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Love bansuria - 16th July 2003, 03:34 PM

Bansuri ki awaaz sunke main nikla
woh madhur sur kisi aashik ka hai
woh awaaz thi dard bhari
kheton mein bhi havaein dheere chali

Is nazar ko talaash hai us aashik ka
suN.ne ko bus awaaz hai uska
milte hi usko kahoonga
ek udaas sur pesh hai is dil ka.

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Thumbs up nice sher - 16th July 2003, 04:29 PM

wah roumiji,

its my first time in this site. liked your shayari very much. will check out others too.
   
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Thank You - 16th July 2003, 04:32 PM

thanks a lot, shayji, mera hausala bhadate rehna...Thanks
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Likna Khoob - 16th July 2003, 04:44 PM

shayari vahi hai jo dil se nikale, very gd, like it, write write write
   
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16th July 2003, 04:47 PM

Thank u Mr.janemaneji, will try to get better ones next time, take care...........Thanks for the appreciation!!
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Re: bansuria - 16th July 2003, 04:54 PM

hi roumi ji
acha likha hai saral aur madhur.bahoot ache keep it up.
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16th July 2003, 05:37 PM

Dear manoj ji,

Shukria, aapke hauslafzaii se hi hum is kaabil hai!!

Thanks once again
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