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Jab Se Mana Hai Unhe Apna Tab Se Kisike Ho Na Sake. - 19th July 2007, 01:28 PM

Sabhi dosto ko Merul ka salaam.

Dosto kai dino baad kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai, dosto mein ek baar betha tha to kuch guftagu dil ko satane lagi, mene socha kya kyu ye lamhe mujhe itna dard dete hai jo kabhi kabhi mujhe har baat pe hasaya kerte the, dosto usi dard ko samne lane ki ek chhoti si koshish aapke samne rakh raha hu, ummid hai har baar ki tarah aap mujhe sarahenge aur hauslaa afzaai karenge...


JAGAYA UNHONE AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM SO NA SAKE,
RULAYA UNHONE AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM HAS NA SAKE.

RUH TALAK JUM UTHTI THI PYAAR KI HAR GUFTAGU SE,
ILZAAM LAGAYA AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM KUCH KEH NA SAKE.

NAHI JANTE HAI WO BEWAFAA SANAM JUDAI KE DARD KO,
GHAV DIYE UNHONE AISE KI AAJ TAK WO UBHAR NA SAKE.

DARTE NAHI THE WO KHILWAR KARNE SE HAMARE JAZBAATON KE SATH,
TODA DIL UNHONE AISE KI AAJ TAK WO JUD NA SAKE.

HIMMAT NAHI KARTA AB "MERUL" KISIKE PYAAR KO APNANE KI,
JAB SE MANA HAI UNHE APNA TAB SE KISIKE HO NA SAKE.



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Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
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Sabhi dosto ko Merul ka salaam.

Dosto kai dino baad kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai, dosto mein ek baar betha tha to kuch guftagu dil ko satane lagi, mene socha kya kyu ye lamhe mujhe itna dard dete hai jo kabhi kabhi mujhe har baat pe hasaya kerte the, dosto usi dard ko samne lane ki ek chhoti si koshish aapke samne rakh raha hu, ummid hai har baar ki tarah aap mujhe sarahenge aur hauslaa afzaai karenge...


JAGAYA UNHONE AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM SO NA SAKE,
RULAYA UNHONE AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM HAS NA SAKE.

RUH TALAK JUM UTHTI THI PYAAR KI HAR GUFTAGU SE,
ILZAAM LAGAYA AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM KUCH KEH NA SAKE.

NAHI JANTE HAI WO BEWAFAA SANAM JUDAI KE DARD KO,
GHAV DIYE UNHONE AISE KI AAJ TAK WO UBHAR NA SAKE.

DARTE NAHI THE WO KHILWAR KARNE SE HAMARE JAZBAATON KE SATH,
TODA DIL UNHONE AISE KI AAJ TAK WO JUD NA SAKE.

HIMMAT NAHI KARTA AB "MERUL" KISIKE PYAAR KO APNANE KI,
JAB SE MANA HAI UNHE APNA TAB SE KISIKE HO NA SAKE.


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nice - 19th July 2007, 02:21 PM

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Sabhi dosto ko Merul ka salaam.

Dosto kai dino baad kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai, dosto mein ek baar betha tha to kuch guftagu dil ko satane lagi, mene socha kya kyu ye lamhe mujhe itna dard dete hai jo kabhi kabhi mujhe har baat pe hasaya kerte the, dosto usi dard ko samne lane ki ek chhoti si koshish aapke samne rakh raha hu, ummid hai har baar ki tarah aap mujhe sarahenge aur hauslaa afzaai karenge...


JAGAYA UNHONE AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM SO NA SAKE,
RULAYA UNHONE AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM HAS NA SAKE.

RUH TALAK JUM UTHTI THI PYAAR KI HAR GUFTAGU SE,
ILZAAM LAGAYA AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM KUCH KEH NA SAKE.

NAHI JANTE HAI WO BEWAFAA SANAM JUDAI KE DARD KO,
GHAV DIYE UNHONE AISE KI AAJ TAK WO UBHAR NA SAKE.

DARTE NAHI THE WO KHILWAR KARNE SE HAMARE JAZBAATON KE SATH,
TODA DIL UNHONE AISE KI AAJ TAK WO JUD NA SAKE.

HIMMAT NAHI KARTA AB "MERUL" KISIKE PYAAR KO APNANE KI,
JAB SE MANA HAI UNHE APNA TAB SE KISIKE HO NA SAKE.



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mereul ji ko raj ka namaskaar...dost bhut pyare ehsaas hain....tumhare seene mein wo dil dhadkta hai jo ek gehrii soach rakhta hai.....tum bhut acha likh sakte ho......koshish yun hii karte raho hamari duaa aapke saath hai........raj....


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19th July 2007, 02:27 PM

ADAAB MERUL SAHAB..........bahut khoob likha hay apne pasand aya apka likha.unjhi likhte rahiye


"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"


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Kisi dard ko sambhal pana aasan nahi hota,
Haste hue har pal bita pana aasan nahi hota,
Jindagi me har koi Dil me nahi bas pata,
Aur jo bas jaye use bhula pana aasan nahi hota.




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19th July 2007, 06:06 PM

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Smile frnd 4 ever - 19th July 2007, 06:30 PM

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Sabhi dosto ko Merul ka salaam.

Dosto kai dino baad kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai, dosto mein ek baar betha tha to kuch guftagu dil ko satane lagi, mene socha kya kyu ye lamhe mujhe itna dard dete hai jo kabhi kabhi mujhe har baat pe hasaya kerte the, dosto usi dard ko samne lane ki ek chhoti si koshish aapke samne rakh raha hu, ummid hai har baar ki tarah aap mujhe sarahenge aur hauslaa afzaai karenge...


JAGAYA UNHONE AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM SO NA SAKE,
RULAYA UNHONE AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM HAS NA SAKE.

RUH TALAK JUM UTHTI THI PYAAR KI HAR GUFTAGU SE,
ILZAAM LAGAYA AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM KUCH KEH NA SAKE.

NAHI JANTE HAI WO BEWAFAA SANAM JUDAI KE DARD KO,
GHAV DIYE UNHONE AISE KI AAJ TAK WO UBHAR NA SAKE.

DARTE NAHI THE WO KHILWAR KARNE SE HAMARE JAZBAATON KE SATH,
TODA DIL UNHONE AISE KI AAJ TAK WO JUD NA SAKE.

HIMMAT NAHI KARTA AB "MERUL" KISIKE PYAAR KO APNANE KI,
JAB SE MANA HAI UNHE APNA TAB SE KISIKE HO NA SAKE.


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Aadab merul ji,
kaise hai aap?

wah merul ji,kya baat hain,
apki yeh namaz kis kadar masuum si mehsus ho rahi hain,apni shikayaton ko ,,aapne kitni khubsurti se bayan kiya hai,

hamara woh dost jo hamesha hanste_ muskurate hai,,aaj unki shikayat se bhari yeh nazm,,dil ko chhu gayi.

per Allah kare aap kabhi udas na ho,,apka pyar apke saath hi rahe,or aap hamesha khushiya hi likhe...
dard to aapse koso dur rahe AAMIN.

apna khayal rakhiye,
or hamesha KHUSH RAHIYE,

ALLAH HAFIZ


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sukhriya rahul,

aapne hamari koshish ko saraha, aur hauslaa afzaai kiya, bahut sukhriya
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Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
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20th July 2007, 05:19 PM

merul ji namaskaar....kaise hai.n bhai aap

aapki gazal behad acchi lagi....ahsaas dil ko chu gaye...har sher badiya hai...bas lafzo.n ka her-pher hai thoda....yu hi likhtey rahiye...kuad-b-kuad nikhaar aa jayega.

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mereul ji ko raj ka namaskaar...dost bhut pyare ehsaas hain....tumhare seene mein wo dil dhadkta hai jo ek gehrii soach rakhta hai.....tum bhut acha likh sakte ho......koshish yun hii karte raho hamari duaa aapke saath hai........raj....

raj ji bahut bahut sukhriya hauslaa afzaai ke liye,.... rajveer ji aapka reply dekhke yu hauslaa afzzai hua hai aage aur bhi achchha likhne ki koshish karne ki ummid dil mein jagi hai...

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Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
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ADAAB MERUL SAHAB..........bahut khoob likha hay apne pasand aya apka likha.unjhi likhte rahiye

kasif ji bahut bahut sukhriya

aapko meri ye koshish pasand aayi ye jan ke khushi hui.. aapka mein tah-e-dil se sukhriya karta hu hauslaa afzaai ke liye...

yuhi sath nibhate rahiyega
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Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
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Sabhi dosto ko Merul ka salaam.

Dosto kai dino baad kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai, dosto mein ek baar betha tha to kuch guftagu dil ko satane lagi, mene socha kya kyu ye lamhe mujhe itna dard dete hai jo kabhi kabhi mujhe har baat pe hasaya kerte the, dosto usi dard ko samne lane ki ek chhoti si koshish aapke samne rakh raha hu, ummid hai har baar ki tarah aap mujhe sarahenge aur hauslaa afzaai karenge...


JAGAYA UNHONE AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM SO NA SAKE,
RULAYA UNHONE AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM HAS NA SAKE.

RUH TALAK JUM UTHTI THI PYAAR KI HAR GUFTAGU SE,
ILZAAM LAGAYA AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM KUCH KEH NA SAKE.

NAHI JANTE HAI WO BEWAFAA SANAM JUDAI KE DARD KO,
GHAV DIYE UNHONE AISE KI AAJ TAK WO UBHAR NA SAKE.

DARTE NAHI THE WO KHILWAR KARNE SE HAMARE JAZBAATON KE SATH,
TODA DIL UNHONE AISE KI AAJ TAK WO JUD NA SAKE.

HIMMAT NAHI KARTA AB "MERUL" KISIKE PYAAR KO APNANE KI,
JAB SE MANA HAI UNHE APNA TAB SE KISIKE HO NA SAKE.



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merul ji achi koshish ki hai aapne apne ahsasat ko bayan kerne ki aur kafi dard bhi dhika yunhi likhte rahain khush rahain

JAGAYA UNHONE AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM SO NA SAKE,
RULAYA UNHONE AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM HAS NA SAKE.

RUH TALAK JUM UTHTI THI PYAAR KI HAR GUFTAGU SE,
ILZAAM LAGAYA AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM KUCH KEH NA SAKE.

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24th July 2007, 12:27 AM

Aadab Merul Sahab...

Kaafi waqt baad apki koi peshkash padne ko mili hai.... Apne is tehreer mein kaafi dard pesh kiya hai... Woh Dard ubhar kar aana bohot accha laga.. sab yeh nahin kar paate ap ne kiya... Apki tehreer bohot acchi lagi... yunhi likhte rahe...

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24th July 2007, 12:38 AM

Merul ji, namste

Kaise hai.N aap?

Merul ji, sacch!! aaj kai dino.N baad khud ke alaawa kisiko padhaa hai maine...aapki shayri ke ehsaas bahot pyaare hai.N..bas apko aur aage sikhne ki aawashyata hai...apko kaffiya par dhyaan dene ki jaruurat hai...iske baad apki shayri pure sur'taal me.N hogi to aur umdaa hogi...

HIMMAT NAHI KARTA AB "MERUL" KISIKE PYAAR KO APNANE KI,
JAB SE MANA HAI UNHE APNA TAB SE KISIKE HO NA SAKE.


Bahot pyaara sher hai!! daad haaziir hai ji

Ummid hai aage aise hi likhte raNenge aap, kuch bura laga to maaf kijiyega...

ok ji...ijaazat!!

Grazie

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25th July 2007, 12:28 PM

Sukhriya dost

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Haste hue har pal bita pana aasan nahi hota,
Jindagi me har koi Dil me nahi bas pata,
Aur jo bas jaye use bhula pana aasan nahi hota.


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Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
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25th July 2007, 12:31 PM

Aapka tah-e-dil se sukhriya bhaii

bhai khas karke aapka hausla-e-afzaai ka hamein intezaar rehta hai, bhaai aaphi ke sikhaye se itna likhne ke kabil hue hai warna ham kaha kuch likhne ke kabil the, dil se sukhriya,

bhaii aapko meri ye koshish pasand aayi ye jan ke khushi hui, bhai aage isse bhi achchha likhne ki koshish karenge..

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baRe hi seeDhe aor saral shabdoN meiN aapne jaZbaatoN ko peSh kiYaa haii... achchhaa lagaa aapko paRh ke... aapkii picchhlii saari kosiShoN sey yeh behtar rahii khuShii hu'ii ess baat kii.... yuuNhii liKhte raheN aage bhee... duaa haii aap aage ess sey bhii achchhaa liKheN....

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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25th July 2007, 12:35 PM

HASSONI ji ko merul ka sadar pranaam

soni ji aap hamare liye dua karte hai har baar ye jan ke dil bahut hi khush hota hai,

dost pehle to aapka bahut bahut sukhriya hauslaa afzaai ke liye.. soni ji aapka hauslaa afzaai ka andaaz hamein bahut pasand hai, dua hai aapka aur hassan ji ka sath yuhi bana rahe....

ji soni ji ye mene mere pehle ke ehsaason ko bayan karne ki koshish ki hai jab mein uske intezaar mein tha....

soni ji apna khayal rakhe
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Aadab merul ji,
kaise hai aap?

wah merul ji,kya baat hain,
apki yeh namaz kis kadar masuum si mehsus ho rahi hain,apni shikayaton ko ,,aapne kitni khubsurti se bayan kiya hai,

hamara woh dost jo hamesha hanste_ muskurate hai,,aaj unki shikayat se bhari yeh nazm,,dil ko chhu gayi.

per Allah kare aap kabhi udas na ho,,apka pyar apke saath hi rahe,or aap hamesha khushiya hi likhe...
dard to aapse koso dur rahe AAMIN.

apna khayal rakhiye,
or hamesha KHUSH RAHIYE,

ALLAH HAFIZ


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25th July 2007, 12:37 PM

sunita ji bahut bahut sukhriya aapka meri ye koshish ko sarahne ke liye...

ji sunita ji aage se mein dhyan rakhuga, aage aur bhi achchha likhne ki koshish karuga.

sunita ji aapka tah-e-dil se sukhriya hauslaa afzaai ke liye, ummid hai aap aage bhi ese hi sath dete rahenge...

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merul ji namaskaar....kaise hai.n bhai aap

aapki gazal behad acchi lagi....ahsaas dil ko chu gaye...har sher badiya hai...bas lafzo.n ka her-pher hai thoda....yu hi likhtey rahiye...kuad-b-kuad nikhaar aa jayega.

kush rahiye
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26th July 2007, 11:58 AM

bahut bahut sukhriya aapka

aapko meri ye koshish pasand aayi ye jan ke bahut khushi hui, aage aur bhi achchha likhne ki koshish karenge...........

tah-e-dil se sukhriya hauslaa afzaai ke liye....

ese hi sath dete rahiyega
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merul ji achi koshish ki hai aapne apne ahsasat ko bayan kerne ki aur kafi dard bhi dhika yunhi likhte rahain khush rahain

JAGAYA UNHONE AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM SO NA SAKE,
RULAYA UNHONE AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM HAS NA SAKE.

RUH TALAK JUM UTHTI THI PYAAR KI HAR GUFTAGU SE,
ILZAAM LAGAYA AISA KI AAJ TAK HUM KUCH KEH NA SAKE.

ye ashaar achay lagay


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26th July 2007, 12:00 PM

hi abraar ji

kese ho aap?

ji abraar ji kafi dino baad kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai, aur ye koshish aapko pasand aayi ye jan ke dil khush hua....

abraar ji mene is koshish mein dard ko bayan karne ki koshish ki hai aur ye aapke dil se rubaru hui ye jan ke bahut achchha laga

yuhi sath dete rahiyega
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Aadab Merul Sahab...

Kaafi waqt baad apki koi peshkash padne ko mili hai.... Apne is tehreer mein kaafi dard pesh kiya hai... Woh Dard ubhar kar aana bohot accha laga.. sab yeh nahin kar paate ap ne kiya... Apki tehreer bohot acchi lagi... yunhi likhte rahe...

Apka dost Abrar...

Ijazat...


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w/salam,
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27th July 2007, 10:41 AM

bahut bahut sukhriya pooja ji meri rachna ko sarahne ke liye...

ji pooja ji mujhe aur bahut sikhne ki jarurat hai, ji aage se mein kafiyaa pe dhayan rakhne ki puri koshish karunga,

pooja ji aap jese kuch dosto ke ehsason ko padhte padhte hi kuch likhne ke kabil hue hai hum aaj yaha,,

tah-e-dil se sukhriya hauslaa afzaai ke liye aapka, ummid karta hu aap yuhi aage bhi mera sath dete rahenge..

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Merul ji, namste

Kaise hai.N aap?

Merul ji, sacch!! aaj kai dino.N baad khud ke alaawa kisiko padhaa hai maine...aapki shayri ke ehsaas bahot pyaare hai.N..bas apko aur aage sikhne ki aawashyata hai...apko kaffiya par dhyaan dene ki jaruurat hai...iske baad apki shayri pure sur'taal me.N hogi to aur umdaa hogi...

HIMMAT NAHI KARTA AB "MERUL" KISIKE PYAAR KO APNANE KI,
JAB SE MANA HAI UNHE APNA TAB SE KISIKE HO NA SAKE.


Bahot pyaara sher hai!! daad haaziir hai ji

Ummid hai aage aise hi likhte raNenge aap, kuch bura laga to maaf kijiyega...

ok ji...ijaazat!!

Grazie

Aapki dost
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