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aaj kahiN "RAHIM" to kahiN "RAM" nazar aate haiN......! -
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Mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskaaR , dostoN aaj main aap sab ke bich mera ek aur kalaam lekar hazir huN is bar maine khuda ki bebasi aur insaaN ki berahmi ko darshane ki kosish ki haiN ummid hai kuch had tak maiN kamiyaab rahu , aap sab ke jawab ka mujhe besbri se intezar raheNga ,ummid haiN k aap sabko meri ye kosisH pasaNd aayeNgi
aaj kahiN "RAHIM" to kahiN "RAM" nazar aate haiN......! ------------------------------------------------------- khuda ne socha tha ke raheNge sab insaaN pyaar se, zameeN pe dekha to armaaN lut'te nazar aate haiN juthe wade aur rishtoN se jee bharta hai insaaN ka, har ek ke dil me bure paigaam nazar aate haiN kuch to rahaim kiya hota khuda pe khudgarz insaano, hathoN me talwaar liye sare-aam nazar aate haiN had ho gayi haiN ab to hevaaNiyat ki duniyaN meiN, jahaaN bhi dekho bas katle-aam nazar aate haiN jo hath chhute the kabhi maa ke pairo ko yaaroN, un hathoN me aaj sirf bhare jaam nazar aate haiN ehmiyat nahi hai aaj insaaN ko khuda ke paigamo ki, duniya me har jagah aaj rishte badnaam nazar aate haiN har insaaN ko pata haiN ke "SAB KA MALIK EK HAI", fir bhi aaj kahiN "rahim" to kahiN "ram"nazar aate haiN |
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30th November 2006, 12:28 PM
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hi dhaval bohat hi nazuk issue ko le lia aap ne aap ko pata hai ke is per likhna asaan nahi hota kionki do mazhab ko mila rahay hain .........haan lekin aik baat kahoon gi ke aap ne poora insaaf kia hai is nazam main aur bohat khubsurti se sachayee ko bayan kia hai aaj kal jo kuch ho raha hai use shayri main dhaala bohat khoob bohat bohat acha likha aaj tak jitna likha hai un main sab se ziada ye acha laga mujhay keep writing apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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wah ji wah -
30th November 2006, 12:40 PM
har insaaN ko pata haiN ke "SAB KA MALIK EK HAI",
fir bhi aaj kahiN "rahim" to kahiN "ram"nazar aate haiN wah mere chhotu wah kya baat hai tere is khyaal ne to mera dil loot liya....isee se milta julta ek share arzz hai... jab haqkat hai ye har zaare me tu rehta hai phir zamee par kahin masjid kahin mandir kiyon hai.... tera yeh kalaam dil ko chhu gaya....yu hee koshish karte raho manzil zaroor milegi.......apna khyaal rakhna.......raj........ ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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dear dhaval bahut sarra pyar...! aaj mai.n bahut kush hoon, kyuki phele baat to yeh ki tumne bahut badiya theme liya hai aur us par etni khoobsurti se likha hai ki kaya kahu. yu hi likhtey raho, bas etna dhayan rakhna ki aise theme par likhtey huey kisi ke jazbaato ko hurt na karna. vaise tum kuad samajdaar ho. love tumhari didi  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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30th November 2006, 01:11 PM
khuda ne socha tha ke raheNge sab insaaN pyaar se,
zameeN pe dekha to lut'te armaaN nazar aate haiN juthe wade aur rishtoN se jee bharta hai insaaN ka, har ek ke dil me bure paigaam nazar aate haiN kuch to rahaim kiya hota khuda pe khudgarz insaano, hathoN me talwaar liye sare-aam nazar aate haiN had ho gayi haiN ab to hevaaNiyat ki duniyaN meiN, jahaaN bhi dekho bas katle-aam nazar aate haiN jo hath chhute the kabhi maa ke pairo ko yaaroN, un hathoN me aaj sirf bhare jaam nazar aate haiN ehmiyat nahi hai aaj insaaN ko khuda ke paigamo ki, duniya me har jagah aaj rishte badnaam nazar aate haiN har insaaN ko pata haiN ke "SAB KA MALIK EK HAI", fir bhi aaj kahiN "rahim" to kahiN "ram"nazar aate haiN hi dhaval kaise ho yaar aaj tumhari is nazm ko padkar lag raha hai ki tu to bada samajhdar ho gaya. bada ho gaya hai tu. har ek sher badi gaharai liye huye hai.or har sher insaniyat ki seekh de raha hai. waise jab tumne itna sambedan sheel sub uthaya hai to mere yaar jara sunita ji ki baat ka khyal bhi rakhana. hamesha ese hi mehnat karte rahna or aur accha likhte rahna bye apna khyal rakhan tera dost dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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30th November 2006, 03:15 PM
dhaval tarif ke liye lafz hi to hone chahiye na. meine to kal hi bol diya thha ki ek kamayab aur mukkammal gazal hai ye aapki. aaj ki jo sacchai hai vo bayan ki hai apne issme. sach aaj to jahan bhi dekho majhab bant'ta hua hi nazar ataa. hai. well dilip ji ne sahi kaha aap to sach me bade ho gaye..........hahaha
meri daad kabuul kijiyega.....ok ji grazie aapki dost pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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namskaaR koi to ho ji pehle to main aapka tahe dil se shukragurzar hun k aapne mera is kalaam me sath diya aur aapne is kalaam ki sachchai ko samjhne ki kosish ki mujhe lag raha hai k meri mehnat zaya nahi gayi ye janke bahot hi khusi hui k aapko mera ye kalaam mere sabhi kalaam se jayda pasand aaya ise badhkar khusi ki baat mere liye aur kya ho sakti hai koi to ho ji maine to bas ek chhoti si kosish ki hai is peshkas ke zariye k log khuda k paigaam ko samjhe zara , aapne isme sath diya bas bahot hi khusi hui ummid hai aapka sath yuhi milta rahenga mujhe apna khayal rakhiye , khus rahiye aapka dost dhaval |
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mere big b ko chhotu ka pranaam big b aaj bahot hi khusi hui k aapko meri ye rachna aur ye kosish behad pasand aayi maine socha tha k is bar kuch alag sa likhu so isipe likha aapko ye pasand aaya achha laga main aage bhi ye kosish karta reahunga k kuch aisa likhu jo sab ke dil me bas jaye bas aap yuhi sath dete rahiyenga apna khayal rakhiye , khus rahiye aapka shaitaan chhotu |
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1st December 2006, 01:26 PM
Bahoot khoob Dhaval ji... behatreen soch ke saath behatareen Rachna...so nice
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sister pranaam aap khus to main bhi khus !!! sister main is bar kuch aisa likhna chahta tha k kuch aisa pehle na likha ho maine to bas kosish ki thi ek chhotisi aap sab ko pasand aayi bahot hi khusi hui janke aur sister main hamesa ye baat ka dhayan rakhnta hu likhte hue k mere likhne se kisike hbi dil ko thens na pahuche main aisa likhna chahta hu k sab ke dil me bas jaye naki dil ko thens pahunchahye aapki kahi baaten main hamesa dhayan me rakhta hu isi wajh se aaj main itna thoda bhot likhna sikha hun bas yuhi aap mujhe hamesa sikhate rahiyenga mujhe aapse bahotkuch sikhna hai apna khayal rakhiyenga aur khus rahiye sisiter aapka chhotasa bhai aur dost dhaval |
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1st December 2006, 10:27 PM
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Waah dhaval saheb...kya baat kahi aapne...ek ek ashar khulta hua nazer aya.....waaaah...daad kabool keejiye apne dost ki our se janaab.. God bless you dost Harash |
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mere dost dilip namskaar mujhe ye janke bahot hi khusi hui dost ke tumhe ye peshkas behad pasand aayi sach me aaj main bahot hi khus hu k meri mehnat aap sab ko pasand aayi aur main sister ki sabhi baton ko dhayan me rakhte hue hi sab likhta hu dost aur aage bhi kosish kaurnga k kuch aisa likhu jo sab ko pasnd aaye bas yuhi apne dost ka sath dete rehna khus raho , apna khayal rakhna aapka shaitaan dhaval |
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pooja kais ho tum? tumne mera har bar sath diya hai bahot khusi hui k tumhe bhi meri ye chhotisi kosish pasand aayi , main aage bhi ye kosishkarunga k aur bhi achha likhu bas yuhi sath dete rehna apna khayal rakhna , khus raho aapka dost dhaval |
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hello Dr.garima namskaar, Apko garima ji nahi kahunga aapne hi mana kiya tha aapko yad hoga to garima aapko yaha dekhke mujhe bahot hi khusi hui sach me jab hamari ki hui kosish sab ko pasand aati hai to bahot hi khusi milti hai aapko meri ye soch aur rachna pasand aayi main aapka tahe dil se shukraguzar hu k aapne is dost ko padha aur apni ray di mujhe bas aise hi aap is dost ko padhte rahiyenga khus rahiye , apna khayal rakhiye aapka dost dhaval |
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mere dost harash ji namskaar harash ji aapko meri ye kosish pasand aayi behad khusi hui muje ye janke , main aage bhi kosish karunga k aage bhi main kuch aisa likhu jo padhne walo ke dil me bas jaye bas meri kosish to yehi rehti hai har bar bas apa yuhi is dost ko padhte rahiyenga aap sab ki housla afzai ki wajh se aaj main kuch likh pa raha hu aage bhi likhta rahunga khus rahiye , apna khayal rakhiye aapka dost dhaval |
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wow dheer kya likha hai aapne,, aapne jo bhi likha hai,aaj ki sachhai hai, aur is sachhai ko ,aapne jis khubsurti se likha hai,woh kabile tarif hai, likhte rahiye,ALLAH AUR TARRAKI DE AAPKO. BYE TK CR Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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5th December 2006, 09:32 PM
har insaaN ko pata haiN ke "SAB KA MALIK EK HAI",
fir bhi aaj kahiN "rahim" to kahiN "ram"nazar aate haiN Namaskar Dhaval ji Ek bahut hi achey message ke liye aapney yeh rachna likhi hay...parhkar acha laga......Sach kaha hay aapney sabka malik ek hay....keep it up....yuun hi likhtey rahiye.....asha karaingey aagey bhi aapke aise qalam parhney ko milaingey... Regards |
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aapko yaha dekh ke bahot hi achha laga, aapko meri ye koosish pasand aayi main aapka tahe dil se shukraguzar hun dost, bas aise hi is dost ko padhte rahiyenga khus rahiye, apna khayal rakhiye aapka dost dhaval |
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sony ji ko mera namskaar sony ji bahot hi khusi hui ke aapko ye sachhai pasand aayi aapka yejawab dekh ke achha laga aur aage bhi ummid karta hu k aap mujhe padhti rahengi khuda aapko bhi hamesa khus rakhe apna khayal rakhiye aapka dost dhaval |
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sukanya ji maine to bas e kosish hi ki thi jo aap sab ne use kamyab banayi bas main aage bhi yun likhta rahunga khuda kare aap sab ka pyaar aur saath mujhe yuhi milta rahe bas apna khayal rakhiyenga sukanya ji, khus rahiye aapka dost dhaval |
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7th December 2006, 03:30 PM
Dhaval Ji Namaskaar
Aapko parhkar bahaut bahaut sukoon mila ki aapne sabhi ko 'dharm-jaat-paat' ki nafrati bediyon se ru-b-roo karwaaya. Aapke lafzon ne jo jazba paiida kiya hai woh sada mere dil mein rahenge. "juthe wade aur rishtoN se jee bharta hai insaaN ka / har ek ke dil me bure paigaam nazar aate haiN" bahaut khoob Dhaval Ji, Mera dhanyavaad sweekaar karein. aapka vipin 
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10th December 2006, 12:31 AM
waaaah dhaval ji,kya khoob likha hai aapne,bahut bahut umda.bahut acha laga padhkar,shayd aapki likhi gazlon mai se sab se behtaren yehi hai.likhti rahiye yunhin.
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vipin ji aapko is rachnae pe dekh ke mujhe bahot hi khusi hui aap khud is prakaar ka likhne wale shaks hai aapko pasand aayi ye kosish mere liye bahot badi khusi ki baat hai maine bas chhoti si kosiah ki hai is sachhai ko sab ke samne lane ki jo aap sab doston ne milke use kamyaab banayi ummid karta hu aapka sath mujhe yuhi milta rahenga khus rahiye apna khayal rakhiye aapka dost dhaval |
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aapko meri ye kosish pasand aayi aapka main pehle tahe dil se shukraguzar hun , aur behad khusi hui mujhe k aapko meri sabhi rachna o mese ye sab se behtrin si lagi aur mera manna bhi yehi hai jo aap soch rahi hai ye kuch alag sa likhne ki kosish ki thi maine jo pehle maine kabhi is vishay par likha nahi tha aapko pasand aaya achha laga bas gujzarish hai yuhi mujhe padhte rahiyenga aur is dost ki himmat bane rahiyenga man kosish karunga k aage bhi aur achha likhu apna khayal rakhiye, khus rahiye aapka dost dhaval |
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