ho to aisi koi majboori nahi hai jo hume majboor karde dagabazi ke liye.ye to hui ek baat.
doosri baat ye ki aaj ke zamane me sach kahoon to saccha pyar khatm ho chuka hai,bahut kam log bache hain jo saccha pyar karte honge.kuch khelte hain,kuch time pass karte hain,kuch majak karte hain,aur na jane kya kya aur kehte hain ki pyar karte hain,aur sach kahoon to log saccha pyar karen bhi to kyun kyunki pyar me sirf dard aur bewafai hi milti hai.bas kahin jyada keh gaya hoonga agar to maafi chahta hoon.bas tunhi likhte rahiye aap.
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ye aap khud k oopar dhaal ke dekh lijiye ki apka ishq sachcha hai ya nahi......aur jahaaN tak sachche pyar ki baat hai to main ek baat kehna chahungi ki aap jaisa insaaN sachche pyar ki existence pe agar kuch kahe to baat nahi jamegi.....kyuNki apka sochna galat hai aur alag bhi.......duniya me kayi misaaleiN aisi haiN jo apne sachche pyar ko paa chuki haiN......yahi to problem hai na hamaari......hum wahi dekhte haiN jo nahi hota....hum ye kyuN nahi dekhte jo hotaa hai.....baat wahi par atak ke reh jaati hai ki logoN ki soch hi ekdum negative ho chuki hai......
waise hum is par privately baat kareiN to zyadaa behtar hai....yahaan behes karne se waqt zaaya ho jayega.......
thanx,
KasaK...........
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Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii,
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18th October 2005, 07:57 PM
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pyar k bhi roop hote hain.......ye mujhe aaj pataa chala.....ravi jee..apko ek baat kahooN.....pyar karne ke alag alag roop ho sakte haiN..alag alag tareeke ho sakte haiN..lekin pyar sirf ek hota hai..tabhi to aaj tak iski definitioN nahi bani.....logoN ne ise har tarah se le liyaa....lekin jis tarah se lena chahiye tha us tarah se nahi liya.....aur jahaaN tak meri baat hai ki main kaunsa roop jaanti hoN kaunsa nahi......to wo to aapko kisi aur din bataaungi.......filhaal aap khush rahiye apni zindagi me.....khuda se yahi guzarish hai.....
luv,
KasaK......
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Kasak Payar k do rup hota hai ye mane dhekha hai is liy mene kaha hai, par tum jo bataya ki payar to bas payar hota hai main is baat par aagry hu par payar mai jo khel khelta hai, O kahi bhi jine layak nahi hota hai.
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Tutna na kabhi tum har kar,
Jiwan to hai ek sangram,
Jise tum jito har DWAR par.
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Parayo ne apnaya,
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18th October 2005, 08:01 PM
bilkul correct hai.....pyar me khel khelnaa galat hai.......aur ye wo insaaN khud bhi jaantaa hai jo ye khel kheltaa hai.....aapke saath kya hua hai ye maiN nahi jaanti....lekin apne experience se bataa rahi hoon ki humara pyar hi galat nahi hota....hum bhi kabhi galat ho sakte haiN.....shayad majbooriyoN ne us insaan ko gher rakha ho......
luv,
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18th October 2005, 08:01 PM
Thanx Lucky aapko acha laga to hume bhi acha laga.
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Jise tum jito har DWAR par.
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18th October 2005, 08:07 PM
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shama chahta hu raviji iske jabab to mere paas bhi nahi hai magar itna keh sakta hu pyar ka matlad dard hai. yeh wo dard hai jo ek baar sabko milta hi hai kal humare paas tha aaj tumhare paas hai...............................
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Thik hai koi baat nahi agar aapke passd is ka koi jabab nahi to koi baat nahi.
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Tutna na kabhi tum har kar,
Jiwan to hai ek sangram,
Jise tum jito har DWAR par.
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Parayo ne apnaya,
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19th October 2005, 10:32 AM
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bilkul correct hai.....pyar me khel khelnaa galat hai.......aur ye wo insaaN khud bhi jaantaa hai jo ye khel kheltaa hai.....aapke saath kya hua hai ye maiN nahi jaanti....lekin apne experience se bataa rahi hoon ki humara pyar hi galat nahi hota....hum bhi kabhi galat ho sakte haiN.....shayad majbooriyoN ne us insaan ko gher rakha ho......
luv,
KasaK.......
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Ho sakta hai kasak ji ki hum bhi kahi pe galat ho par jaha tak mare sochna hai main apne aap ko kahi pe galat nahi samjh raha hu, par agar koi payar k naam pe aapko avoid kare to to aap kya samjhenge. So.......................
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Jise tum jito har DWAR par.
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19th October 2005, 11:10 AM
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ek baat kehta hoon kasa k ji,
ishq karne se wehdat ka maza milta hai,
ishq saccha ho to bande ko khuda milta hai.
aur main isi baat par yakeen karta hoon.agar ishq saccha ho to aisi koi majboori nahi hai jo hume majboor karde dagabazi ke liye.ye to hui ek baat.
doosri baat ye ki aaj ke zamane me sach kahoon to saccha pyar khatm ho chuka hai,bahut kam log bache hain jo saccha pyar karte honge.kuch khelte hain,kuch time pass karte hain,kuch majak karte hain,aur na jane kya kya aur kehte hain ki pyar karte hain,aur sach kahoon to log saccha pyar karen bhi to kyun kyunki pyar me sirf dard aur bewafai hi milti hai.bas kahin jyada keh gaya hoonga agar to maafi chahta hoon.bas tunhi likhte rahiye aap.
aapka LUCKY
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Jaha tak lagta hai Lucky tumahara aur mera khayal mita - julta hai, aur tumari baat bilkul sach hai ki is jamane mai aab koi bhi jaldi sacha payar nahi karta hai. kyun koi kisi pe trust nahi karta hai.
Payar har tarah se wiswas pe hi tika rahta hai. jab wiswas tut jata hai to payar ek bewafai ban jati hai. Is liy sayad is jamane mai sacha payar jaldi kisi ko nahi mita hai.Is ka example tumare samne hai.
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Jiwan to hai ek sangram,
Jise tum jito har DWAR par.
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Parayo ne apnaya,
par, apno ne diya dhokha.
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19th October 2005, 11:19 AM
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ye aap khud k oopar dhaal ke dekh lijiye ki apka ishq sachcha hai ya nahi......aur jahaaN tak sachche pyar ki baat hai to main ek baat kehna chahungi ki aap jaisa insaaN sachche pyar ki existence pe agar kuch kahe to baat nahi jamegi.....kyuNki apka sochna galat hai aur alag bhi.......duniya me kayi misaaleiN aisi haiN jo apne sachche pyar ko paa chuki haiN......yahi to problem hai na hamaari......hum wahi dekhte haiN jo nahi hota....hum ye kyuN nahi dekhte jo hotaa hai.....baat wahi par atak ke reh jaati hai ki logoN ki soch hi ekdum negative ho chuki hai......
waise hum is par privately baat kareiN to zyadaa behtar hai....yahaan behes karne se waqt zaaya ho jayega.......
thanx,
KasaK...........
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Kasak baat yaha negative ki nahi hai agar koi person kisi se sacha payar karta hai aur wo ladki use jabab mai ha bol kar phir mukar jae to kya yaha baat negative sense ki hoti hai kya, us ladke ko to yhi lagega na ki O ladki use payar nahi karti hai ya wo use thoka de rahi hai.
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Tutna na kabhi tum har kar,
Jiwan to hai ek sangram,
Jise tum jito har DWAR par.
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Mera payar kesa anokha,
Parayo ne apnaya,
par, apno ne diya dhokha.
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19th October 2005, 02:20 PM
ravi jee........
aap ye usi insaaN se poochiyegaa jisne kabhi kuch aisaa kiya ho jisse aapko lagaa ho ki dhokadhadi hai........well.......har insaan kisi se bhi soch ke pyar nahi karta......ye to bas ho jaata hai......aur kabhi kabhi hum aise haalaatoN me bandh ke reh jaate haiN ki hume na chaahte huye bhi kisi ki khushi k liye kuch kadam uthaane padte hain.......chaahe usme humari khushi ka galaa dab raha ho......lekin its all a matter of circumstances.....aap sirf ye dekh rahe haiN ki us ladki ne kya kiya.....ye nahi dekh rahe ki usne aisaa kyuN kiya.......jab jaan jaayenge...tab baat karenge......
thanx,
KasaK......
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19th October 2005, 05:54 PM
Mujhe lagta hai yaha pyaar par writing war chal rahi hai. Ravi brother and KASAK ji aap dono apni apni jagah par correct hai...
Pyar koi khel nahin ye aap dono jaante hai....
sorry ye to filmi line hai
Hum pyaar ko wahi maante hai jaisa woh hume milta hai , kisi ko dhokha or kisi ko zindagi...
Sabhi ke liye pyaar ke apne alag alag mayne hai..ie jaise hume ye milta hai hum ise waisa hi maan lete hai
Ab hume ye sochne ki bajay past mein kya hua apne future ke baare mein sochna chahiye
HAPPY WEDNESDAY 
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20th October 2005, 11:44 AM
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Mujhe lagta hai yaha pyaar par writing war chal rahi hai. Ravi brother and KASAK ji aap dono apni apni jagah par correct hai...
Pyar koi khel nahin ye aap dono jaante hai....
sorry ye to filmi line hai
Hum pyaar ko wahi maante hai jaisa woh hume milta hai , kisi ko dhokha or kisi ko zindagi...
Sabhi ke liye pyaar ke apne alag alag mayne hai..ie jaise hume ye milta hai hum ise waisa hi maan lete hai
Ab hume ye sochne ki bajay past mein kya hua apne future ke baare mein sochna chahiye
HAPPY WEDNESDAY
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Thanx Abhishek ji aapne aapna raay diya .
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Jise tum jito har DWAR par.
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Parayo ne apnaya,
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20th October 2005, 11:48 AM
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ravi jee........
aap ye usi insaaN se poochiyegaa jisne kabhi kuch aisaa kiya ho jisse aapko lagaa ho ki dhokadhadi hai........well.......har insaan kisi se bhi soch ke pyar nahi karta......ye to bas ho jaata hai......aur kabhi kabhi hum aise haalaatoN me bandh ke reh jaate haiN ki hume na chaahte huye bhi kisi ki khushi k liye kuch kadam uthaane padte hain.......chaahe usme humari khushi ka galaa dab raha ho......lekin its all a matter of circumstances.....aap sirf ye dekh rahe haiN ki us ladki ne kya kiya.....ye nahi dekh rahe ki usne aisaa kyuN kiya.......jab jaan jaayenge...tab baat karenge......
thanx,
KasaK......
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Kasak jaha tak puchne ka sawal hai to mene pucha bhi tha par jaha tak mujhe pata chala, iski koi waja nahi tha. ab aap kya bolti hai ispe ?
Main Ravi
Tutna na kabhi tum har kar,
Jiwan to hai ek sangram,
Jise tum jito har DWAR par.
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Mera payar kesa anokha,
Parayo ne apnaya,
par, apno ne diya dhokha.
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