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Fasana-e-Ishq-e-Nakaam Per Meri Zaat Roti Rahi...!! -
9th November 2010, 05:20 PM
meri udaas jawani ko siyaah raat roti rahi
is bhalay maans ki badnaseeb hayaat roti rahi janay kab afsaana bana, main deewana hua fasana-e-ishq-e-nakaam per meri zaat roti rahi main dil per chhoot kha betha aur khak hua ussay kahi hui, pyaar ki hur baat roti rahi main ronaq-e-bazaar tha, gosha-nasheen hua is achanak tabdeeli per meri bisaat roti rahi HSN! kitaab-e-Ishq bhi baDi ajab hai tumhari jis ke lafz lafz ki siyaahi per kaai’naat roti rahi tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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9th November 2010, 05:44 PM
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radhe radhe bahut khoob................................... Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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9th November 2010, 06:40 PM
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bahot khoob likha hai hassan bhai.. dil se daad kubool karen... ye sher khaas pasand aaye.... main dil per chhoot kha betha aur khak hua ussay kahi hui, pyaar ki hur baat roti rahi HSN! kitaab-e-Ishq bhi baDi ajab hai tumhari jis ke lafz lafz ki siyaahi per kaai地aat roti rahi likhte rahen shaad... |
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9th November 2010, 11:02 PM
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itni achchi ghazal daekh to tum per rushk aanae laga itnae pyarae ehaasasat kae liyae daad hazir hai bahut hi achcha laga razia |
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9th November 2010, 11:29 PM
janay kab afsaana bana, main deewana hua
fasana-e-ishq-e-nakaam per meri zaat roti rahi ...............daad bahut daad khuda baagi kahi hai,kahi baagi khuda hai. |
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10th November 2010, 12:09 AM
Bahut umdaa lagi mujhe yeh peshkash ... Hassan Ji !
matla aur maqtaa ko bahut acche se adaa kiya aapne ... dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi aate rahen aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath ...  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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10th November 2010, 01:55 PM
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Boht boht shukriya.....  Saath dete rahiye ga, DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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10th November 2010, 08:02 PM
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Actually meri is tooti phooti koshish per daad k asal haq-daar Danny Jiii haiN, unhooN ne meri is koshish ko sanwaarnay meiN boht help ki hai..... Aise hi saath dete rahiye ga, DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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11th November 2010, 08:54 PM
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Razia Saheba, Khaak alfaazooN ki itni hausla afzaai karne k liye, maiN aap ka be-had mashkoor hooN... Saath dete rahiye ga, DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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12th November 2010, 10:33 PM
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Baagi Jii, Thanks a lot... Keep coming, Regards, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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15th November 2010, 09:16 AM
SaaHibo! hum Ghazal ki Soorat meiN
zaKhm-e-dil aashkaar karte haiN! tum udh`ar ihtimaam-e-daar karo ham idh`ar Zikr-e-yaar karte haiN... - Sarwar Raz |
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3rd November 2011, 11:47 AM
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Naresh Sir, Likhay ko pasand karnay k liye boht boht shukryia... Aise hi miltay rahien... DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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3rd November 2011, 12:18 PM
HSN! kitaab-e-Ishq bhi baDi ajab hai tumhari
jis ke lafz lafz ki siyaahi per kaai’naat roti rahi Bohat khoob!!.............. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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4th November 2011, 09:40 AM
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Zainy Sahiba,, Woh aaye hamari post pe Khuda ki qudrat, kabhi hum apni post ko, kabhi un k reply ko dekhtay hain...  Boht boht nawazish hai Regards, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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4th November 2011, 03:49 PM
HSN! kitaab-e-Ishq bhi baDi ajab hai tumhari
jis ke lafz lafz ki siyaahi per kaai地aat roti rahi Very well written, Hassan Bhaai...! Special praise for this verse...! The rest is good too...! Take care, ok...? With blessings Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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5th November 2011, 08:41 PM
meri udaas jawani ko siyaah raat roti rahi
is bhalay maans ki badnaseeb hayaat roti rahi hmm.. janay kab afsaana bana, main deewana hua fasana-e-ishq-e-nakaam per meri zaat roti rahi saani acha hai..sirf thoda doubt hai..nakaam jo ishq hai uska fasaana? fasaana hoga ya afsaana hoga? main ronaq-e-bazaar tha, gosha-nasheen hua is achanak tabdeeli per meri bisaat roti rahi hmm.. HSN! kitaab-e-Ishq bhi baDi ajab hai tumhari jis ke lafz lafz ki siyaahi per kaai地aat roti rahi hmm. achi koshish hai hassan sahaab..aapko bahot dino baad padh rahaa hun..aate rahiye..ghazal ke liye mubaarakbad...khush rahiye. aapka dost, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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14th November 2011, 02:01 PM
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Boss, I'm very pleased to see you here after a long time...... Thankyou for your comment... and yes i may not be able to complete this composition without your kind support ..... Take good care of yourself, Regards, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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15th November 2011, 09:41 AM
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17th November 2011, 11:24 AM
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Pradhyuman Jii,, Aap ko yahan dekh kar be-had khushi hui.... aur aap ki baat sir aankhooN per, lekin mere naaqis ilm k mutabiq yeh fasaana-e-ishq hi hai.... Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga... DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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24th November 2011, 09:26 AM
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Uff Ak Jii,, Adaab,,, aap yahan aaye aur mere likhay ko saraahaaa, boht khushi ki baat hai mere liye....... Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,, DuaooN k saath ijaazat,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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24th November 2011, 01:04 PM
janay kab afsaana bana, main deewana hua
fasana-e-ishq-e-nakaam per meri zaat roti rahi main dil per chhoot kha betha aur khak hua ussay kahi hui, pyaar ki hur baat roti rahi waah waah ... vaise to saare share bahot gazab ke hain , ye mujhe khaas pasand aaye Keep writing !! ------------------------------------ Men may come , Men may go .. But i will go on forever ... :-) |
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26th November 2011, 11:55 PM
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Jat jiii,,, Aap ka yahan aana aur tareef karna... behad khushi ki baat hai... Apna boht boht khiyaal rakhiye ga,,, DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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