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Exclamation Meri maa ne bheja hai mujhe tilak laga kar...! - 8th December 2009, 02:54 AM

Dosto Namaskar...!
Ek nayee koshish lekar aapke saamne aaya hooN, Umm'eed hai ki aapko achhi lagegi....
Apni mulyawan tippaniyoN se iss ka aanklan avashya kijiyega.....



Maine dekha tha kal sham tujhe phir se rote hue...
Apne gehre zakhmo ko phir namak ke pani se dhote hue...
Kya lagata hai tujhe ke maiN kuch nahi janta...
Tere masoom chehre par bani inn lakeeroN ko nahi pehchanta...
Teri chhati se uttare doodh ko piya hai maine...
Har pal jab tu mari, woh har pal tere saath jiya hai maine...
Yaha'n khada hooN iss chalte toofaaN ke beech...
Tune hi to kaha tha ke inn paudhoN ko apne lahu se seeNch...
Phir bhi nahiN pata ke Kya main kar paunga...
Bas yehi maloom hai ki beta hooN tera aur yahiN mar jaunga...
Meri bhi to maa ne hi bheja hai mujhko tilak lagakar...
Jate hue ko boli thi wapis mat aana Yaha'n peeth dikhakar...
HaaN main dekh raha hooN ki woh badhe aa rahe haiN...
Unki raftar hi aisi hai ki mere naate sab bichhadte jaa rehe haiN...
Achha maa dekh zara mujhe ab farz bula raha hai...
Khoon ka yeh kaisa daura hai jo ubalta hi Jaa raha hai...
Teri aankhoN ke aaNsu to shayad main na paunch sakuNga...
Lekin agar main aaj nahi katta to apne ghar bhi to nahi jaa sakunga...
maa bas meri maa se kehna ki tera beta lauta nahi...
Ab bhi sarhad pe hi pada hai bulati hooN to bolta nahi...
Kehna ke woh bilkul nahi dara na hi mujhe **** ke bhaga...
Lad-lad ke mara hai humara beta, fauji tha na ke abhaga...
HaaN logo dekho tum bhi mujhe Shaheed hi bulana...
Iss maa ki khatir manzur hai pade jo har ek maa ko rulana...!


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Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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Exclamation 8th December 2009, 05:50 PM

मैंने देखा था कल शाम तुझे फिर से रोते हुए...
अपने गहरे ज़ख्मों को फिर नमक के पानी से धोते हुए...!

क्या लगता है के मैं कुछ नहीं जनता...
तेरे मासूम चेहरे पर बनी इन लकीरों को नहीं पहचानता...!

तेरी छाती से उतरे दूध को पिया है मैंने...
हर पल जब तू मरी वो हर पल तेरे साथ जिया है मैंने...!

यहाँ खड़ा हूँ इस चलते तूफ़ान के बीच...
तुने ही तो कहा था की इन पौधों को लहू से सींच...!

फिर भी पता नहीं के क्या मैं कर पाउँगा...
बस येही मालूम है की बेटा हूँ तेरा और यहीं मर जाऊंगा...!

मेरी भी तो माँ ने ही भेजा है मुझको तिलक लगा कर...
जाते हुए को बोली थी वापिस मत आना यहाँ पीठ दिखाकर...!

हाँ मैं देख रहा हूँ की वो बढे आ रहे हैं...
उनकी रफ़्तार ही ऐसी है की मेरे नाते सब बिछड़ते जा रहे हैं...!

अच्छा माँ देख मुझे अब फ़र्ज़ बुला रहा है...
खून का यह कैसा दौरा है उबलता ही जा रहा है...!

तेरी आँखों के आंसू तो शायद मैं न पोंछ सकूँगा...
लेकिन आज अगर मैं नहीं कट्टा तो अपने घर भी तो नहीं जा सकूँगा...!

माँ बस मेरी माँ से कहना की तेरा बेटा लौटा नहीं...
अब भी सरहद पे ही पड़ा है बुलाती हूँ तो बोलता ही नहीं...!

कहना की वो बिलकुल नहीं डरा और मुझे छोड़ कर नहीं भागा...
लड़ लड़ के मरा है हमारा बेटा फौजी था न के अभागा...!

हाँ लोगो तुम भी मुझे शहीद ही बुलाना...
इस माँ की खातिर मंज़ूर है पड़े जो हर इक माँ को रुलाना...!


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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8th December 2009, 06:47 PM

bhai,

aaj jo nazm aapne pesh ki hai..vo mujhe khaas pasand aayi.....aapke zazbato ne dil me ek ajeeb si 'tees' paida ki hai......is baar baar phadne ko jee chaha raha hai.....isme koi shaq nahi ki yeh ek visesh rachna hai.....
meri shubhkamanye to hamesh aapke saath hai aapko gale lagane ka bhi talabgar hu.
Khayal apna pura rakhe....
aapka apna


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bhai,

aaj jo nazm aapne pesh ki hai..vo mujhe khaas pasand aayi.....aapke zazbato ne dil me ek ajeeb si 'tees' paida ki hai......is baar baar phadne ko jee chaha raha hai.....isme koi shaq nahi ki yeh ek visesh rachna hai.....
meri shubhkamanye to hamesh aapke saath hai aapko gale lagane ka bhi talabgar hu.
Khayal apna pura rakhe....
aapka apna
Amit bhai,
Aapne aaj jo bateN boli haiN wo shayad se meri puri Zindagi ki kamayee hai....
Shukriya kar iss bandhan se muqt nahi hona chahta....issliye bilkul bhi Shukriya nahi kahunga, aur ye karz apne saath hi lekar jaunga.....asal baat to yeh bhi hai ki aap aur Kuch aapke jaise dost hi haiN jinko main dil se chahta hooN ke woh mera likha zaroor zaroor padheN aur bejijhak likheN unhe jo mehsoos hua....bahut sukoon milta hai...baat tareef se uth kar bahut duur ki hai...aur main janta hooN ki aap samjhe honge.....jab dil mila ho to gale milne meiN Kya waqt lagta hai.....baheN hamesha khuli haiN.....
Aapse to yeh bhi nahi keh sakta ki aate raheN....kisi din jo nahi aaye to Khud khench ke le aaunga

Aapka.....


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8th December 2009, 07:39 PM

samajh meiN nahi aarahi hai ....tareef karoon ya mehsush karoon us dard ko jo is kalam mein hai ..?
maa keliye pyaar aur matrubhumi keliye farz .......
Sach meiN padhkar aankhoN meiN aansoo aagaye

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khus rahiye
Youn hi kavita likhte rahiye

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samajh meiN nahi aarahi hai ....tareef karoon ya mehsush karoon us dard ko jo is kalam mein hai ..?
maa keliye pyaar aur matrubhumi keliye farz .......
Sach meiN padhkar aankhoN meiN aansoo aagaye

vikram jee
jab mujhe alfaz mil jayegi mein dubara yahan reply dene aaungi

khus rahiye
Youn hi kavita likhte rahiye

Diya
Diya jii,

Bahut zyada izzat de di......aapka bahut bahut Shukriya......aap jaise mehrbaaN dost aate rahenge to aage bhi Kuch achha likhne ki Umm'eed Khud meiN bhi barkaraar rahegi.....

Bahut bahut Shukriya...

Aapka dost
Vikram


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Dosto Namaskar...!
Ek nayee koshish lekar aapke saamne aaya hooN, Umm'eed hai ki aapko achhi lagegi....
Apni mulyawan tippaniyoN se iss ka aanklan avashya kijiyega.....



Maine dekha tha kal sham tujhe phir se rote hue...
Apne gehre zakhmo ko phir namak ke pani se dhote hue...
Kya lagata hai tujhe ke maiN kuch nahi janta...
Tere masoom chehre par bani inn lakeeroN ko nahi pehchanta...
Teri chhati se uttare doodh ko piya hai maine...
Har pal jab tu mari, woh har pal tere saath jiya hai maine...
Yaha'n khada hooN iss chalte toofaaN ke beech...
Tune hi to kaha tha ke inn paudhoN ko apne lahu se seeNch...
Phir bhi nahiN pata ke Kya main kar paunga...
Bas yehi maloom hai ki beta hooN tera aur yahiN mar jaunga...
Meri bhi to maa ne hi bheja hai mujhko tilak lagakar...
Jate hue ko boli thi wapis mat aana Yaha'n peeth dikhakar...
HaaN main dekh raha hooN ki woh badhe aa rahe haiN...
Unki raftar hi aisi hai ki mere naate sab bichhadte jaa rehe haiN...
Achha maa dekh zara mujhe ab farz bula raha hai...
Khoon ka yeh kaisa daura hai jo ubalta hi Jaa raha hai...
Teri aankhoN ke aaNsu to shayad main na paunch sakuNga...
Lekin agar main aaj nahi katta to apne ghar bhi to nahi jaa sakunga...
maa bas meri maa se kehna ki tera beta lauta nahi...
Ab bhi sarhad pe hi pada hai bulati hooN to bolta nahi...
Kehna ke woh bilkul nahi dara na hi mujhe **** ke bhaga...
Lad-lad ke mara hai humara beta, fauji tha na ke abhaga...
HaaN logo dekho tum bhi mujhe Shaheed hi bulana...
Iss maa ki khatir manzur hai pade jo har ek maa ko rulana...!

Vikram,
Aap ne dil ko chuu liya. Yathaarth to ye hai ke aaj ki maayeN apne shuurviroN ko sarhad par nahi, balki sarhad paar (foriegn) bhejne ko lalayit rehti haiN. Tilak ke jagah green card sushobhit hota hai. Un sabhi maaoN ke liye nimnlikhit panktiyaaN merii bheNt hai.

Aur royeNgii bhi nahi shayad shahiidoN ki maayeN
Is maa ne paida kiye haiN unginat viraaNgnaayeN
Unhipe to jazba-e-watan parastii vaabasta hai humaari
Dhanya ho bharat mata aur naman tujhe Bharat ki nari

Garv hai mujhey ke mere baad bhi aap jaisoN ki kami nahii hogi aur maa mehfuz, baa-izzat sar uuNcha kiye vishwa meiN Tiranga lehraayegi. Aapki kavita meiN bina aap ki anumati ke likha iske liye khsamaprarthi huuN. Magar rok nahi saka khud ko.

Ati Uttam.
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Vikram,
Aap ne dil ko chuu liya. Yathaarth to ye hai ke aaj ki maayeN apne shuurviroN ko sarhad par nahi, balki sarhad paar (foriegn) bhejne ko lalayit rehti haiN. Tilak ke jagah green card sushobhit hota hai. Un sabhi maaoN ke liye nimnlikhit panktiyaaN merii bheNt hai.

Aur royeNgii bhi nahi shayad shahiidoN ki maayeN
Is maa ne paida kiye haiN unginat viraaNgnaayeN
Unhipe to jazba-e-watan parastii vaabasta hai humaari
Dhanya ho bharat mata aur naman tujhe Bharat ki nari

Garv hai mujhey ke mere baad bhi aap jaisoN ki kami nahii hogi aur maa mehfuz, baa-izzat sar uuNcha kiye vishwa meiN Tiranga lehraayegi. Aapki kavita meiN bina aap ki anumati ke likha iske liye khsamaprarthi huuN. Magar rok nahi saka khud ko.

Ati Uttam.
Vijaii Bhavo
Naadaan

Naadaan saheb,
Aapko apne thread pe khaas issi kavish ke liye bulana aur aap ka yahan aana dono hi mere liye bade izzat ki baat haiN.
Is kavita mein kafi trutiyaN hain lekin yeh apne ek dost ki baat zehan mein rakh kar likha tha, aur khud fauji nahi hu to shayad bilkul sahi ehsaas bhi na aaye honge....lekin yeh sirf jo pehli baar mein likha gaya tha wo likha hai....without editing.....agar aap ko achhi lagi to mujhe laga meri koshish kuch to safal hui hogi.....
Aap aaye to achha laga, aakar kuch likha bhi mere thread par bahut bahut achha laga....
Shukriya Naadaan saheb.

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bahut khoob.... dil chhu gaye aapke ye ehsaas... u actually made me cry...meri aankho ki nami is baat ka saboot hai ki aapki ye rachna baaki saari rachnao se alag aur aala hai.... yuhi likhte rahiyega.... khush rahiye.....


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maa bas meri maa se kehna ki tera beta lauta nahi...
Ab bhi sarhad pe hi pada hai bulati hooN to bolta nahi...
Kehna ke woh bilkul nahi dara na hi mujhe **** ke bhaga...
Lad-lad ke mara hai humara beta, fauji tha na ke abhaga...
HaaN logo dekho tum bhi mujhe Shaheed hi bulana...
Iss maa ki khatir manzur hai pade jo har ek maa ko rulana...!

vikram bhayee

hugss to u ...
jiyo mere bhayee jiyo

i dont have word except emotion
and i m unable to express them

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vikram ji daad nahi vadhai doonga aapko.aisi rachna padne ke baad wah wah karna uchit nahi hai, kyoki aankh bhar jaane ke baad kuch bolna......sambhav nahi.vadhai is liay aap ne apne andhar ke fouji ko pehchana usay jagaya aur apni kalm k raste kagaz pe sazaya.HATS OFF.
   
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maa bas meri maa se kehna ki tera beta lauta nahi...
Ab bhi sarhad pe hi pada hai bulati hooN to bolta nahi...
Kehna ke woh bilkul nahi dara na hi mujhe **** ke bhaga...
Lad-lad ke mara hai humara beta, fauji tha na ke abhaga...
HaaN logo dekho tum bhi mujhe Shaheed hi bulana...
Iss maa ki khatir manzur hai pade jo har ek maa ko rulana...!

vikram bhayee

hugss to u ...
jiyo mere bhayee jiyo

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Janumanu bhai,
Hugs to you too....aapne jis dil se tareef ki hai, mujhe bahut pasand aayee.....bahut bahut Shukriya ki aapne meri yeh koshish padhi aur tareef ki.....waise bhi maine aapko iss section meiN na ke barbara hi dekha hai....issliye zyada achha laga...

Aapki nazmeN padh ke to achha lagta hi hai, aapne 'Ghazal of the Month' meiN Jis tarha se GhazaloN ko analyse kiya hai, uss se to aapne hume apna fan hi bana liya...mere jaise vote dene waloN ko jinko abhi
Itna tazarba nahi, unke liye vote karna asaan ho gaya hai...bahut pasand aaya hme aapka yeh andaaz...

Aapka apna...
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vikram ji daad nahi vadhai doonga aapko.aisi rachna padne ke baad wah wah karna uchit nahi hai, kyoki aankh bhar jaane ke baad kuch bolna......sambhav nahi.vadhai is liay aap ne apne andhar ke fouji ko pehchana usay jagaya aur apni kalm k raste kagaz pe sazaya.HATS OFF.
Seep ji,
kaise haiN aap?
aapka bahut bahut shukriya...jo aapni itni izzat di mujhe.....
mujhe khushi hai ki aap ko meri rachna pasand aayee....
aapka reply padh kar lagta hai ki aapne isse padha hi nahi balki mehsoos kiya hai....

aapka bahut bahut shukriya....

aate rahiye..achha lagta hai....

Take Care...
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Pata kya vikram ji, maine ab tak shayad he kisi ko reputation points diye ho, par aaj aapki ye rachna padh k mera mann kiya k mai aapko reputation points diye chala jaau diye chala jaau diye chala jaau, par ek he baar de paya, dusri baar sdc ne accept he ni ki..

btw meri is thread pe aane wale sabhi vyaktiyo se prarthna hai k apne moolyawaan samay se kuch pal Vikram ji ko khyati ank ( reputation points ) pradaan karke mujhe aur Vikram ji ko kritarth karen... Dhanywaad ...
   
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Pata kya vikram ji, maine ab tak shayad he kisi ko reputation points diye ho, par aaj aapki ye rachna padh k mera mann kiya k mai aapko reputation points diye chala jaau diye chala jaau diye chala jaau, par ek he baar de paya, dusri baar sdc ne accept he ni ki..

btw meri is thread pe aane wale sabhi vyaktiyo se prarthna hai k apne moolyawaan samay se kuch pal Vikram ji ko khyati ank ( reputation points ) pradaan karke mujhe aur Vikram ji ko kritarth karen... Dhanywaad ...
Raj bhai,
Aap to waqi meiN rulane wali baat likh gaye.....kya kahuN aapko samjh meiN nahi aata....lekin ek baat zaroor kahunga ke mere sabse bade reputation points aapke yeh alfaaz haiN....Iske baad yeh banda kisi se Kuch mangna nahi chahta.....aur koi de bhi to unka mulya mere liye inn pankatiyoN se zyada nahi ho sakta....
Baat yeh nahi hai ki aapne meri likhi kavita ke baare likha hai baat yeh hai ki kis kavita ke liye likha hai....kai aur achhe dostoN ki tarha Shukriya aapko bhi nahi kahunga, Wahi baat hai ki Shukriya keh ke iss badhan se chhutna nahi chahta.. Bhagwaan aapko Khush rakhe....aur samjh nahi aata....lekin raha ke Kya likhuN...theek hai bas chalta hooN....

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buland bhai,
kosish meri bhi yehi thi....par kisi karan vash sdc valo ne mujhe bhi apna abhar ka ijihaar karne nahi diya......khair, kisi aur mookam par aur kisi aur samay yeh karz zaroor utarunga.....mods se bhi mera vinamra anurodh hai ki yeh glitches ko hamari is pyari site se jald hi door bhagaye, aur hame apne vichaar prakat karne ki sampoorn azadi de.....
bhai.....hame maloom hai ki aapko in sab cheezo se koi vishesh lagav nahi, aap apna kaam kare aur hume aisi rachnao se baar baar rubaru karvaye....

hamari hardik shubkamnaye,


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11th December 2009, 09:53 PM

aapki yeh kavita bahut hi pasad aayi,
reading it a mother can only smile with tears in her eyes
or
cry with a smile on her lips.
thanks for sharing this poem.


best regards

aarya.


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inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii

lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii

ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii


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Thanks Aaya jii,

Maybe you can understand that how I might I have felt, when I found that the comment is from a mother....

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reading it a mother can only smile with tears in her eyes
or
cry with a smile on her lips.
thanks for sharing this poem.


best regards

aarya.
What more can I ask....???
Thanks for reading this poem and thanks for your comments, directly from your heart....
Thanks once again....

Vikram...


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Hi Vikram Ji....
Very Nice Poem Loved It Alot
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Hi Vikram Ji....
Very Nice Poem Loved It Alot
AlkaVikramYadav jii,
Aapka bahut bahut Shukriya humari kavita pasand karne ke liye.....
Aage bhi aati rahiye......

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Dosto Namaskar...!
Ek nayee koshish lekar aapke saamne aaya hooN, Umm'eed hai ki aapko achhi lagegi....
Apni mulyawan tippaniyoN se iss ka aanklan avashya kijiyega.....



Maine dekha tha kal sham tujhe phir se rote hue...
Apne gehre zakhmo ko phir namak ke pani se dhote hue...
Kya lagata hai tujhe ke maiN kuch nahi janta...
Tere masoom chehre par bani inn lakeeroN ko nahi pehchanta...
Teri chhati se uttare doodh ko piya hai maine...
Har pal jab tu mari, woh har pal tere saath jiya hai maine...
Yaha'n khada hooN iss chalte toofaaN ke beech...
Tune hi to kaha tha ke inn paudhoN ko apne lahu se seeNch...
Phir bhi nahiN pata ke Kya main kar paunga...
Bas yehi maloom hai ki beta hooN tera aur yahiN mar jaunga...
Meri bhi to maa ne hi bheja hai mujhko tilak lagakar...
Jate hue ko boli thi wapis mat aana Yaha'n peeth dikhakar...
HaaN main dekh raha hooN ki woh badhe aa rahe haiN...
Unki raftar hi aisi hai ki mere naate sab bichhadte jaa rehe haiN...
Achha maa dekh zara mujhe ab farz bula raha hai...
Khoon ka yeh kaisa daura hai jo ubalta hi Jaa raha hai...
Teri aankhoN ke aaNsu to shayad main na paunch sakuNga...
Lekin agar main aaj nahi katta to apne ghar bhi to nahi jaa sakunga...
maa bas meri maa se kehna ki tera beta lauta nahi...
Ab bhi sarhad pe hi pada hai bulati hooN to bolta nahi...
Kehna ke woh bilkul nahi dara na hi mujhe **** ke bhaga...
Lad-lad ke mara hai humara beta, fauji tha na ke abhaga...
HaaN logo dekho tum bhi mujhe Shaheed hi bulana...
Iss maa ki khatir manzur hai pade jo har ek maa ko rulana...!
Vikram jii,
Maine aap ki is kavita ko kai baar padha hai lekin abhi bhi dil nahi bharta lagta hai aur ek baar padh lu, achhi kavita likhi hai aapne.

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veer ras aur karun ras se oatprot yeh kavita kisi ki ke dimang ko hi nahi aatma ko hila dene wali hai.. kahte hai jahan prashansha ke bol samapt ho jate hai wahan maoun ka avtaran hota hai...........vikram bhai....... tumhari yeh kavita padhne ke bad meri vani kuch der ke liye maoun ho gayi........desh prem ki yah rachna atulniya hai.........koti.koti shubhkamnye........
aapka..........anjana prem
"vani ko tere ganga si dhar mile,shabdo ko tere kuber ka bhandar mile."


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Vikram jii,
Maine aap ki is kavita ko kai baar padha hai lekin abhi bhi dil nahi bharta lagta hai aur ek baar padh lu, achhi kavita likhi hai aapne.

all the best

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Vibhuti jii....
Kaisi haiN aap...?
aapne kavita padhi aur usse saraha....bahut achha laga....
aapka bahut bahut shukriya....

aapka dost,
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veer ras aur karun ras se oatprot yeh kavita kisi ki ke dimang ko hi nahi aatma ko hila dene wali hai.. kahte hai jahan prashansha ke bol samapt ho jate hai wahan maoun ka avtaran hota hai...........vikram bhai....... tumhari yeh kavita padhne ke bad meri vani kuch der ke liye maoun ho gayi........desh prem ki yah rachna atulniya hai.........koti.koti shubhkamnye........
aapka..........anjana prem
"vani ko tere ganga si dhar mile,shabdo ko tere kuber ka bhandar mile."
Prem jii....
aapne apna qimati waqt nikal meri iss kavita ko padha, aapka bahut bahut shukriya....
aapne to aisi dua kar di jis ki har likhne wale ko chah rehti hai....bahut bahut shukriya mere dost.....aate raheN aur saath banaye rakheN.....

aapka dost,
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Vikram Jee Aadaab...............

Bhai yeh gazab ki rachna hai aapki behad khoob aur sachche man ki, matrubhumi ka prem aur shurveer ki gatha behad maram sparsh kar gayi hryaday ko, palken nam kar gayi aapki yeh kavita aur iski tarif main main aapse yehi kahunga ke aapke lekhani ki yeh sabse badiyaa shuruaat lagi, yeh aapki rachna aapke bhavishya mein bhi aapki pervi karengi, dil se aabhar adaa karna chaunga aapki is peshkash ka.........

Likhate rhaiye, aise hi apne vicharon ko bantte rahiye, khush rhaiye...........


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Vikram Jee Aadaab...............

Bhai yeh gazab ki rachna hai aapki behad khoob aur sachche man ki, matrubhumi ka prem aur shurveer ki gatha behad maram sparsh kar gayi hryaday ko, palken nam kar gayi aapki yeh kavita aur iski tarif main main aapse yehi kahunga ke aapke lekhani ki yeh sabse badiyaa shuruaat lagi, yeh aapki rachna aapke bhavishya mein bhi aapki pervi karengi, dil se aabhar adaa karna chaunga aapki is peshkash ka.........

Likhate rhaiye, aise hi apne vicharon ko bantte rahiye, khush rhaiye...........
Aadaab Khwahish bhai....
Aapne to itni tareef kar dee ke mere paas aapko Shukriya kehne ke liye bhi alfaaz nahi haiN....mujhe bahut achha laga jo aapne is kavita ko padha....
Bahut bahut Shukriya....

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Dosto Namaskar...!
Ek nayee koshish lekar aapke saamne aaya hooN, Umm'eed hai ki aapko achhi lagegi....
Apni mulyawan tippaniyoN se iss ka aanklan avashya kijiyega.....



Maine dekha tha kal sham tujhe phir se rote hue...
Apne gehre zakhmo ko phir namak ke pani se dhote hue...
Kya lagata hai tujhe ke maiN kuch nahi janta...
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Khoon ka yeh kaisa daura hai jo ubalta hi Jaa raha hai...
Teri aankhoN ke aaNsu to shayad main na paunch sakuNga...
Lekin agar main aaj nahi katta to apne ghar bhi to nahi jaa sakunga...
maa bas meri maa se kehna ki tera beta lauta nahi...
Ab bhi sarhad pe hi pada hai bulati hooN to bolta nahi...
Kehna ke woh bilkul nahi dara na hi mujhe **** ke bhaga...
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kya likha hai vikram ji
aansu nahi ruk rahe hai kasam se
bahut achi
bahut achi........

dusri bhi bhaut aachi hai.....
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kya likha hai vikram ji
aansu nahi ruk rahe hai kasam se
bahut achi
bahut achi........

dusri bhi bhaut aachi hai.....
bas yu hi likhte rehana
apna khyal rakna

aap ka dost
atul
atul saheb aapka bahut bahut dhanyavaaad, der se jawaab dene ke liye maaf kijiyega....


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Kya kahu mere bhai i am just "SPEECHLESS"

Kuch cheeze hoti hai jo tareef ki had se baher hoti hai.........


Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...

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Kya kahu mere bhai i am just "SPEECHLESS"

Kuch cheeze hoti hai jo tareef ki had se baher hoti hai.........
sajid bhai.....maiN samjh sakta hooN, aapki khamoshi hi sab byaaN kar rahi hai....aur aisi khamosh daad ke liye hi tarasta hooN....shayad har likhne wala tarasta hoga....bhai aapka bahut bahut shukriya ki aapne i'se padha...


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मैंने देखा था कल शाम तुझे फिर से रोते हुए...
अपने गहरे ज़ख्मों को फिर नमक के पानी से धोते हुए...!

क्या लगता है के मैं कुछ नहीं जनता...
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तेरी छाती से उतरे दूध को पिया है मैंने...
हर पल जब तू मरी वो हर पल तेरे साथ जिया है मैंने...!

यहाँ खड़ा हूँ इस चलते तूफ़ान के बीच...
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फिर भी पता नहीं के क्या मैं कर पाउँगा...
बस येही मालूम है की बेटा हूँ तेरा और यहीं मर जाऊंगा...!

मेरी भी तो माँ ने ही भेजा है मुझको तिलक लगा कर...
जाते हुए को बोली थी वापिस मत आना यहाँ पीठ दिखाकर...!

हाँ मैं देख रहा हूँ की वो बढे आ रहे हैं...
उनकी रफ़्तार ही ऐसी है की मेरे नाते सब बिछड़ते जा रहे हैं...!

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Vikram ji namskaar............
aapki ye koshish acchi hi nahi balki bahut bahut bahut acchi lagi
sach aesa lagta hai ki aapne dil ki baat likh di ho
yakin maniye maine aesi koshish abhi tak nahi dekhi lakin aaj dekhne ko mili hai
khash karke aapke liye 10/10
maa sarswati aap par aese hi kirpa banaye rakhe
all the best


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Vikram ji namskaar............
aapki ye koshish acchi hi nahi balki bahut bahut bahut acchi lagi
sach aesa lagta hai ki aapne dil ki baat likh di ho
yakin maniye maine aesi koshish abhi tak nahi dekhi lakin aaj dekhne ko mili hai
khash karke aapke liye 10/10
maa sarswati aap par aese hi kirpa banaye rakhe
all the best
namaskaar rajeev bhai...
kaise haiN aap...?
aapko meri koshish achhi lagi....to likhna safal raha bhai....
aapne jo izzat di hai uske liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya...
aapke 10/10 mujhe ta_umr yaad rahenge.....bahut bahut shukriya rajeev jii....


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