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Dard Se Pyaar - 21st September 2007, 02:51 PM

Koi shikayat nahin koi ranjish nahin
Na hi koi gila ya shikwa hai ab
Har Wo zakhm jo usne ne diya tha kabhi
Wo dard bhi achha lagta hai jab

Mujhe dawa na dena zakhm nasoor hain mere
Dawa se har zakhm aur Sulagne laga hai
Kuch de sako to maut ki duayein de do
Mujhe Zindagi se darr lagne laga hai

Sukoon dhoondhte dhoonte ye jaana hai maine
Ab har Raqeeb mera yaar ho gaya hai
Mujhe khushi na dena doston mujhe aadat nahin hai Muskurane ki
"Ehsaas" ko Gammon se pyaar ho gaya hai


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21st September 2007, 03:18 PM

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Koi shikayat nahin koi ranjish nahin
Na hi koi gila ya shikwa hai ab
Har Wo zakhm jo usne ne diya tha kabhi
Wo dard bhi achha lagta hai jab

Mujhe dawa na dena zakhm nasoor hain mere
Dawa se har zakhm aur Sulagne laga hai
Kuch de sako to maut ki duayein de do
Mujhe Zindagi se darr lagne laga hai

Sukoon dhoondhte dhoonte ye jaana hai maine
Ab har Raqeeb mera yaar ho gaya hai
Mujhe khushi na dena doston mujhe aadat nahin hai Muskurane ki
"Ehsaas" ko Gammon se pyaar ho gaya hai
dear amit.........bahut dard bhara likha hai aapne, vaise agar sirf shayri ki baat kareN to bahut khoob hai.....par etna dard accha nahi laga....kush raha karo aur kushi bhara hi likha karo.

dua karti hoon aapko zamane ki har kushi miley
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21st September 2007, 03:51 PM

Hi Sunita Di, Thanks a ton for appreciating...

Par badkismati se jitna dard in alfaazon se jhalakta hai usse kahin zyada zakhmi hoon main.. Mian bhi hasna chahta hoon but its not so easy for me..
Ek gaana yaad aata hai...

Zindagi ne zindagi bhar gum diye..
Jitne bhi mausam diye num diye...

Shayad waqt kabhi ye zakhm bhar de....


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Smile nice... - 21st September 2007, 03:58 PM

wah...bhot hi dil ko chu sayi aapki kavita...sachmuch bhot khoobsurat likha h amit..god bless u dear..tc..


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21st September 2007, 07:39 PM

Hello Amit ji

bahut hi pyara likha hai aapne,
ye wali lines to kamaal ki hai ke

Koi shikayat nahin koi ranjish nahin
Na hi koi gila ya shikwa hai ab
Har Wo zakhm jo usne ne diya tha kabhi
Wo dard bhi achha lagta hai jab


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21st September 2007, 10:05 PM

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Koi shikayat nahin koi ranjish nahin
Na hi koi gila ya shikwa hai ab
Har Wo zakhm jo usne ne diya tha kabhi
Wo dard bhi achha lagta hai jab

Mujhe dawa na dena zakhm nasoor hain mere
Dawa se har zakhm aur Sulagne laga hai
Kuch de sako to maut ki duayein de do
Mujhe Zindagi se darr lagne laga hai


Sukoon dhoondhte dhoonte ye jaana hai maine
Ab har Raqeeb mera yaar ho gaya hai
Mujhe khushi na dena doston mujhe aadat nahin hai Muskurane ki
"Ehsaas" ko Gammon se pyaar ho gaya hai


hello ji
Amit ji
aajtak apki shayad hi kisi post ka reply diya ho meine... lekin jitni bhi posts padhi hai sab bahut hi dard bhari hai... per bahut kucch kehti hai apki posts
sacch bahut pasand aayi apki ye rachna mujhe... or mein reply karne se apne ko rok nahi payi...

Mujhe dawa na dena zakhm nasoor hain mere
Dawa se har zakhm aur Sulagne laga hai
Kuch de sako to maut ki duayein de do
Mujhe Zindagi se darr lagne laga hai

bahut pasand aaya apka ye sher mujhe
bas aise hi likhte rahiye aap... per kabhi kabhi muskura liya kijiye.. apne liye na sahi oron ke liye hi sahi


tc ji


SHWETA


jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai

uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai

kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai

jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...


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wah...bhot hi dil ko chu sayi aapki kavita...sachmuch bhot khoobsurat likha h amit..god bless u dear..tc..
Yahan aane aur appreciate karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya Shweta Ji.
Muskurate rahiye...


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Post har kahushi - 22nd September 2007, 07:50 PM

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Koi shikayat nahin koi ranjish nahin
Na hi koi gila ya shikwa hai ab
Har Wo zakhm jo usne ne diya tha kabhi
Wo dard bhi achha lagta hai jab

Mujhe dawa na dena zakhm nasoor hain mere
Dawa se har zakhm aur Sulagne laga hai
Kuch de sako to maut ki duayein de do
Mujhe Zindagi se darr lagne laga hai

Sukoon dhoondhte dhoonte ye jaana hai maine
Ab har Raqeeb mera yaar ho gaya hai
Mujhe khushi na dena doston mujhe aadat nahin hai Muskurane ki
"Ehsaas" ko Gammon se pyaar ho gaya hai
Har khushi Hai Logon Ke Daman Mein,
Par Ek Hansi Ke Liye Waqt Nahi.
Din Raat Daudti Duniya Mein,
Zindagi Ke Liye Hi Waqt Nahi.


Maa Ki Loree Ka Ehsaas To Hai,
Par Maa Ko Maa Kehne Ka Waqt Nahi.
Saare Rishton Ko To Hum Maar Chuke,
Ab Unhe Dafnane Ka Bhi Waqt Nahi.


Saare Naam Mobile Mein Hain,
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Gairon Ki Kya Baat Karen,
Jab Apno Ke Liye Hi Waqt Nahi.


Aankhon Me Hai Neend Badee,
Par Sone Ka Waqt Nahi.
Dil Hai Ghamon Se Bhara Hua,
Par Rone Ka Bhi Waqt Nahi.


Paison ki Daud Me Aise Daude,
Ki Thakne ka Bhi Waqt Nahi.
Paraye Ehsason Ki Kya Kadr Karein,
Jab Apane Sapno Ke Liye Hi Waqt Nahi.


Tu Hi Bata E Zindagi,
Iss Zindagi Ka Kya Hoga,
Ki Har Pal Marne Walon Ko,
Jeene Ke Liye Bhi Waqt Nahi.......
   
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Smile frnd 4 ever - 22nd September 2007, 08:19 PM

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Koi shikayat nahin koi ranjish nahin
Na hi koi gila ya shikwa hai ab
Har Wo zakhm jo usne ne diya tha kabhi
Wo dard bhi achha lagta hai jab

Mujhe dawa na dena zakhm nasoor hain mere
Dawa se har zakhm aur Sulagne laga hai
Kuch de sako to maut ki duayein de do
Mujhe Zindagi se darr lagne laga hai

Sukoon dhoondhte dhoonte ye jaana hai maine
Ab har Raqeeb mera yaar ho gaya hai
Mujhe khushi na dena doston mujhe aadat nahin hai Muskurane ki
"Ehsaas" ko Gammon se pyaar ho gaya hai
Aadab Amit ji,
kaise hain aap?

AMIT ji aapke khayal,aapke ehsaas,aapke likhne ka andaz,.........
wah kya baat hain,

Amit ji aapki tarif karna hamare bas ke bahar ki baat ho gayi hain,

yakin kijiye,aapka likha ek_ek ashaar kabil tarif hota hain.

apki is nazam NE,,, hamare dil ko chu liya hai.
dilse nikli daad kabul kijiye,

KHUSH RAHIYE,
APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE,
ALLAH HAFIZ


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23rd September 2007, 12:03 PM

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Hello Amit ji

bahut hi pyara likha hai aapne,
ye wali lines to kamaal ki hai ke

Koi shikayat nahin koi ranjish nahin
Na hi koi gila ya shikwa hai ab
Har Wo zakhm jo usne ne diya tha kabhi
Wo dard bhi achha lagta hai jab
Hi Heer Ji,

Sach kahoon to ye lines mujhe bhi kaafi pasand hain. ek aashiq ki daastan yahi hoti hai...


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Kisi ki aankh sey sapney chura kar kuch nahi milta - 23rd September 2007, 12:10 PM

Kisi ki aankh sey sapney chura kar kuch nahi milta
Mandiron sey chiragon ko bujha kar kuch nahi milta


Koi aik aadh sapna ho to phir accha bhi lagta hay
Hazaron khuwab ankhon main saja kar kuch nahi milta


Yeh accha hay Kay aapas Kay bharam na tootne payein
Kabhi kabhi doston ko azma kar kuch nahi milta


Amal ki sookhti rag main zara as khoon shamil kar
Mere humdam faqat batein bana kar kuch nahi milta

Mujhey aksar sitaron sey yeh awaz aati hay
Kisi Kay hijar main neendein ganwa kar kuch nahi milta


Jiggar ho jayega chalni yeh ankhein khoon say royengi
Ae dil Befaiz logon sey nibah kar kuch nahi milta
   
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24th September 2007, 12:31 AM

apke dard par main sirf...wah...wah...wah...hi karoongi...kyunki mujhe apko iss halat mein dekhkar ek sukoon milta hai...kyun...aap jante ho...kaash issme koi sacchaii hoti...




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Shayad Nahi..
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24th September 2007, 05:19 AM

bahut acha likha hai amit ji. dard ko bahut hi achi tarah se bayaan kiya hai aapne. dhua to yehi karenge k aap humesha khush rahe and haste rahe. daad hajir hai janab, kabul kijiye,

aapka dost

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aajtak apki shayad hi kisi post ka reply diya ho meine... lekin jitni bhi posts padhi hai sab bahut hi dard bhari hai... per bahut kucch kehti hai apki posts
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Mujhe dawa na dena zakhm nasoor hain mere
Dawa se har zakhm aur Sulagne laga hai
Kuch de sako to maut ki duayein de do
Mujhe Zindagi se darr lagne laga hai

bahut pasand aaya apka ye sher mujhe
bas aise hi likhte rahiye aap... per kabhi kabhi muskura liya kijiye.. apne liye na sahi oron ke liye hi sahi


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Hi Kuhulika Ji,

Kehte hain na Khuda ke ghar mein der hai andher nahin. Aap der aaye par durust aaye. :-)

Aapne is "ehsaas" ko apna keemti waqt diya. yakeen mainye bahut achha laga.

Aur jahan tak meri muskurahat ka sawaal hai, kisi din wo kbhi kar guzrunga...


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Tu Hi Bata E Zindagi,
Iss Zindagi Ka Kya Hoga,
Ki Har Pal Marne Walon Ko,
Jeene Ke Liye Bhi Waqt Nahi.......

Hi Silent Tears Ji,

Is Baat ka bas itna hi jawab de sakta hoon:

Kisi raat kabhi mere saath, ye haseen anokhi baat ho gayi
Sune the jiski bewafai ke kisse, us zindagi se mulaqat ho gayi.
Maine kaha kyon dost, zamana tumse kyon hara hai
Wo boli maine Ehsaas ko Nahin "Ehsaason” ne mujhko mara hai"

Log kehte hain use bewafa, use badnaam karte hain
Jane kyon ye log zindiagi ki sugaat nahin samjhte hain
Ye nahin karti bewafaai, balki ye duniya iska hi roop hai
Aaina hain ashq karmo ka apne, Har zakhm apna swaroop hai..


Aap bahut achha likhte hain...


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Aadab Amit ji,
kaise hain aap?

AMIT ji aapke khayal,aapke ehsaas,aapke likhne ka andaz,.........
wah kya baat hain,

Amit ji aapki tarif karna hamare bas ke bahar ki baat ho gayi hain,

yakin kijiye,aapka likha ek_ek ashaar kabil tarif hota hain.

apki is nazam NE,,, hamare dil ko chu liya hai.
dilse nikli daad kabul kijiye,

KHUSH RAHIYE,
APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE,
ALLAH HAFIZ
HI Sony Ji,

aap jaise dost itni duayein dete hain ki mujhe kuch ho hi nhain sakta. Main bahut achha hoon Sony Ji. Aur sach maniye ki ab to mujhe bhi aadat ho gayi hia aapke replies ki. Jab tak post par aapki nazar na pade, yakeen maniye, chain nahin aata.

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Mandiron sey chiragon ko bujha kar kuch nahi milta
Sapney aankon mein nahin dil mein saja e-dost
Needon se karke chahat kuch nahin milta
Pal bhar ko roshni apni hasraton mein karle
Mandir mein karke ibadat kuch nahin milta

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Koi aik aadh sapna ho to phir accha bhi lagta hay
Hazaron khuwab ankhon main saja kar kuch nahi milta
Khud hi ko karke fanah apni mohabbat jataa use
Uski Sang-dili ki karke shikayat kuch nahin milta

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Yeh accha hay Kay aapas Kay bharam na tootne payein
Kabhi kabhi doston ko azma kar kuch nahi milta
Azmana hai to azma le pal bhar ko aaj khud ko
Aazmakar doston ki neeyat kuch nahin milta

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Amal ki sookhti rag main zara as khoon shamil kar
Mere humdam faqat batein bana kar kuch nahi milta
Berang zindagi ko aaj apne lahoo se rangeen karle
Fakat indradhanush ki hasrat... kuch nahin milta

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Tohfa hai ye zindagi teri maa ka tujhpe
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Kaash yahi baat main khud ko bhi samjha paata
To jeena mere liye bhi thoda asaan hota
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Fakat marne ke intzaar mein zindagi na katti meri
Apni muskurahaton par main khud hairaan na hota
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apke dard par main sirf...wah...wah...wah...hi karoongi...kyunki mujhe apko iss halat mein dekhkar ek sukoon milta hai...kyun...aap jante ho...kaash issme koi sacchaii hoti...
Hi Mahuaa Ji,

Main ye achhe se janta hoon ki mere dard par aap sirf wah...wah.. hi karengi aur yakeen maniye main bhi khuda se yahi dua karunga ki aapki ye wah wahi aur mera dard, dono kabhi khatam na ho.


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hi - 24th September 2007, 02:25 PM

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Koi shikayat nahin koi ranjish nahin
Na hi koi gila ya shikwa hai ab
Har Wo zakhm jo usne ne diya tha kabhi
Wo dard bhi achha lagta hai jab

Mujhe dawa na dena zakhm nasoor hain mere
Dawa se har zakhm aur Sulagne laga hai
Kuch de sako to maut ki duayein de do
Mujhe Zindagi se darr lagne laga hai

Sukoon dhoondhte dhoonte ye jaana hai maine
Ab har Raqeeb mera yaar ho gaya hai
Mujhe khushi na dena doston mujhe aadat nahin hai Muskurane ki
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hamesha ki tarah is bar bhi tumne kamaal kar diyaa amit, jabardast ahsaah hai tumhaare dard kaa izhaar karte hue. bahut khoob.....................................
dil se dad kabool karna,yunhee likhate rehna.
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Hi Mahuaa Ji,

Main ye achhe se janta hoon ki mere dard par aap sirf wah...wah.. hi karengi aur yakeen maniye main bhi khuda se yahi dua karunga ki aapki ye wah wahi aur mera dard, dono kabhi khatam na ho.

ab apka kin shabdo mein shukriya ada karun...apki yahi duaye to jeene ka hausla deti hai...ummeed hai ki aap taumar mujhe yun hi khushiyan dete rahenge...chahe kuch bhi ho...or ha...jab tak aap hai...or main hun...iss zameen par...tab tak main bhi yahi dua karungi ki mujhe yun hi dhair sari khushiyan milti rahe...thnx a lot...




..♥♥..Mera Tumhara..kya Rishta hai..kuch bhi Nahi..
Agar kabhi..Gujarta dekho..kya Tum Mujhe..bulaoge..
Shayad Nahi..
Agar jo phir Hum..kabhi na Mile to..
Kya Tum yaad aaogoge..Nahi..
Kiuki..Tum Mere..koi Nahi..
Main janti hun..Magar..
Ho jab Mere koi Nahi..kiu lagte ho Mujhko Paraye nahi..
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bahut acha likha hai amit ji. dard ko bahut hi achi tarah se bayaan kiya hai aapne. dhua to yehi karenge k aap humesha khush rahe and haste rahe. daad hajir hai janab, kabul kijiye,

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ab apka kin shabdo mein shukriya ada karun...apki yahi duaye to jeene ka hausla deti hai...ummeed hai ki aap taumar mujhe yun hi khushiyan dete rahenge...chahe kuch bhi ho...or ha...jab tak aap hai...or main hun...iss zameen par...tab tak main bhi yahi dua karungi ki mujhe yun hi dhair sari khushiyan milti rahe...thnx a lot...
Hi Mahuaa Ji,

Mujhe nahin pata tha kio meri koi bhi baat kisi ko jeene ka hausla bhi de sakti hai par ab jab ye ho hi gaya hai, to main samjhoonga ki meri zindagi poori tarah se bekaar nahin gayi...


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Hi Mahuaa Ji,

Mujhe nahin pata tha kio meri koi bhi baat kisi ko jeene ka hausla bhi de sakti hai par ab jab ye ho hi gaya hai, to main samjhoonga ki meri zindagi poori tarah se bekaar nahin gayi...

hello Amit ji...

apki zindgi kabhi yun hi zaya ho hi nahi sakti...aisa apko lagta hoga...ki apki zindgi kisi ke kaam ki nahi...lekin shayad apko ye nahi pata ki har shakhsh ki zindgi kisi na kisi ke liye uski zindgi se bhi jiyada mayne rakhti hai...khair...
shukriya apka...ki apne mere liye duaye ki...

apna khyal rakhiye...




..♥♥..Mera Tumhara..kya Rishta hai..kuch bhi Nahi..
Agar kabhi..Gujarta dekho..kya Tum Mujhe..bulaoge..
Shayad Nahi..
Agar jo phir Hum..kabhi na Mile to..
Kya Tum yaad aaogoge..Nahi..
Kiuki..Tum Mere..koi Nahi..
Main janti hun..Magar..
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hamesha ki tarah is bar bhi tumne kamaal kar diyaa amit, jabardast ahsaah hai tumhaare dard kaa izhaar karte hue. bahut khoob.....................................
dil se dad kabool karna,yunhee likhate rehna.
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hamesha ki tarah is baar bhi mera saath dene ke liye tahe dil se shukriya dost. Milte rahna.


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hello Amit ji...

apki zindgi kabhi yun hi zaya ho hi nahi sakti...aisa apko lagta hoga...ki apki zindgi kisi ke kaam ki nahi...lekin shayad apko ye nahi pata ki har shakhsh ki zindgi kisi na kisi ke liye uski zindgi se bhi jiyada mayne rakhti hai...khair...
shukriya apka...ki apne mere liye duaye ki...

apna khyal rakhiye...
"Apna Khayal Rakhiye"

Kitne paraya lagte hain ye alfaaz aapke muh se.. Aapki isi nazakat par kaha hoon...

Subah Shaam meri Maut ki Ibadat karte Wali
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aapke alfazo me aapka dard chalkata hai aap bhaut hee acha likhte hai aapko padh kar bhaut accha laga khuda aapko sakun de

Hi Tanah Safar Ji,

Main aapke baare mein zyada to nahin janta par yahan aakar mujhe aur achha likhne ke liye prerit karne ke liye bahut bahut dhanyavaad..

Aapka dost...


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