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Ek bheegee see zindgee, MERI : haqiqat - 2nd February 2008, 02:57 PM

Maine kabhee sapne dekhe hee nahee
ankhon ko ansoo se fursat nahee milee

jab ummeed thee ki kisee ko chah loon
kisee kee hawas mujhe chootee rahtee
main pyar kis jagah rakhtee
main napak nazron ko bas dhotee rahee

jin se ummeed thee hifazat kee
wo shikaree kee soorat samne aate rahe
main kisee ke choomne ka intzar kya kartee
mere apne mujhe noch noch ke khate rahe

maine tab bhee kaheen se kisee tarah
muhabbat khud men kabhee ugayee thee
mujhe khabar nahee thee us lamaha
muhabbat mere liye parchayee thee

mera hath jise diya gaya wo pyar nahee tha
apnee duniya se nibhane me laga tha
mujhe muhabbat chhaiye thee
use pyar ka kuch bhee nahee pata tha

wo mujh se bekhabar raha har pal
aur meree kamayee men uljahta tha
main mazboor bhee thee doulat ke liye
wo mazbooree kahan samjhta tha

aise hee tanhayee ke khayalon main
maine atb kisee ke pyar ko mahsoos kiya
zindgee ne pahlee baar mujhe ko jaise
mera apana koyee ek lamha diya

un lamhon kee mahak liye aaj bhee jee rahee hoon
us musakn ko khila rahee hoon lab par
wahee ansoo pee rahee hoon
bas jee rahee hoon

par ab duna ke badalne ka aur chalan
dekha nahee jata
ane wale dino ka intzar nahee
beeta huya kal socha nahee jata

ab khud se poochtee hoon to jawab nahee milta
ye ansoo aur kitne din main peena chahtee hoon
mujhe khud bhee khabar nahee ai mere dosto
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Mujhe to samajh nahin aa raha ki aapki likhawat ki tarif kaise karu....2 good..aurat ki vedna ko bahut hi sahin shabdoN mein aapne dhala hain......aurat ka dusra naam hi to samjhota haiN.........bahut acchi lagi apki tehreer..Umeed hain aap agge bhi hume yunhi acchi acchi tehreer padhne ka mauka degi.......

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Maine kabhee sapne dekhe hee nahee
ankhon ko ansoo se fursat nahee milee

jab ummeed thee ki kisee ko chah loon
kisee kee hawas mujhe chootee rahtee
main pyar kis jagah rakhtee
main napak nazron ko bas dhotee rahee

jin se ummeed thee hifazat kee
wo shikaree kee soorat samne aate rahe
main kisee ke choomne ka intzar kya kartee
mere apne mujhe noch noch ke khate rahe

maine tab bhee kaheen se kisee tarah
muhabbat khud men kabhee ugayee thee
mujhe khabar nahee thee us lamaha
muhabbat mere liye parchayee thee

mera hath jise diya gaya wo pyar nahee tha
apnee duniya se nibhane me laga tha
mujhe muhabbat chhaiye thee
use pyar ka kuch bhee nahee pata tha

wo mujh se bekhabar raha har pal
aur meree kamayee men uljahta tha
main mazboor bhee thee doulat ke liye
wo mazbooree kahan samjhta tha

aise hee tanhayee ke khayalon main
maine atb kisee ke pyar ko mahsoos kiya
zindgee ne pahlee baar mujhe ko jaise
mera apana koyee ek lamha diya

un lamhon kee mahak liye aaj bhee jee rahee hoon
us musakn ko khila rahee hoon lab par
wahee ansoo pee rahee hoon
bas jee rahee hoon

par ab duna ke badalne ka aur chalan
dekha nahee jata
ane wale dino ka intzar nahee
beeta huya kal socha nahee jata

ab khud se poochtee hoon to jawab nahee milta
ye ansoo aur kitne din main peena chahtee hoon
mujhe khud bhee khabar nahee ai mere dosto
marna chahtee hoon ki jeena chahatee hoon
verry good dear bahut acha likha hai apne aur bhi aage likhte rahiye app yahi chahte hai hum.
pyar ko samaj na mushkil nahi hai
usko pana bahut hi aasan hai
per darte hai pyar karne se kyu ki sabse mushkil hai usko bhool pana


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2nd February 2008, 08:45 PM

Maine kabhee sapne dekhe hee nahee
ankhon ko ansoo se fursat nahee milee


jab ummeed thee ki kisee ko chah loon
kisee kee hawas mujhe chootee rahtee
main pyar kis jagah rakhtee
main napak nazron ko bas dhotee rahee

jin se ummeed thee hifazat kee
wo shikaree kee soorat samne aate rahe
main kisee ke choomne ka intzar kya kartee
mere apne mujhe noch noch ke khate rahe

maine tab bhee kaheen se kisee tarah
muhabbat khud men kabhee ugayee thee
mujhe khabar nahee thee us lamaha
muhabbat mere liye parchayee thee

Mere hatho ke mahakte hue nagmo pe mat ja, Mere seene mein kaye or gum bhi hai, Mere chehre par dikhawe ke tabsum hai, Magar meri ankho main Udass ke diye jalte hai. well nice, dil chu liya, hum jaise dil tute hue dosto per yeh ik merham ka kaam kary hai.


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Mujhe to samajh nahin aa raha ki aapki likhawat ki tarif kaise karu....2 good..aurat ki vedna ko bahut hi sahin shabdoN mein aapne dhala hain......aurat ka dusra naam hi to samjhota haiN.........bahut acchi lagi apki tehreer..Umeed hain aap agge bhi hume yunhi acchi acchi tehreer padhne ka mauka degi.......

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4th February 2008, 02:43 AM

Bahot gahraai se aapne apne jazbaato ko likha hai
Daad kubool kijiye...


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7th February 2008, 11:05 AM

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Post 7th February 2008, 06:55 PM

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Maine kabhee sapne dekhe hee nahee
ankhon ko ansoo se fursat nahee milee

jab ummeed thee ki kisee ko chah loon
kisee kee hawas mujhe chootee rahtee
main pyar kis jagah rakhtee
main napak nazron ko bas dhotee rahee

jin se ummeed thee hifazat kee
wo shikaree kee soorat samne aate rahe
main kisee ke choomne ka intzar kya kartee
mere apne mujhe noch noch ke khate rahe

maine tab bhee kaheen se kisee tarah
muhabbat khud men kabhee ugayee thee
mujhe khabar nahee thee us lamaha
muhabbat mere liye parchayee thee

mera hath jise diya gaya wo pyar nahee tha
apnee duniya se nibhane me laga tha
mujhe muhabbat chhaiye thee
use pyar ka kuch bhee nahee pata tha

wo mujh se bekhabar raha har pal
aur meree kamayee men uljahta tha
main mazboor bhee thee doulat ke liye
wo mazbooree kahan samjhta tha

aise hee tanhayee ke khayalon main
maine atb kisee ke pyar ko mahsoos kiya
zindgee ne pahlee baar mujhe ko jaise
mera apana koyee ek lamha diya

un lamhon kee mahak liye aaj bhee jee rahee hoon
us musakn ko khila rahee hoon lab par
wahee ansoo pee rahee hoon
bas jee rahee hoon

par ab duna ke badalne ka aur chalan
dekha nahee jata
ane wale dino ka intzar nahee
beeta huya kal socha nahee jata

ab khud se poochtee hoon to jawab nahee milta
ye ansoo aur kitne din main peena chahtee hoon
mujhe khud bhee khabar nahee ai mere dosto
marna chahtee hoon ki jeena chahatee hoon
SAPNA JI KO SHAAN KA SALAM,

Bahut khubsurti se aapne aapne ahsaas ko kalam band kiya hai or sabse jada to aapki ye line dil ko chu leti hain

ab khud se poochtee hoon to jawab nahee milta
ye ansoo aur kitne din main peena chahtee hoon
mujhe khud bhee khabar nahee ai mere dosto
marna chahtee hoon ki jeena chahatee hoon

Bas aap yun hi likhte rahe mujhe intezaar rahega

take care
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8th February 2008, 03:49 PM

great creation dear

Zindgi ko kaafi dard bhare sabdo main piroya hai...bt one qustion is in my heart thats wants to come infront of you. bt i know i hvnt any right to ask that.

nyways very very very very impressive


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13th February 2008, 04:48 PM

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Maine kabhee sapne dekhe hee nahee
ankhon ko ansoo se fursat nahee milee


jab ummeed thee ki kisee ko chah loon
kisee kee hawas mujhe chootee rahtee
main pyar kis jagah rakhtee
main napak nazron ko bas dhotee rahee

jin se ummeed thee hifazat kee
wo shikaree kee soorat samne aate rahe
main kisee ke choomne ka intzar kya kartee
mere apne mujhe noch noch ke khate rahe

maine tab bhee kaheen se kisee tarah
muhabbat khud men kabhee ugayee thee
mujhe khabar nahee thee us lamaha
muhabbat mere liye parchayee thee

Mere hatho ke mahakte hue nagmo pe mat ja, Mere seene mein kaye or gum bhi hai, Mere chehre par dikhawe ke tabsum hai, Magar meri ankho main Udass ke diye jalte hai. well nice, dil chu liya, hum jaise dil tute hue dosto per yeh ik merham ka kaam kary hai.
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15th February 2008, 03:59 PM

speechless.................aapke ahsaaso.n ko padkar aankhe bhar aaye..........kaya kahun kuch samaj nahi aa raha....bas dua kar sakti hoon ki bhagwaan aapko kushiya.n de, man ki shanti de.

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great creation dear

Zindgi ko kaafi dard bhare sabdo main piroya hai...bt one qustion is in my heart thats wants to come infront of you. bt i know i hvnt any right to ask that.

nyways very very very very impressive
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Maine kabhee sapne dekhe hee nahee
ankhon ko ansoo se fursat nahee milee

jab ummeed thee ki kisee ko chah loon
kisee kee hawas mujhe chootee rahtee
main pyar kis jagah rakhtee
main napak nazron ko bas dhotee rahee

jin se ummeed thee hifazat kee
wo shikaree kee soorat samne aate rahe
main kisee ke choomne ka intzar kya kartee
mere apne mujhe noch noch ke khate rahe

maine tab bhee kaheen se kisee tarah
muhabbat khud men kabhee ugayee thee
mujhe khabar nahee thee us lamaha
muhabbat mere liye parchayee thee

mera hath jise diya gaya wo pyar nahee tha
apnee duniya se nibhane me laga tha
mujhe muhabbat chhaiye thee
use pyar ka kuch bhee nahee pata tha

wo mujh se bekhabar raha har pal
aur meree kamayee men uljahta tha
main mazboor bhee thee doulat ke liye
wo mazbooree kahan samjhta tha

aise hee tanhayee ke khayalon main
maine atb kisee ke pyar ko mahsoos kiya
zindgee ne pahlee baar mujhe ko jaise
mera apana koyee ek lamha diya

un lamhon kee mahak liye aaj bhee jee rahee hoon
us musakn ko khila rahee hoon lab par
wahee ansoo pee rahee hoon
bas jee rahee hoon

par ab duna ke badalne ka aur chalan
dekha nahee jata
ane wale dino ka intzar nahee
beeta huya kal socha nahee jata

ab khud se poochtee hoon to jawab nahee milta
ye ansoo aur kitne din main peena chahtee hoon
mujhe khud bhee khabar nahee ai mere dosto
marna chahtee hoon ki jeena chahatee hoon
Bahut khoob sapna ji...
bas yun hi likhti rahe
ab khud se poochtee hoon to jawab nahee milta
ye ansoo aur kitne din main peena chahtee hoon
mujhe khud bhee khabar nahee ai mere dosto
marna chahtee hoon ki jeena chahatee hoon

very nice
mujhe aage be intezaar rahega
take care
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kya likha hai????? - 19th February 2008, 11:44 AM

kya likha hai apne sapna ji?
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Maine kabhee sapne dekhe hee nahee
ankhon ko ansoo se fursat nahee milee

jab ummeed thee ki kisee ko chah loon
kisee kee hawas mujhe chootee rahtee
main pyar kis jagah rakhtee
main napak nazron ko bas dhotee rahee

jin se ummeed thee hifazat kee
wo shikaree kee soorat samne aate rahe
main kisee ke choomne ka intzar kya kartee
mere apne mujhe noch noch ke khate rahe

maine tab bhee kaheen se kisee tarah
muhabbat khud men kabhee ugayee thee
mujhe khabar nahee thee us lamaha
muhabbat mere liye parchayee thee

mera hath jise diya gaya wo pyar nahee tha
apnee duniya se nibhane me laga tha
mujhe muhabbat chhaiye thee
use pyar ka kuch bhee nahee pata tha

wo mujh se bekhabar raha har pal
aur meree kamayee men uljahta tha
main mazboor bhee thee doulat ke liye
wo mazbooree kahan samjhta tha

aise hee tanhayee ke khayalon main
maine atb kisee ke pyar ko mahsoos kiya
zindgee ne pahlee baar mujhe ko jaise
mera apana koyee ek lamha diya

un lamhon kee mahak liye aaj bhee jee rahee hoon
us musakn ko khila rahee hoon lab par
wahee ansoo pee rahee hoon
bas jee rahee hoon

par ab duna ke badalne ka aur chalan
dekha nahee jata
ane wale dino ka intzar nahee
beeta huya kal socha nahee jata

ab khud se poochtee hoon to jawab nahee milta
ye ansoo aur kitne din main peena chahtee hoon
mujhe khud bhee khabar nahee ai mere dosto
marna chahtee hoon ki jeena chahatee hoon
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Zindgi ko kaafi dard bhare sabdo main piroya hai...bt one qustion is in my heart thats wants to come infront of you. bt i know i hvnt any right to ask that.

nyways very very very very impressive

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19th February 2008, 04:36 PM

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Bahut khoob sapna ji...
bas yun hi likhti rahe
ab khud se poochtee hoon to jawab nahee milta
ye ansoo aur kitne din main peena chahtee hoon
mujhe khud bhee khabar nahee ai mere dosto
marna chahtee hoon ki jeena chahatee hoon

very nice
mujhe aage be intezaar rahega
take care
SHAAN

thanks shaaaaaaaaan
   
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22nd February 2008, 07:26 PM

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Taru didi:

aapkii yeH rachnaa dil par geHraa asar kar gaYii.. bas YuuNhi liKhate rahiYe..!

KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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23rd February 2008, 01:12 AM

Sapna ji....bahut khub.....par ek gustakhi karna chahata hu..... har shabd me ek samvedna chhipi hoti hai..... agar un samvednao ki parchhayi nazar aa jaye.... to samvednao ki ahmiyat badh jati hai..... aapke shabdo me bhi samvednayein hain...... unhe ubharne ki koshish kijiega.....gustakhi ke liye muafi chahata hu..... likhte rahiye.....thx...
   
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23rd February 2008, 08:06 PM

dilo ke khail hai ye kitne nirale
jise ye chaye wahi us e tod dale
ye dard aaj hum ko fir se sataye
jise hum chaye wahi bhool jaye


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